Definitely a HIT!! I have been stalking this board waiting for another update to this story!!
I was sad to see that they broke up, but Tina did the right thing...Chris is WAY to dysfunctional and she needs to think of her baby! I hope that she continues to be around Mya...that poor baby has been through so much and she is only 3 years old!
I am hoping she doesn't go off with Lloyd...to me he is just as psychotic and controlling as Chris, he just doesn't have the power to back it up! I think she truly needs some time alone to find out who she is!!
I loved it and hope the continuation comes soon!!!
Author's Response: thanks girl. I promise to update real soon. Reviewer: Redbird Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/01/09 05:49 am
really great chapter! hurry up with the next one!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/01/09 07:04 pm
This is officially my story. Girl you got skills. My only complaint is do you have to leave us hanging like that? I mean really! It's almost to much to take! Update soon!
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/01/09 03:27 pm
Ooooh the crapola is about to hit the fan in a big way!!! It is sad that Chris is only going to tell Tina what is going on because he has no other choice...smh
Author's Response: true...very true Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/01/09 09:25 am
Drama! Drama!
Add soon!
Author's Response: lol Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 15/01/09 06:17 am
OMG. I have a feeling that the next chapter is going to be drama filled. Although Cris loves Tina she puts more into the relationship than he does. It will be interesting finding out if their relationship (one in which she gives, he takes) can withstand his infidelity coming out. Especially since he slept with her enemy. Great Chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks girl. I can always count on you. Alot of Drama is coming up.
[Report This]Date: 15/01/09 03:49 am
WOW I have spent the last few hours reading this story and it is AMAZING!!! I hope you are going to update soon, because I am dying to find out what is going to happen!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read it girl. I should up date soon.
Date: 15/01/09 03:45 am
I really like this story. I'll glad when Chris tells her the truth and they can go from there.
Author's Response: Thank you I'm glad you like it.
Date: 15/01/09 03:37 am
Chris why didn't your punk ass stay with her! She was about to tell you she was pregnant. I'm really sick of that damn phone of his. It's always messsing something up! Hurry up and add girl. I can't wait to see what happens when she gets to the shop. This is so good! It's like watching a movie!
Author's Response: thank you girl. I can always count on you to comment. I'll try not to keep you hangin'
[Report This]Date: 15/01/09 02:30 am
yes you added! I'm going to read now!
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/01/09 12:06 am
*New Reader* I love this story! Please update soon!
Reviewer: New Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/01/09 05:12 am
Rihanna is a straight up hoe! Chris doesn't want you back the fuck up! I have to say I really liked this chapter. I knew she was pregnant. I can't see wait to see what happen next.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/01/09 06:01 am
Hell yeah! She's pregnant! Now Chris needs to get it together!
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/01/09 04:38 am
Oh my. If this doesn't cause Chris to get his shit together then nothing will. I really hope that Rianna's son is not Chris, but with Chris' batting average it may be his. LOL.
I loved the exchange between Chris and Rianna. I'm also glad that he is doing some introspection while he is locked up. I hope that this continues and he does nto return to his cocky self when it is all over. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it girl. Reviewer: anouk Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 08/01/09 04:08 am
This was crunk as hell! OMG! Where to start... Rihanna is off the chain. If it's left up to her, Chris isn't ever gonna get to do a paternity test. She wants to claim him and I sure hope he isn't the father. I really liked the opening of him reminiscing about the way things were before he was the big dog! It was nice to get a peek into his head when it's not on his hustle, ya know. Tina is a trooper, I tell. She has to deal with a lot. I like Shalay and Shad. They seem to be really cool. Okay now for the WTH moment... He got arrested! Though, this shouldn't come as a surprise, I was. Somebody set him up, I bet and my guess would be Rihanna but I don't know. When you're into what he's doing, you accumulate a lot of enemies. Anyway, you're doing an excellent job for this to be your first story! Keep up the drama! :)
Author's Response: drama is my name! thank you so much for reading this and actually giving me feedback.
[Report This]Date: 06/01/09 05:19 am
This was a really good chapter sherry! I'm curious to know who was on the other end of the phone when Tina heard Chris talking to that chick! Shad's turning out to be a better dude than I first suspected! Quite insightful, actually! Lloyd needs to pump his breaks. Tina is DEVOTED to Chris and I can't believe Megan just showed up, all cracked out, trying to take Mya. WTH! Very good! :)
Author's Response: Yeah there's a lot more to Shad then what most think. keep reading girl it gets better and better.
[Report This]Date: 06/01/09 03:39 am
Lloyd, Lloyd, Lloyd when will you ever learn?
I'm not sure exactly what you said. Something about the flames of hell. That was so damn funny. Its a shame Megan won't get clean for her baby. Great chapter.
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/12/08 06:56 pm
i liked the way you went back and told what happened when chris left. that was tight. keep it coming girl.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/12/08 07:37 am
That was five stars, not two and a half.
Author's Response: the computer keeps doing that to you...lol. it's all good girl. Thanx for commenting. Reviewer: anouk Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/12/08 02:16 am
Wow. Tina got involved with Chris when she was a child. Her world seems to rrevolve around him and the drama he brings into her life. It will be interesting to see if Tina breaks free from Chris and discovers what makes her tick. I still don't like Lloyd. I think he is stalker. If he loved Tina then he would not try to take advantage of her during this crisis. I loooved this update. Please keep them coming. Thanks.
Reviewer: anouk Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 30/12/08 02:15 am
Another great update! I don't trust Shad... something just doesn't seem right about him. I'm curious to know if Lloyd is going to try something with Tina and who was the chick on the phone? Very interesting! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Spank you much! Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/12/08 11:09 pm
Good chapter! The girls in the shop are off the hook, especially Rhianna. Tina better watch out for her. I thought it was sweet of Chris to take Mya to lunch and I was happy he showed up. Again, Tina is a trooper because she wasn't even sure if he'd show up and she's taking care of a baby that isn't hers. Kudos to her... it takes a real down chick to do that. Chris and Tina are hot together BTW. :)
Author's Response: awww thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. it really means alot because you're such an amazing writer.
[Report This]Date: 27/12/08 06:13 pm
When you gonna add?
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/12/08 09:34 am
Merry Christmas to me! Chris Brown is so sexy! You get a ten for just using him!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/12/08 08:38 am
I think it's time for Tina to do her own thing because Chris is acting like a child. Maybe if she gives him a little taste of his own medicine he'll straigten up. That was a good chapter.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/12/08 01:49 am