I'm going to need to you hurry up and add. This chapter was fire. Please don't keep me waiting girl
Reviewer: tamieka Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 14/11/09 04:39 am
OMG what happen to tina!!! and tina's mom is in the mix uh oh
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 14/11/09 03:23 am
That good I glad she can finally escape that negro
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 14/11/09 02:01 am
Wow this was so emotional I almost cried but she did the right thing ! I'm with Team Tina
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 14/11/09 01:28 am
This story is really great. I think Christina and Chris have a beautiful relationship. =D Update soon! Peace.
~Sammi
P.S. This chapter was EXTRA HOTTT. ;D
Author's Response: Thank you so so so much for commenting. Reviewer: Samantha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/11/09 04:40 pm
OH no! If he she was with him since he was 14 he was her first everything so I can understand wjy she would be so inlove with that crazy boy.... this is good
Author's Response: Yeah, it's a very complicated situation. Thank you so much for reviewing as you go.
Date: 13/11/09 12:47 pm
I luvin this and the Characters are great!!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 13/11/09 04:55 am
Girl where the heck have you been.
I went through my withdrawl and now you have me addicted again.
I loved this chapter and can't wait for the next update. Please hurry.
Reviewer: veronica75 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 05:30 pm
I have soooooo missed this story and I am glad it is back!! And better than ever!
I am glad that Tina did not trip too hard on Chris for keeping the details of her father from her! I am also glad that trick Shalay got hers! It was a long time coming, and I am glad that Tina got to tag that ass before Chris finished her off!!
I am sad to know that this story is coming to an end, but I am excited to know there is a potential for a sequel!!
Thank you so much for coming back to update this one!
Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank you for reading and always leaving a comment. Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 08:44 am
YAYNESS you're back I'm sooo excited. I check every day. That heifer got what she deserved and i hope the wedding goes well...please update soon
Author's Response: Awwww... you check back everyday? Really. I'll try to update soon. Reviewer: Aralei Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 10/11/09 08:32 am
OMG! OMG! You are the bomb digity girl. Although it's been nearly six months is was well worth the wait. So much happened in his chapter. I don't know where to begin.
I was so hoping Chris got to Shalay and he didn't. I'm happy Tina got her shot at her also. Just Wow!
Tina know's Sonny is her father and everything's out in the open. Yay! You had me a little care with her reation at first but it all worked out.
I'm kind of scared for their wedding day. Something tells me everything's not going to go according to plan. Over all the was the best chapter yet. I know I say that with each chapter but you just keep getting better and better.
Author's Response: You got me all excited for the next add. Reviewer: kim Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 10/11/09 07:17 am
update soon please!
Reviewer: erica Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/09/09 09:50 pm
ok....finally ive caught up
daaaaamn this is th best story ever this joint keep me up late at night but it is so worth it.
idk how to feel about chris sometimes i like him and sometimes i wanna throw my shoe at him but i guess its not his fault with his situation and all.
tina tina tina she lucky to have a crazy mofo like chris i guess he's sweet in his own way.
shalay wow this bitch(exscuse my french) she just off the wall psycho how you gonna be in love with your best friend man and still want shad to love you smh
shad he just lost i swear i think he gets tookin fo grantnet to much they just dont know but i'll love you shad
anywho...keep up the writin i love it
Reviewer: Psycho Signed [Report This]Date: 04/07/09 05:41 am
i love this chapter
Reviewer: shonna Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/07/09 04:06 pm
Oooh Snap!!! I hope Tina beats her straight down!!!
I am glad that Chris is going to come out in the open with everything!
And of course Shalay and Sorrell are going to activate their plan at the engagement party!!
I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]Date: 20/06/09 06:21 am
Oooh Raymond thought he caught a beat down before....SMH...
I can't beleive he lied on Tina like that!!! She should beat his butt before Chris is able to lay a hand on him.
I CANNOT wait to see what he does to Shalay!!!
You can still tellt hings are going to pop off soon! I have my popcorn and am sitting back to watch!!!
Author's Response: There's definitely some drama ahead! Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/06/09 07:16 am
can i say again I totally love this story I have been stalking this board waiting for an update for almost 2 weeks...I love this chapter...A request please can we have a chapter with just the family hanging out without the business pretty please...I love this couple soo much and the drama is amazing but just hanging with the family would be so so amazing right now especially before the wedding...
One last thing please dont wait so long to update. FANTASTIC story you totally ROCK.
Author's Response: Thank you so much... and I'll totally consider your request. Reviewer: jgirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/06/09 09:46 pm
Very intense! For the first time in this story I actually got a little frustrated with Chris!! He seems to be spiraling out of control a little bit! I am glad that he realized his anger was to the point he could actually hurt Tina and backed off.
I like how the drama and the tension is building! You can sense that things are going to jump off soon!! And I can't wait to see it all unfold!!!
Author's Response:
Good Good! I'm glad you got frustrated with him. I wanted to show that Chris is still Chris to a certain degree and he'll never be perfect. He's a flawed man.
Thanks chica!
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/09 06:11 pm
I have been reading this story for a while and I can't get enough I'm always checking back for an update. I just wanted to say that you are a wonderful writer. And i hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! It's really hard to tell whether the story is liked on this site from the lack of comments so thank you so much for taking the time to comment.
Date: 29/05/09 11:23 pm
Oh boy...she really should have told him what was going on! She knows that it doesn't take much to set that boy off!! He is going to snap once he talks to Sonny!!
Oooh you can smell the crapola about to hit the fan!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: lol Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/05/09 09:07 am
hello shiree022000 I have just finished reading this entire story so far and must say with the exception of Blackmambo Anna's Boys this is my ABSOLUTE favorite fanfication so far...I was very skepitical at first when I saw a Chris Brown story but I am so glad i took the time to see what it was all about i was hook from the first chapter and could not stop reading until the last chapter WOW and WOW this story is beautiful and i felt like i went on a roller coaster ride with tina and chris i felt every emotions and all their happiness and when they were romantic was there too.
I must tell say you are a great writer and if i had to grade your work I would say 2 tumbs up. Excellent and amazing keep up the good work and i look forward to the next chapter of this story.
much respect do your THANG.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for taking a chance on this story. You have no idea how much that means to me. I promise to work extra hard to bring you time worthy work. Thanks again chica. Reviewer: jgirl41 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/05/09 05:06 am
Ooooh Crapola is about to jump off now!!!
Sonny is Tina's Father??? Zachara is his brother??? WOW this is about to get GOOD!!!
Hopefully Tina or Shan one will finally let Chris know what Sorrell has been saying!
And I am geeked that Shan and Shad hooked up...hopefully it will become something serious.
Reviewer: Redbird Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/05/09 06:04 am
EEP! How did I miss a chapter!!! I am so sorry! I loved the way they decided to kill time waiting for their flight...
Hmmm what in the world is he going to do to Raymond????
Author's Response: Girl don't stress it. I knew you would be back. Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/05/09 05:48 am