I'm back on track with catching up with this story. Lifes been a bit crazy but I'm back. OMG! OMG! You had me on edge during that entire meeting and then when bullets started flying I could've shit my self I was so scard for Chris! Then It was all over and I relaxed thinking he was all good but he wasn't the fool got shot. Good thing Shad showed when he did or his ass whould've been dead.
Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 28/04/09 01:41 am
Yeah yeah yeah my crack is back!!! I so love this story!
I am glad Tina did not sleep with Raymond. That would have most defintely made things worse! Now that she has demanded that he come clean with her, she needs to tell him about Sorrel and his threats!!
I am so glad you did not abandon this story! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I didn't abandon it. I just needed a break.
Reviewer: Redbird Signed
[Report This]Date: 15/04/09 06:35 am
where have you been? I'm over it since you came backlol. Both characters really surprised me in this chapter. it was kind of like they switched rolls. thank god she didn't cheat on him though.
Author's Response: Sorry. I'm back now.
[Report This]Date: 15/04/09 04:20 am
I loved this add. I'm glad Tina didn't do the nasty with Raymond. Add soon.
Author's Response: Thanks
[Report This]Date: 15/04/09 02:33 am
You added! You added! I'm going to read now.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/04/09 01:42 am
I hope she doesn't step out on Chris even though he has been a dog in the past...But he is right he has not given her a reason to trust him at all. Great chapter. Ever chapter ends with a cliffhanger
Reviewer: anouk Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/03/09 04:15 am
This was a great chapter.
Reviewer: anouk Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/03/09 02:47 am
This was a very intense chapter. I'm glad Chris found her when he did. But if she can't trust Chris with this, than what is their relationship built on? Great chapter.
Reviewer: anouk Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/03/09 02:13 am
You had ben crying on this chapter girl. It was so sad. I could actually understand both of their points of view. Tina's just going by what she knows and Chris is actually innocent this time but is feeling the guilt from his past sins. Great chapter really.
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/03/09 07:54 pm
Loved 2 wrongs
can't wait for a new update.
Reviewer: Veronica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/03/09 06:11 pm
I really have to catch up with this story. It is still one of my favorites. I can't believe that Lay was so jealous of Tina that in the end she ended up losing everything that she was trying to protect. Great chapter.
Reviewer: anouk Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/03/09 04:25 am
OMG! What is that girl about to do? I hope nothing crazy.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/03/09 02:16 am
Aww.. this was so sad...their whole relationship has just been a series of misunderstandings...
The saddest part was the statement Chris made The one time he wasn’t at fault and it was the end for them.
I hope that Tina doesn't do anything crazy...once she sees the whole tape she will feel so awful about what she did...
Thanks for another supply of fic crack!!! I will be looking out for my next dose!
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]Date: 09/03/09 06:17 pm
Chris is about to get it girl. Why did you stop there? More please. More!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/03/09 08:52 pm
Wow! She knows but she doesn't know. I hope he can clear everything up for Tina. Wow! I don't really know what to say right now.
Wow!
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/03/09 06:34 pm
Another chapter! I'll be back to read later.
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/03/09 04:21 pm
Ohhh boy...this is about to get ugly!!! I had forgotten she still didn't remember what had happened to her...in my mind they had already worked through this...
And I really hate that she still won't tell him what Sorrel did to her or that he has been calling her and leaving crude messages...she gets mad at him for keeping secrets now here she is doing it...
Girl your writing is off the chain! You definitely get me caught up in the personal drama these two are forever creating for one another!!! Hopefully one day they will stop trying to protect the other one and lear to just be honest!!
Oh and thank you thank you thank you for two updates to this wonderful story in one weekend!!
Reviewer: Redbird Signed
[Report This]Date: 02/03/09 05:37 am
The car chase was awesome! I love the way Chris took care of Tina. He really does love her. It looks like they'll be back together soon.
What's going to happen at this meeting. I have a areally bad feeling about this.
Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/03/09 07:54 pm
That was like something out of a movie. I loved it. More please!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/03/09 07:35 pm
Thanks for this update.........seems like it's been a LONG....LONG time since the last one.
It appears Chris is trying to be the man that Tina wants now. It's unfortunate it took her almost dying for him to really look inside himself. I HOPE he's not fooling himself.
Why does Tina tell him about the phone calls from Sorrel? IMO.......mistake.
Great update. Look forward to the next one.
Reviewer: Lykeroses Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/03/09 06:31 am
I'm so mad at you! You had me okay! You really had me! I thought Chris and Tina had actually gotten back together and it was all a dream. You were teasing us. That was very mean but very smart at the same time. I guess I should've known from the title.
I also like all the new characters. I can tell Peaches is gonna be a hoot!
Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/03/09 04:38 am
Girl! Girl! Girl! This chapter was fire! Chris went all out for his woman. I loved it. Yay! They're getting married. It's about damn time. Everything he said to here was so sweet and romanitic. I need me a man like that girl! I really missed this story. Add soon please!
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/03/09 04:33 am
My crack is back and it was freaking awesome!!! I loved it! I am glad he came clean with her and she told him about what the doctor said...I wish she had let him know about Sorrel though...
And I KNEW that Nick was the snitch!! He didn't react right when she ran into Lloyd that day outside the hair salon!! I still think one other person is a traitor we will see if I am right!!
Hopefully the next update is coming soon!!! *hint hint* LOL
Author's Response: Lol I won't keep you waiting as long as I did. I'm glad you liked the add. Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/02/09 11:50 pm
OMG. I think Chris is going to kill Shalay! I so wanted Tina's baby to survive. This was a great chapter.
Reviewer: anouk Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/02/09 05:12 am