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Title: Lights Out

Okay! I thought I was going to have a heart attack through this entire chapter girl. I was so scared for Tina!  I thought she was going to die at least 3 times and I'm so glad she didn't.  Sorrel's fucking crazy!

Rock on!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/02/09 05:59 am

Title: Lights Out

I don't know what your saying!  Your writting did not suck in this chapter!  It was the shit and it had me sitting on the edge on my seat.  Sherry you rock!  I love this story and the other story. 

Author's Response: Thank you!  I was really worried about it.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/02/09 04:44 am

Title: Lights Out

How in the world could you not like this chapter!!! It had me glued to my seat the whole time!!

I am so glad Chris found her before that sleeze got what he wanted from her...

I am liking the Shantell Shad hookup and I am LOVING that Shalay is finally getting the beatdown she sorely deserves!!!

I can't wait to see who the traitor is...I have an idea but will wait to see if I am right!!

 



Author's Response: I"m dieing to know who you think it is!  You have to tell me!

Reviewer: Redbird Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/02/09 07:41 pm

Title: Lights Out

Yay! You add!  I'll be back to read.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/02/09 07:15 pm

Title: Dance! Dance!

OMG. This chapter is excellent. I hope Tina does not lose the baby. If she makes it she really needs to decide if being with Chris is worth all this drama. I still hope that Rianna will eventually be taken care of. LOL. I have a feeling that when/if Shad or Chris get to Shalay it won't be nothing nice. Great chpater as usual.

Author's Response: Thank you thank you! 

Author's Response: Thank you thank you!

Reviewer: anouk Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/02/09 06:10 am

Title: No Angel

Jennifer basically sold her daughter.  Chris would do just about anything to hang on to Tina ant that's kind of freaky but I love it! I guess that makes me a freak.

I see Chris and Tina rebulding their relationship in the future.  Chris won't have it any other way.

Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/02/09 06:10 am

Title: No Air

Sorry for the delay but I'm back now!  I think Chris is going crazy.  This was a great chapter.  I really need to know why Chris showed up at Tina's mother's house.  That was kind of a suprise. But I've learned that you always to things for a reason.

Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/02/09 05:18 am

Title: Glass Houses

You and your cliffhangers!  I need you to post like now! I just can't wait!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/02/09 04:56 am

Title: All I Have

I like that you went back and explained what really went down.  Tina had a lot of emotions running through her mind.  I like that you showed ever aspect.  You made me feel what she was feeling and that's hard to do. Please keep doing what you're doing and I'll keep reading!

Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/02/09 02:52 am

Title: Glass Houses

The lights went out! and sorrel's running around the hospital. I really liked Tina in this story.  She's a really good perosn.  Chris is lucky to have her on his side.

hurry up and add so i can find out what happens next.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/02/09 02:46 am

Title: Why Does She Love Me?

Ok........maybe Shad can be trusted after all??? hmmmm

Great update.....but a cliffhanger?  Come on.



Author's Response: you know i had to do it......lol.

Reviewer: Lykeroses Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/09 02:11 am

Title: Why Does She Love Me?

I'm back again.

Why do I have a funny feeling that Shad does not have Chris' back like he think he does?  I could be wrong, but I forgot to mention that before.

Now I'll read the new update......thanks.



Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Lykeroses Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/09 12:55 am

Title: Glass Houses

Thank you thank you thank you for another update to my favorite story!!! 

I am glad that Tina pulled through and I CANNOT believe Shalay had the nerve to show up at the hospital...and Tina's mom is plain crazy!!!

I love GH too...although not as much as I used to...and Zacchara is definitely crazy!  I can't wait to see how this all plays out!!

 

 

 



Author's Response:

yay! it's your favorite!  I have to say thank you for the support. 

I use to love GH but now I don't watch it. It's a disapointment

Reviewer: Redbird Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/02/09 11:30 pm

Title: Another Again

I could pull all of Rihanna's weave out girl!  She is so wrong for coming at Tina like that.

I really don't know what to say about Chris.  I kind of feel bad for him and then I don't.  He reall screwed up this time.

I think it's lloyd in the car with Tina.  But I pray not!

Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/02/09 09:49 pm

Title: Redemption

Wow!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/02/09 09:18 pm

Title: Why Does She Love Me?

I've been reading & lurking; reading some more & lurking.....shame on me.

Girl, this story is some great reading; I've found myself checking for updates & then was smart enough to have an alert (lol).

What a few surprises, twists & turns; although I understand Chris' love for Tina.....IMO once is a mistake...twice is a f**k up.........she's got more love than me.

Please continue to update often; thanks for a great read.



Author's Response:

Yes shame on you! Naw just playin'.  Thank you for reading. In the future please continue to comment though.  It let's me know that people are still interested. 

Yay!  I can't believe somebody add my story to their favorites.  That means so much.

Yeah Tina's my angel in the story.  She loves with out reason and it's unconditional the the tenth power.

Thanks again!

Reviewer: Lykeroses Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/09 06:19 pm

Title: Redemption

You had me in tears over this sherry!  I was breaking down when chris was breaking down.  I'm amazed you were able to take me there.

i want shad to take care of shalay properly.  hell if he were to slap the shit out of her i wouldn't be mad.  she really disapointed me.

this was a wonderful chapter can't wait to see what you do next.  you alway suprise me!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/02/09 06:18 pm

Title: If Your Girl Only Knew

Chris was going to kill that guy at the beginning.  Thank God for Shad.  He puts him in his face and keeps im focussed.  Chris needs that.

Sherry what's about to happen?  I would have to Tina to find what happened in front of all those people.  This is very bad.

Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/02/09 06:03 pm

Title: Redemption

Aww... dang girl, this was awesome! Seeing him break almost had me in tears :( 

Wow...just when you think you can't despise Shalay anymore she sinks to a whole new level of skankdom (is that a word?)  I feel bad for Shad once he finds out what Lay has done...I did thoroughly enjoy Chris beating the heck out of Lloyd!!!  

I loved that they are going to let Peaches sit in on the surgery...although I was hoping she would have pulled through and not lose the baby...

I can't wait for the next update to find out what happens next!

 

Reviewer: Redbird Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/02/09 05:36 pm

Title: Stay With Me

I love the way Chris is when he's with Tina.  I wish he would tell her what he did before she finds out in a bad way.

Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/02/09 09:06 am

Title: Life Line!

I WANT TINA WITH LOYD!  Chris is a supreme dipshit & Tina needs to stand up and realize he is a selfish piece of shit that wants what he wants, when he wants it, regardless of who he hurts. Ugggghhh!

Author's Response: Interesting response lol!  Thanks for reading chica!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/02/09 07:19 am

Title: Foreplay

This is some very hot shit!  BUT I think Chris needs a dose of his own medicine because he is still taking Tina for granted...he thinks she will always be there...he needs to feel a little bit of fear regarding possibly losing her....

Author's Response: You're absolutly right on that!  Thank you for reading.  Please continue to tell me what you think.

Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/02/09 05:34 am

Title: Wipe Me Down

Rihanna is a nasty hoe!  Chris doesn't want you!  Step off!  Chris played her for a straight up fool and it was so funny.

Tina's pregnant!



Author's Response: lol you're funny!

Author's Response: lol you're funny!

Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/02/09 04:27 am

Title: Life Line!

why did you stop there?  More!  More!

so much happened in that chapter i don't know what to comment on. 

just add soon!



Author's Response: Thank You!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/02/09 04:25 am

Title: Life Line!

OMG! OMG! Tina and the baby have to be okay please! My heart went out to Chris in this chapter.  It's really hitting him hard. If I wasn't sure he loved Tina, this chapter showed me.

Her mother is a real bitch. Thank God Chris put her in her place. Another wonderful chapter Sherry.



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/02/09 03:35 am

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