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Title: First Kiss

Justin's comments and Jazelle's thoughts about Justin's house make it seem as if she's never been there before - but that doesn't make sense, cause then where would they have watched the Blockbuster movies? Other than that, their courtship is very cute

Reviewer: ABBNony Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/02/12 05:10 am

Title: ThE pRoMiSe

CUTE AND SWEET!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/09/11 06:14 am

Title: It'S oVeR

YEAH! JAZZELLE!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/09/11 06:09 am

Title: StOp TrIpPiN

DOUBLE DAMN!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/09/11 06:05 am

Title: First Kiss

DAMN!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/11 06:00 am

Title: ThE pRoMiSe

I loved it!!!!

Reviewer: AJ Taylor Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/02/11 07:24 am

Title: ThE pRoMiSe

Nice story.

Reviewer: Bella Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/05/10 09:09 pm

Title: ThE pRoMiSe

Loved that story!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/05/10 08:34 am

Title: The Recommendation

That's cool that we can receive the personal loans and that opens up new possibilities.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 12:23 am

Title: ThE pRoMiSe

That was a sweet story!!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 05:55 am

Title: FiGhT!

Darius is a punk. I can't believe he got someone to beat them up!!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 05:52 am

Title: It'S oVeR

She finally walked on his no good behind, maybe she'll find happiness now.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 05:47 am

Title: StOp TrIpPiN

Jazzelle think about what you're doing, he sounds like he is a good man. You already know Darius is cheating on you!!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 05:37 am

Title: First Kiss

He left her speechless. He is treating her with such love and he isn't even her man.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 05:32 am

Title: I dEsErVe YoU

Darius sees how it feels to have the shoe on the other foot. She would be stupid to walk right back in there after having sex with someone.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 05:23 am

Title: The Recommendation

Jazzelle and Justin are getting might friendly to say they just met in a video store. Let's see where this will lead them.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/09 05:19 am

Title: ThE pRoMiSe

this was a seriously cute story. i loved it.

Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/10/09 05:27 am

Title: ThE pRoMiSe

My favorite part of this story was the beat down, it was poetic in how it was served!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/10/09 05:20 am

Title: FiGhT!

I thought this was a really cute and quick story until that fight.  Why in the world would a lawyer, doctor and business man be in the park fighting?!   I think when you give charachters professional occupations, they should have a higher level of intelligence than to bring people to a park like children and fight.  Even if Darius wanted to fight Justin the time to do it would have been when he was walking out of the party with Jazelle.  Not months later in a dark park! 

Reviewer: Lovelybears Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/09/09 06:54 pm

Title: ThE pRoMiSe

Hey, interesting song fic. Liked the quotes and how it was accompanied into dialogue as well.

 

Physically, Justin and Jazelle make a pretty awesome couple. And they get along great too.

 

Wasn’t sure whether to frown upon the fact that Justin would so blatantly hit onto a girl that was already taken or to respect his determination. Love his outfit and slang too, lol someone has jungle fever!

 

As for Jazelle, I didn’t buy her excuse of the fact that she was a bit intimidated by Darius or that she stayed with him out of habit. I think she stayed with him cause of the reasons most women stay with jerks, not for who they are but for what they represent. The guy is attractive and successful and confident.

 

Men like Darius make women doubt themselves and their sense of worth which is why many of them put up with their crap.

 

She’s still a strong character. I’m glad she dumped him and I even enjoyed the way she did it. Go girl!

 

Darius was a dumb jerk. What else can I say? The guy’s a lawyer. He goes out and gets people to physically attack the couple in a public place.

 

What a ridiculous thing to do. Forget the fact that his ass was handed back to him, shouldn’t he have been worried that Justin was a well known business man and could just hire someone to do his dirty work? He could get revenge without having to be there in the first place.

 

Or even just the fact that both could press charges with the police and he could have his license removed and be thrown in jail for physical assault?

 

Or maybe the plan was to be so obvious and ludicrous that no one would believe the two…who knows. I’m glad he got dealt with and am glad both were together in the end. It was a fun read, great work!

Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/07/09 03:34 am

Title: ThE pRoMiSe

awwwwwwwwwwwww shuccccckkks

Reviewer: Vonniiiboo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/03/09 02:59 pm

Title: ThE pRoMiSe

Aww this was a sweet story

Reviewer: ValentinesBaby Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17/02/09 08:35 pm

Title: ThE pRoMiSe

this was really good!  I felt myself throwing a kick at stupid Darius and his low life thugs as well!

I really don't get why guys feel they own someone after they move on. Life is weird.

Reviewer: rosie rolle Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/02/09 02:23 am

Title: ThE pRoMiSe

No you didn't just end it like that! I thought there would be more. Now I'm really sad. But you know what I'm glad to have read your story and looking for more of your stories in the near future. I really enjoyed Jazelle and Justin especially hope they beat up Darius and his friends. It was hilarious.

Reviewer: karen timothy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/02/09 06:13 pm

Title: ThE pRoMiSe

Thanks for a great story

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Date: 16/02/09 01:58 am

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