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Title: Chapter 7

I love it!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/01/12 05:54 pm

Title: Chapter 7

I enjoyed Rayne and Adam's story. Thank goodness he finally came to his senses.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/05/09 01:13 am

Title: Chapter 7

Rayne finally got her man!!!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/09 06:08 am

Title: Chapter 5

Yes you are bad, I expect a great update next time. I think we know what Adam has to say, I wonder what the answer is going to be.

Reviewer: Erica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/03/09 04:54 am

Title: Chapter 7

See! Thats what I'm talking about!

Reviewer: Flikchick Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 11:50 pm

Title: Chapter 7

This is great!  Adam definitely went big with the help of Lil' C.  I was sure "In Your Eyes" was going to start playing at any moment.  Great job!

Reviewer: yhh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 02:20 pm

Title: Chapter 7

So they deided to stay in their home town and move in together.  Cool, but they should have moved to Chicago.  Great story.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 12:31 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Oh good for Adam to finall declare his love for her and move with her to Chicago.  Girl you are already packed....go to Chicago woth your man.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 12:28 pm

Title: Chapter 5

You are SO WRONG for this cliff hanger..........

Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 05:17 am

Title: Chapter 5

Thanks for the updates.  Poor Rayne and Adam.  I can't wait to read what he has to say for himself.  Thanks for a great read.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 03:14 am

Title: Chapter 5

I'm not into Harrison Ford, but damn he looks good in that pic!!!!

Now to the story.........

You are a tease! I was all ready for Adam to make his move, and then you cut it off. That's just cruel. 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 02:26 am

Title: Chapter 5

You evil, ebil, weebil you! Come back and add to this updat, I have been waiting for the update and then you go and tease us like that..........So wrong! LOL

 

I am thoroughly enjoying the heck out of this story.....Adam is going to get his woman!!!!!Rayne doesn't stand a snowballs chance in the Sahara against Adams counterattack.

Reviewer: Caligirl65 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/09 10:20 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Well, I was really gonna let Adam have until I read further. He didn't know. She should have verbalized something, anything, in regards to her feelings for him.

Jestures and the like are wonderful, and often tell more than what could ever be said, however, there is never a substitute for plain words. Telling him she loves him in the actual words leaves no room for guess work. Then he could do with that what he would. Having said that, I'm sure he knew. You always know, or at least suspect. Especially if its someone close to you. Those jestures and the like, mean something. He clearly subconsciously felt the same way, otherwise some of the men she dated he would have liked.

Good chapter!

Reviewer: Flikchick Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/03/09 08:45 pm

Title: Chapter 5

oh shnipity snap.... you are a baaad author leaving us hanging like that. Update soon !!

Reviewer: Brit Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/03/09 09:37 am

Title: Chapter 4

Great story! I finally found someone who shares my obsession with stories about friedships turning into relationships!

cant wait for the next chapter.
Oh, and could you tell me who wrote "my bestfriends girl" ?  I'd like to read it.
Thank you! 



Author's Response: Dorothy Koomson is the author. I hope you like the book.

Reviewer: Jenna Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 06:13 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I'm glad he finally knows the truth....Now let's see what he's going to do.

Reviewer: YHH Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 01:20 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I'm glad he realizes that he needs to do something big to get Rayne to stay in his life, and it better be GOOD!!!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 04:59 am

Title: Chapter 4

aww... so short. OH well an update is an update, and I'm glad for it. SO Adam finally knows. whatever will he do with this knowledge? I can't wait to find out

Reviewer: mascara is evil Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 03:19 am

Title: Little Goodbyes

Great job so far Jamey. I'm really enjoying the relationship between Rayne and Adam. Looking forward to the leaving party, I have a feeling it will explosive :)

Reviewer: Valhalla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 03:14 am

Title: Chapter 4

Quick but good, I have a feeling that the going away party might just end up being an engagement party.

Reviewer: Erica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 02:09 am

Title: Chapter 4

I'm enjoying, poor Adam. He didn't have a clue about his feelings or hers. Raine should of stepped up to the plate awhile ago, but I can see how timing is not in the cards for these in their past. I like Raine's stance to move on, but she should of talked to Adam, running never solved anything and would give niether closure or the possibility for more. And I think Adam's past should haunt him I imagine he shared a little too much with Raine....LOL

Reviewer: johnandvan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 12:51 am

Title: Chapter 4

Sweet!  NOW Adam gets it!  "It's all elementary my dear Watson"....get on your grind buddy and let her know how much she means to you, butthead!

Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/03/09 11:12 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Watch out Rayne, here comes Adam!  Lil' C is one smart boy, I hope I see more of him.

Reviewer: YHH Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/02/09 02:43 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Thanks for a great read.

Reviewer: Divisionred Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/02/09 10:58 am

Title: Chapter 3

Ah, Adam's a 'big brother'? I love it. Love the rapport between he and Carlton. Great imagery with this scene and great dialogue between them: the flow is very natural here. And of course the prose with Adam's thoughts, his frustrations, very good as well. Great insight into him as well. He's unhappy about Rayne leaving but he does the 'guy thing' and doesn't call her directly. LOL. I wonder what will happen that will make her stay? You've got me guessing here. Another great update. I love it :)

Reviewer: madame z Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/02/09 03:19 am

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