Again, I must commend you on the flow of this. It's beautiful. So glad for the backstory here and you did it so well, providing us with Rayne's thoughts over the past and leading us up to the present. I love this. :)
Reviewer: madame z Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 16/02/09 03:16 am
i cant wait to see where you go with this one. like she should talk to him. but it cant be one sided thats just not cool. how is he going to get jealous and never do anything about? like he said the last chapter those two guys dont know their together. than fix it, make it come true instead of huffin and puffin ya know? more soon - dani
Reviewer: classicbeauty Signed [Report This]Date: 09/02/09 07:03 am
She's doing the right thing. She can't wait around for him forever while life passes her by.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 08/02/09 08:41 pm
Good for Rayne to decide that she has loved Adam for so long and for him to not acknowledge her love she decides to move to another state...good for her. But will he follow her after she is gone or will he convince her to daty? I hope that she leaves and that he follows her and finally realizes that he loves her too. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 07/02/09 04:19 pm
I can't imagine what Rayne must be feeling. I hope Adam realizes what a gem he has in her and don't let her get away.
Reviewer: karen timothy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/02/09 01:43 am
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/02/09 05:21 pm