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Title: Bed

That was cute!

 Reviewer: mizgardenia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/11 03:55 am
Title: Bed

They are so cute together...I need more please.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/05/09 04:25 pm
Title: Bed

True understanding. I have seen that in my sisters marriage. As I was reading this, I kept seeing my sister and brother-in-law in my mind.  Thank you!!

 Reviewer: Caligirl65 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/03/09 11:18 am
Title: Bed

Damn, you are good. Your characters come alive for me. I ca almost reach out and touch Alex and Matt, or is it Matthew lol!!    Well done.

 Reviewer: Sharon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/01/09 10:28 pm
Title: Bed

This is a really thoughtful piece. I like the tone and the mood; her reflecting. And I love the overall theme, "Bed". Who'da thunk that having to replace an item as mundane as a bed would set you to considering your marriage? I love this piece; am marking it a favorite. Will try to keep up. Great job. :)

 Reviewer: madame z Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/01/09 07:45 pm
Title: Bed

The thoughts you have while shopping. I laughed at the fact that she spoke up about her feelings right there. My weak self would have waited until we got home, giving him a chance to escape, while I just got angrier.

Could you add more spacing to the next chapter. Spacing between paragraphs makes it easier to read.

 Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/01/09 02:35 pm
Title: Bed

Very interesting start. So what is up with Alex. Is Matthew really a jerk? or does Alex not know what she wants. Look forward to finding out as the story goes along.

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/01/09 05:05 am
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