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Title: Chapter 2

It's so nice to see a book that has children in ti, Great job with this story so far. I cant wait until he meet's the right Nanny.

Reviewer: Erica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/02/09 08:19 am

Title: Chapter 1

LOVING THIS NEW STORY!

Reviewer: jcdeppfan87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/02/09 03:44 am

Title: Chapter 2

Best damn character--ever!! ;-)

Reviewer: SF69 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/02/09 02:20 am

Title: Chapter 2

I can understand why you had a ball writing this chapter because the Nannies that he interviewed were scary as hell...my goodness, it went from bad to the worst folks that want to take care of kids, but I do have to say the first one was the scariest....YIKES.  Thanks for a great read.  Looking forward to reading more about Spencer and his quest for an adequate Nanny for his niece and nephew.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/02/09 06:49 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I think that this is a great start to the story and I understand why you didn't concentrate on the tragedy as they are already gone and now Spencer has to concentrate on taking care of two children and as he has stated he doesn't feel that he is the appropriate person to take care of them.  Thank goodness for his personal assistant who is capable of handling him and giving him the courage and support that he needs to take care of the children.  As for his parents, they are on a safari for three months wow, that is so cool, but they will be devastate by the loss of one of their children.  Thanks for a great read.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/02/09 06:36 pm

Title: Chapter 1

This is another good one RP! It felt very real for me. I felt Spencer's conflict, and confusion over the whole thing.

Reviewer: Flikchick Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/02/09 05:37 am

Title: Chapter 2

Wonderful...Update again as soon as u can.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/02/09 02:25 am

Title: Chapter 1

Nice start on this story.  I like your character pics.  It's so sad to hear that the kids lost their parents so young.  Genie is the bomb assistant. Spencer isn't doing as bad as I thought he would being that he is a confirmed bachelor and hounddog.  He already out of the partying stage of his life and his friend Frank is a Character for real.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/02/09 01:44 am

Title: Characters

Very good so far. Liked this chapter also.

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/02/09 12:49 am

Title: Chapter 2

This story is awesome

Reviewer: Writing4Eternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/09 12:03 am

Title: Chapter 2

I am just so glad that Spencer has Genie.  I think she is going to be the glue to keep him together in the short term.  And I can just picture him all crazy thinking about those kids and how he is going to handle them.  Just love this sotry thus far.

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/09 11:46 pm

Title: Characters

Love, love your stuff, RP. Spenser is in so far over his head. LOL. The nanny interviews reminded me of my trying to pick a day care center for my little girl two years ago. Scary. Funny. Unbelievable Twilight Zone stuff. Exahausting. You captured it all.

Can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/09 06:52 pm

Title: Characters

Love, love your stuff, RP. Spenser is in so far over his head. LOL. The nanny interviews reminded me of my trying to pick a day care center for my little girl two years ago. Scary. Funny. Unbelievable Twilight Zone stuff. Exahausting. You captured it all.

Can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/09 06:50 pm

Title: Chapter 2

RP-

I READ ALL YOUR STORIES. THIS ONE IS VERY INTERESTING. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: juno Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06/02/09 05:08 pm

Title: Characters

RP,

This story was put on my favorite list before I even read it (lol).  Girl, you got skills.

I hope u update often.........really enjoying it.

Reviewer: Lykeroses Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/09 04:33 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I really love the start to this story!  The nanny interviews were hillarious; especially the last one!

I can't wait for the next update!!!!!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/02/09 03:19 pm

Title: Chapter 2

love this story so far.  the interviews were hilarious.  spencer is really scared shitless and doesn't have any idea how his life is about to change.  frank should and some additional humor to the mix.  update soon.

Reviewer: ghscrubbies Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/02/09 01:30 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I really am enjoying it so far. Reminds me of Raising Helen but better. Great job!!

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/02/09 08:26 am

Title: Chapter 2

You done got me chasing you over the net.

Reviewer: drbw Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/02/09 06:55 am

Title: Chapter 2

poor poor poor baby. Those people were....out there is the best term I can think of.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/02/09 05:43 am

Title: Chapter 2

I am sooo in love with this story. I love nanny stories. Those candidates were crazy. WOW I can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/09 05:28 am

Title: Chapter 2

Wow those nannies are so crazy people lol. My fav was the thrid one lol. I though spencer was going to pass out when he said he going to use his name on stage lol. Can' t wait to read more thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/02/09 01:18 am

Title: Chapter 1

Wow spencer that alot to handle good thing he has a good friend to help him out. I like the story so far and thought you written the tradgedy very well can't wait to the next updated. thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/02/09 12:57 am

Title: Chapter 1

poor baby,he's got a lot to learn. I know he's not thinking right now but why hasn't he thought there might be possible reasons as to why his sister and brother in law didn't want the kids to go to his side of the family.

Reviewer: g Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06/02/09 12:55 am

Title: Characters

Nice cast can't wait to read the story thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/02/09 12:46 am

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