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Title: V

This chapter was so beautifully written, i shed a damn tear my self, i know  I am a softy but it was touching and moving, great writing, wonderful thanks for sharing your story with us

 

alexandria

Reviewer: Chocolatepink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/09 08:44 pm

Title: V

OMG  this story is just fabulous.  I love it. I just read all five chapters. Spencer is just so heartbreaking from the very beginning. The memories, the avoidance and the way he is trying to just figure out how not to deal and maybe to breathe.

Reese with her talented and take no prisoners attitude is just what he needs. I really like the way her character is developing. 

Lita and Frank and Genie are the best kind of support characters.  Frank the coolest friend and Lita the sister that doesn't let Reese take herself too seriously.  Genie the mother figure.  

This is really a good story and you write it/tell it well. I am hungry for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Acorn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/08/09 06:32 pm

Title: V

I loved it!!!  Great update and please keep them coming!  Spencer finally had a breakthrough.  Now hopefully they can begin to heal.

Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/08/09 03:11 pm

Title: V

great story , read all the chapters so far in one sitting. please update soon.

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/09 03:02 pm

Title: V

I love this story!!

I patiently waited through Spencer's denial. I'm ready to see how his attitude and behavior changes now as he openly deals with his and the kids' grief.

Please update soon.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/09 09:05 am

Title: Characters

Great cast choices. The kids are adorable.

I'm looking forward to reading this!!!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/09 08:34 am

Title: Characters

Thanks for the update! I really love this story. Its about time Spencer lets his grief out...Good work!

Reviewer: san234 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/09 07:30 am

Title: V

Rogue dearest, you have done it again. This update was on the sadder side but I dug it. Spencer is hurting....BAD. I can't imagine what its like to lose someone so suddenly.

I want to give him a big hug!

Great job RP!

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/08/09 07:26 am

Title: IV

I love this story! I loved the line in the first chapter about the IT people thinking up new viruses when they were in the boring finance meeting. LOL

I always enjoy your writing and look forward to more.

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/07/09 01:28 pm

Title: IV

I just started reading this story based on the recommendation.  It's really good so far and am looking forward to coming updates!

Reviewer: qualidee3 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/07/09 05:27 pm

Title: Characters

Ok, when is the update? I check this site everyday for an update. Please update soon!

Reviewer: san234 Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/06/09 03:59 am

Title: Characters

I am anxiously waiting on that update...you are leaving us in suspense.

Reviewer: san234 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/06/09 05:14 am

Title: IV

Oh, my, this is a great story - can't wait for the next chapter (s).  I'm totally in love with Reese and Spencer - they are going to be great together - once they get together.  Keep up the good work and update soon please!!!

Reviewer: irreader Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/06/09 11:48 pm

Title: Characters

When is the next update...don't keep us waiting.

Reviewer: san234 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/06/09 07:16 am

Title: IV

Reese and Spencer are a real hoot together. I couldn't stop laughing at the exchanges between the two of them. Bringing Selia home with the kids there was a bit tacky, but I'm sure Reese will set Spencer straight on that little issue in the morning.

I'm truly enjoying this story. Looking forward to reading more. 

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28/05/09 04:12 am

Title: IV

Spencer is  making me so sick right now, he really needs an ASS KICKING fast, I know he is grieving his sister, and having to deal with the kids is a lot, but DAMN his attitude sucks big time, he seems to think that if he either has sex with the office tramp, or has Genie deal with everything than he won't have to face the fact that Tracy is really gone.

I'm liking Reese already, she doesn't hold her tounge at all, and I think that she is exactly what Spencer needs... btw bring the office slut back to your place while two small children are there is just sick.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/09 04:51 am

Title: IV

My heart just goes out to the kids.  And poor Jeanna just wants her mother and all she has and knows is her uncle Spence.  He is not in the right place to take care of them.  But I do hope that Reese will be able to help bridge the gap some.  But let the games begin.  I can see much happening in the future with them.  Awesome chapter.

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/05/09 10:36 pm

Title: IV

I finally got around to catching up with all the chapters you posted...your characters have a certain amount of "realness" about them...I appreciate that...they are flawed and imperfect...yet they are sympathetic at the same time...Spencer is hillarious at times and his remembrances of his sister, Tracy, are so heart-breaking at others...Genie has got to be a saint...no other word aptly describes her considering the unreasonable demands Spencer has placed on her since the tragedy happened...he has so much "growing up" to do...it's not even funny...and he really needs to face up and dealing with his sister's death and the responsibility thrust upon him...he's simply "maintaining"...and not talking about it certainly isn't helping him IMHO...

I like Reese a lot...though she has been out of line on more than a few occasions when dealing with Spencer (I would never talk to an employer the way she has even if I thought he "had it coming"...that very unprofessional to say the least)...the living arrangements...there should be some sort of compromise there...Spencer is being unreasonable thinking it's okay to expect his live-in nanny to sleep in what amounts to be a coat closet with little or no privacy...and she shouldn't have taken it upon herself to move his office stuff before getting his agreement beforehand...

Selia is a true skank in every sense of the word (Spencer, Spencer...you got to do better in your choice of "women", dude...but I suppose that when chasing tail...the standards are not very high)...I found it unbelievably crass for them to go ahead and knock boots knowing full well his nanny is awake on the floor directly below awake...and being loud with it didn't endear either of them to me...that was low and classless...I can't wait to read what Reese has in store for Spencer's insensitive, thinking-with-the-wrong-head arse...

I'm so glad I stumbled upon this wonderful little ditty...can't wait to read more...

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/05/09 03:15 am

Title: Chapter 2

This chapter was hilarious...we never truly know the number of weirdos in the world until we are actually forced to interact with them...poor Spencer...

Genie is a godsend for Spencer...she keeps him grounded and I was so glad she made him take responsibility for the trust his sister entrusted on him with her request that he raise her kids...seems Tracy has more faith in Spencer than he has in himself...and I think it's a way she, Tracy, (acting as his subconscious) is going to force him to grow the heck up...can't chase tail 'til you're ninety, Spencer, my boy...

I love your writing style...so vivid...I'm enjoying this tale very much...

Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/05/09 05:33 am

Title: IV

FINALLY!!!!!!! Just waited as patiently as I could, but glad you updated:)

Reviewer: LIL HELPER Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/05/09 08:09 am

Title: IV

I was just thinkinng about this story. Great chapter! I look forward to more.

Reviewer: Zimmie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/05/09 05:08 am

Title: IV

I am so glad to see that you updated this story! It is turning out to be quite interesting with the dynamic between Reese and Spencer. But I am with Reese, he would be in for a rude awakening after keeping me up all night having sex while kids are in the house.

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/05/09 04:45 am

Title: IV

I think both Spencer and Reese are unbelievably rude. Spencer needs to think things through first and should have made accomodations for Reese but Reese moving things w/o his permission isn't cool either. And although Spencer should have listened to her explanation, she was still late and severley inconvenienced Spencer and it seemed like she could care less. Yeah she was trying to apologize but.... Selia, don't like that skank at all, far too upity and girls a straight hooch. Spencer and Reese have alot of growing they need to do. But the attraction...on fire and they know it.

Reviewer: g Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/05/09 04:05 am

Title: IV

I can not believe he went through and had sex with that woman in his home.  Unbelievable....LOL.  I like Reese and loving the kids.

Reviewer: Robin Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18/05/09 03:40 am

Title: IV

ok you had me laughing thu the whole chapter lol. We been rob lol wow that woman doens't have any brains at all. I wonder what resse is going to do to him lol. cna't wait to the next updated thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/05/09 03:08 am

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