wow so todd new the people and they wanted pay back. well thank good ness roger, todd , vivic not dead. But i guess those guys dont 'know who they messing with .
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 11/09/09 08:17 pm
well i hope she able to forgive todd about him still be married to blair but least he told her not some body else. kevin need to watch is back before he end up in river glancing at van.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 11/09/09 04:33 pm
well that lawyer better work fast to get todd what he wanted. I know starr having hard time mom in the nut house while dad is falling in love with van but she has to accpected that van a good woman for her dad and she makes him happy.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 11/09/09 04:27 pm
Todd Todd Todd you should know when van wanted she gets and if she wanted you naked you better strip lol. these two can't get enough of each other and that guy adam and the doctor i dont' trust them something about them just evil.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 11/09/09 04:22 pm
i like the bonding moment btween her and jack that so cute playing cards. starr is her father daughter lol but she come around and started to like van. I can't wait to see what happen when she see her mom and unlce.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 11/09/09 04:03 pm
I think the driver knows their names screams all of it lol. i'm glad that she let lawyer friend she has a a man and that todd. like they say once you go black you don't turn back lol. love the story girl.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 11/09/09 03:46 pm
Well she got todd to shut up lol but in one hot hot way. king of donkey lol to funny they fit each other just right. Augst better keep him eyes on something else before todd rip them out lol.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 11/09/09 03:24 pm
i know lalya looking out for her sister that great but she also need to let van live her own life without someone nagging her. like the story girl good job.
Author's Response:
Thanks wwefan. Layla thinks she's helping. Although she earlier realized that she was wrong to interfere in Todd and Van's 'friendship', she's still wary of him and then too, Van is still feeling the affects of the coma. So she's is a bit protective, but yep, Van as a grown woman gets to live her own life.
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 11/09/09 06:26 am
wow do sister always have to come in in the wrong time. that guy should listen to betty when she told him not to come back lol. like the story girl.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 11/09/09 06:22 am
well these two cute when they fight lol. they so sturborn but glad that she got to see her sister and mom. But knowing todd he going to fight for his life.
Author's Response:
I love fighting Todd and Van. He always wants to please her so much, but when it comes to protecting her, he draws the line. And if his welfare is involved, she's just the same. lol
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 11/09/09 06:17 am
they need to talked to each other and stop with the games but i must say van got todd good with the hot guy coming in lol. i hope they don't give each other up.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 11/09/09 06:10 am
I thought she was about to cut that woman touching her man todd lol. Dam that was a hot dream i thought it was real but it will soon enough. like the story girl.
Author's Response:
LOL. That would have been interesting. The schemer would have deserved what she got. lol Thankfully, Van let her off with her skin intact.
Ah, yes, the dream. I got you good, didn't I? *snickers*
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 11/09/09 06:04 am
well hope todd tell his sis what going on and to let her family know that she ok. love the suprise he done for her realy nice.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 11/09/09 05:56 am
she awake that good i thougth todd was going to jump up and down all over the room lol. Is he going to tell her mother that she awake? i hope so.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 11/09/09 05:50 am
wow so he took van to another doctor. hopefully he can help van out. todd should had told her mother and sister that van was getting moved but they would had stop him so see why he didn't. I love that he holding her hand that so sweet thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 11/09/09 05:45 am
well todd going after van this going to be intersting. I can't stand blair she so annoyed. looking forward to see how van going to get van back.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 11/09/09 05:40 am
like the pic of the cast.
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Date: 11/09/09 05:34 am
Wow, that was great Reese!!!
You out did yourself again dear. Where to begin. Well I guess the beginning. I enjoyed August and Layla talked. It was nice that Layla had someone who understand what she was going through about August and her paternity issues. Now I'm going to break everything down into coupless since all three were feature in this chapter.
Well, you know I was going to talk about my couple for life first right? Todd and Evangeline - My goodness, that was the sweetest, the funniest, and the most nail biting marriage proposal I have ever read. I love it so!! Todd had to work it in order for Evangeline to agree on marrying him, but was so understanding and loving to Evangeline. He really did me proud because he didn't loose his cool. He stuck to his plan to make Evangeline his wife and it worked!! Aww Evangeline, I really thought she was going to have her way about not marring Todd, but that Manning got a will that only God can stand up too. LOL I so understand her fears, but her love for Todd overcame her fear and she and Todd are eloping. Todd marriage proposal was so like him. Todd the romantic, well kidnapped romantic, but I still love it!
I loved seeing Betty and Roger there too. They were so happy for Todd and Evangeline, it nice to see people that are loyal and loving towards Todd and Evangeline and I love them for that tool. So what if Lisa is going to be mad that they didn't have a big wedding, she gaining a new son-in-law and grandchild. I say that is all good!!! I hope we get to see them eloping.
Now for my lovely coupld I came to enjoy in this story. Jared and Natalie - It's about freaking time too. Those two being playing the cat and mouse game long enough that when the got together it was explosive and I love explosive love making. But I got mad at first at Natalie when she push
Jared away from the great love making then I realize why she did it. It was because she was letting her insecurities get the best of her. She really didn't think that Jared would want her for her because she was full-figured. Boy, Jared set her straight quickly. I love it when he said that he wanted to be with a woman who looks like a woman. I knew I loved Jared for some reason!!!!
A man of my own heart. And it his words melted Natalie heart too and I see they are together, but in secret. Can't have the good people at BE to know about this little hook-up right?
Ohhh, now I need to know how Jared deal with Todd is going to work out now, well as long as it makes Chris go away then I'm all good.
Now for my couple who can't get break for nothing Layla and Adam-
Goodness, now here were some more eyes opening moments in their story. First off, can I spanked Jasmine. Now she all sorry. Selfish little girl. I hope she learned her lesson and she indirectly cause Adam to snapped at Leo too because of her meddling in her brother's business.
I love Adam, I knew he wasn't going to let Layla go without a fight. Go Adam Go! And Wow about Adam already knowing that Ti was his father already. I didn't see that one coming at all. I feel so sorry about Adam and his 'father' actions and ways.
Well if Adam have anything to do with it, we going to make sure the his 'father' get dealt with. I wonder who was at the door listening to them. Well, I know we will learn that soon enough.
Great update Reese and I'm going to be so sad to see this story end, but its time. Thanks for updating. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, Stormy. Todd and Evangeline were so much fun to write in this chapter. There were so many other dire happenings going on that writing their 'trip' to the nuptials in a semi-whimsical fashion as they addressed series issue seemed like the right tone.
And you're so right about Layla and Adam. Damn, those two have almost had as much drama besetting them as Tangie, poor babies. Is there anyone who can help them or does the eavesdropper bring more trouble to Laydam? Can Adam do anything to extricate them from their current predicament or are they destined to part?
As for Jarlie, I hated the way the show ruined them. Although I had to warm up to Jared when he first came on the show, he began to remind me...a little bit...of Todd: cocky, arrogant and a bit of a wastrel who cared for people very selectively. I began to like him. He also made Natalie interesting to me again for the first time since Crisalie. Well, have to see if they are going to be a casualty of Todd scheming or not.
So onto the conclusion of the story.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Megumi Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/09/09 04:42 am
Reese, you ain't right, but girl this chapter was top gear. I have some thoughts that RJ was Layla's father when Lindsey showed up in the last chapter. But August being Evangeline's half-brother was like WHOA!! All this time I was hating on August like Todd was and we both have eggs on our faces. LOL
That's why she doesn't want to married Todd. She thinks that it going to end up like her parents marriage. Poor Evangeline. She can't let fear keep her from the man she loves and the father of her child.
Oh Todd was so cool in this chapter. I can understand why he was anger, but he was a bigger man when helping Adam leave the house. Mama Lisa got some explaining to do doesn't she? Oh man, awww to everybody in this chapter expecially Layla and Evangeline. After reading this chapter I came to learn one thing... Todd isn't the only one whose family is crazy Great job Reese and
Author's Response:
Yep! Stormy, Van's issues with men mainly stem from her fears that she'll repeat the mistakes of her father, and now her mother with this recent reveal. Poor Van.
LOL. The Williamsons seem to have as much baggage as the Lords, making Van and Todd a perfect fit. If they can overcome these latest obstacles.
Thanks for reviewing, Stormy. You're so faithful. *hugs*
Reviewer: Megumi Signed
[Report This]Date: 04/09/09 04:11 pm
Oh Reese, this chapter kick so much ass! I love all the twist and turns in this chapter. Wow, there are so many secrets in this chapter that it was so wonderful to read.
Okay first, Adam and Layla are freaks.. Goodness that phone sex was too hot for words. Love every minute of it. Oooh, Adam talking dirty like the. But you got me on the edge of my sit with Layla running away from the person that Lindsey was talking too. I wonder who he is. Then Adam's father/uncle. To kipnapped Layla and threated her with this bullshit about pure blood. That bastard is sicker than I first thought he was. And Layla deciding to give in to the bastard. Oh Poor Adam and Layla.
Todd was his delicious evil yet, adorable self in this chapter. I love it when he gave it into Rex. Rex should be glad that Todd didn't go for a life. Todd and Jared scene kick so much ass. I love them scheming with each other. It just fits them so perfecting because Todd is so good at making people to do his will. I can't wait to see what those two are up too. In a weird and crazy way, Todd working with Jared is a way for him to protecting Natalie from the loser. Which I think is so adorable and sweet. See, Todd does care for his kin, as long as he get something out of it.
Loved the teens scene. I wanted Langton and Cliff to hook-up and I believed I got my wish. It's so great to see a strong Star. She just a breathe of fresh air.
Natalie and Rex scene was so good and a big eye opener too. See, this is wat soaps are missing now. We don't get to understand why people do what they do or how they really feel about things. Thank-you for writing Natalie heartaches about trying to fit on her new family over the years and calling Rex on his bullshit about keeping TJ from Todd. She was right on all accounts and I'm glad to see this scene played out too. Damn, everybody are either running away from Crisco or trying to take him out. I say bring it on!!!
Okay...... Evangeline's has a secret.... Oooh! I should have known!!! Now this is what great storytelling is all about. Hmm, I know August is involed, but how much and what is the secret that is making her scared of marrying Todd?!?! I have some ideas, but I wait to see what the secret is. Wow, this chapter was so worth it Reese. You didn't disappoint at all!!! Thanks for writing this update and I can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 04/09/09 04:07 pm
Reese!!! This chapter was awesome!!! I can't believe you outdid yourself with this chapter. Okay I'm going to talk about the heat first... Yup, from this chapter, it clearly showing that Evangeline has a little bun in the oven. Yay!!! Okay I will talk about that little know fact more when it becomes known to Evangeline and Todd that they are expecting.
Okay, is Todd and Evangeline hot for each other or what! I love how you decribe how both Todd and Evangeline can't get enough of each other and displayed that heat between one another so sexy and hot.
I'm not going to lie, both of them was acting like dogs in heat and I lovedTodd and Evangeline are expressing their love and lust for one another. It's real and beautiful because they are in love with each other. Okay they are so naughty that they had to go to a garden to make love to each other. Badass is all I can say. Love it.
Okay the trick needs to get a life and wake-up. I'm so loving Star in this chapter. She really is growing-up and letting that dumb mother know the true about everthing. Now is the trick is going to listen to reason, or she is going to continue to embrass herself. I choice the latter.
I'm enjoying all the characters interaction in this chapter as well. We got to much going on in such a short period time about people thoughts with each other that is so nice to see in this story. Why can't soaps do this now is a mystery to me.
Aren't Natalie and Jared cute with this cat and mouse game. You can actually see them falling for each other, but being too stubborn to admit their attarction to each other. Jared is becoming a fan of mines again in this story. You see that he is focus on his mission, but he got this red head problem that he believes he can just shake off. Good luck on fighting you love for Natalie and Natalie fighting her love for Jared. Can't wait to see which of them are going to fall first
[Report This]Date: 04/09/09 03:05 pm
Now if I think back to chapter 11, there was a hint to what may be happening to Evangeline in this chapter. So I'm just going to spell it out. I believe Evangeline is pregnant.
But Mama Lisa sure isn't enjoying this latest turn of events. Here I thought she like Todd. I should have know though, well it work out in the end. I hope. :unsure: I forgot to add that Todd and Evangeline on the phone was too cute!!! It just like I picture them on the phone together.
Now that's the Star I know and love. She really did grow-up when she was grounded. See, I knew this Star was smarted than she was acting in the first few chapters. Getting away from her mother really change her for the better.
Jack got a crush on Evangeline, man it's kind of cute but I feel so sorry for Todd. I believe Eva will explain things to Jack so he and Todd will get back to the right path. Great Chapter Reese. I so looking forward to the next chatper too.
Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/09 03:01 pm
First of all, I'm a little disappointed at Jasmine on her thoughts about her brother trying to live his life and fine happiness with the person he loves (Layla). She should be glad that Adam is in love instead of being needy to him. I know where she went too and I just know that it going to lead to trouble in the future for Adam and Layla. Let the games begin. :unsure:
That traitorous faithless bitch. I should have know. Todd was free from that trick all this time. :wut: All that mess she cause for Todd and Evangeline being separated for those few weeks.
OOhhh! Todd is going to pay her back later. But as for now, I'm loving how Todd is scaring the crap out of Llewellyn and his daughter. When you mess with Todd, you are going to get dealt with. Manning Style!!! Did I even told you that cold and calculating Todd is sexy as hell. When Todd is at this mode, he is as great and hot as he is being sweet and loving to Evangeline and his love ones. I'm looking forward for Todd getting back at that trick and that sorry excuse of an lawyer. Hmm, Todd has a question to ask Evangeline huh? Sweet!! I can't wait!!
Layla and Adam was so sweet and carefree in the beginning of their arc then came to a hault when Mama Lisa came. I'm really surprise and happy at Lisa's reaction about Layla and Adam and it seems to be a honest reaction to them too. Now, I still don't know if it because Adam is a doctor or she really does like Adam. We will see though and I'm so looking forward to the dinner with all the couples too. This should be a ring-side seat to see what goes down with the girls and their boyfriends are having dinner with Mama Lisa.
Poor Layla, acting like she still at home with her parents. Adam was so comfortable around Lisa. I love that. That shows how much in love he is in love with Layla and doesn't care if anybody loves them being together or not. I also agree with Adam about Layla acting uptight and sercetly about her and Adam. She needs to deal her problem shead on or she face losing Adam before she knows it. Great read Reese. I love it. I can't wait until the next part.
Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/09 02:57 pm
Oh wow, a two for one deal on the love scenes!! I love them both. Adam was Layla's first. Awwww. There love making was hot, yet sweet at the same time. You can really they are in love with each other. :)
Todd and Evangeline is just everything. Their love scene are always hot and sizling. Um, you can tell that those two missed being with each other. *wub* I'm so happy Todd surprised Eva with the new home. I can understand why Evangeline is a little afraid about moving in Lion Den with Todd, but I have a feeling that things will be fine for them. Now if he can get rid of the trick of a wife and things would be golden. Go Todd, take care of business! Wonderful update BE and I'm looking forward to the next one also.-
Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/09 02:53 pm
Okay first off... *ROTFL* at Todd's signing Luther to Evangeline it was sweet and funny at the same time. You have to love a man who will do anything and everything to be with the women he loves. How can Evangeliene say no to Todd when he's all coolness and lovely. Scenes written by great writers like you are the reason why I will always heart Tangie. I can't wait to see what happens to those two behind close doors. :) Hot Toddy is the man.
I enjoyed the setting for Natalie and Jared. Anybody with a brain can see that Natalie had it bad for Jared. But the question is she going to do something about it or not. Speaking of Natalie, Vincent and Christian are idioits.
Wow, I didn't expect that to be Layla's secret. No wonder she was that way. I'm actually glad that Adam was there to talk to her and help her out, but does he really think he can calm his desire for Layla? I don't think so.
Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/09 02:31 pm