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Title: Chapter Nineteen Part II

Yay! Updates. :) Okay, I'm felt sorry for Layla and Adam in the begining because they were with people who they didn't want to be with. But you have to throw a knob to Jacinta for kissing Adam and lighting a fire under Layla. It made her take action and get Adam the best way possible, dumping liquid on him LOL. Vincent is slime and I wonder what he has over Layla? I love it then Adam was ready to get down and dirty with Vincent for hurting Layla, but I'm also glad that Layla was able to calm him down and they left the club to talk. Oh that talk should be very interesting. Great update. Reese. :)

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/09/09 02:00 pm

Title: Chapter Nineteen

Um, what did I just step in? Oh I wish I could have seen Chris face when Eva told him the truth about their relationship. LOL Served the punk right. I know Todd is going to do something crazy to get Eva back, but am I prepared for it. I believe I will be. 

 Still loving Layla and Adam. I love the fact that Layla is getting jealous about Adam and Jacinta Vincent is a just a jerk. He knows Layla doesn't want to be with him, ut he's hangiing something On Layla. Ugh, Oh, Natalie and Jared was very interesting too. I can't wait to see what will happen next/

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Date: 26/08/09 08:13 am

Title: Chapter Eighteen

Wonderful Chapter Reese!  I'm glad to see the Cole trying to get ahead in life and he asking Evangeline to help him. I wonder if Star is going to like this set-up. LOL

I don't trust Meeks at all. The way he pause at giving Eva his son name tells me that this is all a lie he is telling Eva. We will see.

I love the Natalie/Vincent/Jared scene! I love how you got into everybody head in that scene. From Natalie trying to pretend that she wasn't in to Jared, to Jared being piss off at Vincent, yet sweet to Natalie and Vincent having some fun on their displeasures. But I'm not liking what he doing to Layla at all. But I have a feeling that it's going to last long at all. Todd and Natalie was great too. I can't love them talking to each other, thought Todd was trying to get some information from her. Lol See, this is and will always  be missing on the show. People making a connection with each other that are family or friends.

Evangeline and Todd are a trip with each other. Todd is in the running with his son for Evangeline feelings. lol Todd made and ass of himself, but he's in love for real this time. So I will forgive him, though Evangeline is piss at him at the moment. Vicki was trying to be the mother hen in the situation, but sometime Vicki, you just have to let children work out there own problems.

Evangeline knew what she was doing when she came out looking good. She had Todd weak in his knees. Everybody is meeting at Capricorn. Oh Shit, things are about to be on now and why to I smell Todd doing something that will make everybody know that his crazy in love with Evangeline? Whatever it is going to be, I know it is going to be good. Thanks for the update Reese. :)

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/08/09 07:56 pm

Title: Chapter Seventeen

Reese! you have done it again. I just love reading this story! Now were do I begin. First of all,

I love how you had Todd talked to Star, he was trying to be patient yet firm on her foolishness about hurting Evangeline. Too bad it feel on deaf ear, and this after Todd told the little brat that he is not going back to her trick of a mother, even if he and Evangeline didn't get back together. Hopefully Star will grow-up and realize other things are important than living in a dream world about her parents. She may be able to be redeem. We will see.

Oohh! So uncle is really Adam's father. Damn, I didn't see that coming. Ti Lao does care for Adam. Hmm, I can't wait to see what happens here. Layla and Adam are too cute and sexy. I thought I would never enjoy a story where Layla getting it on, but I so enjoying Adam and Layla. It's nice and you can really tell that Adam and Layla are crazy for each other. I can't wait to see what happens next with these too. 

August, August, August, slow you damn roll son. You had your chance with Evangeline and you blew it. Do August really think that Hot Toddy is going to stand there and let him(August) steal his Evangeline away from him (Todd)? If so then I need some of the ish that August is smoking. Yet this should be good to read to see all the players trying to go after Evangeline. Lord help them all, Todd is going to go on a warpath to keep Evangeline and there is nothing hotter than seeing a Craze Jealous Mean-sprirted Todd Manning protecting his lovely lady.

Now that's the Todd we need to see on the show. That man is on a mission and there is nothing sexier that than. He getting everything done in order to get Evangeline back and I love it! He got Blair game already. He tried to play nice, but the crazy ass bitch had to play games. Well, Todd is in this game too and he plays to win. Oooo Blair is going to get it!

Oaky what's Vicki and Evangeline is up too? Hm, it could be anything, but I hope that this scheme will work in making Todd and Evangeline stronger in the end.

Great update Reese! Girl, you are really coming on your on dear. It just so cool.

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Date: 13/08/09 09:51 pm

Title: Chapter Sixteen Part II

Oh my that was so good. I will say it again, no matter how many times they are mad with each other, Todd and Evangeline can't stay away from each other. I loved Todd and Evangeline talk in the hallway. It was heated, yet sensual at the same time. Those two are too hot for each other at times. I'm glad to see that Adam didn't have anything to do with his crazy uncle. Todd's and Adam's talk gave way to knowing a little more about Adam's background, strength and fearless. I'm looking forward to him explaining everything to Layla and Todd and Evangeline working their issues out too. Great update Reese!

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Date: 11/08/09 04:03 am

Title: Chapter Sixteen

Oh yes, the aftermath chapter. Poor Todd he was mess-up with grive over losing Evangeline. I hate seeing him like that, but he should have know something like that was going to happen after Evangeline saw that joke of a wedding. I'm glad Vicki was there to help Todd out and get him head back on his shoulders to start winning Evangeline back. Now who is this Ti Lao fool think he is messing with. Boy Adam got some dirty family members too I see. I can't believe he treated Todd and Vicki like that and had his mens hurt Roger!! Don't Mei know that threarts just make Todd act even more stubborn? Ti Lao really want his nephew to be in power doesn't he? I'm looking forward to the outcome of Ti Lao vist to Todd's penthouse. Okay I acutally enjoyed seeing how Evangeline and Layla found out about the board meeting and about the altercation at Todd's house. Just showing the concern over Todd's welfare give me great hope that Evangeline will fogive Todd on his stupidity. Now when is the question. LOL I'm glad Roger is okay and I look forward to the ends and outs of the board meeting. :)

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Date: 10/08/09 06:29 pm

Title: Chapter Fifteen

aww ,poor todd and vange. i know ..no i expect todd to make sure tha lawyer, blair, and even junior whiny slut in training- starr will pay. go get them todd! great update!

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Date: 12/06/09 08:14 am

Title: Chapter Fourteen

fiinally got re caught back up and i want blair and that snarky bastard of a lawyer to dissappear off the face of the earth. that lawyer gives sharks a good name. great chapter. and adam and layla are fire!

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Date: 12/06/09 07:51 am

Title: Chapter Six

GO VANGE WAY TO MAKE TODD JEALOUS!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT

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Date: 12/06/09 02:51 am

Title: Chapter Five

DAMN IT I THOUGHT THATPASSION WAS TRULY GOING DOWN WHEN IT WAS NOTHING BUT AN EROTIC DREAM.  WHOOO WHAT  A DREAM.  LOVE IT

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Date: 12/06/09 02:27 am

Title: Chapter Four

IF JESS ISNT A CANDIATE FOR DUMB BLONDE, I MEAN DID SHE REALLY BELIEVE THAT TODD LOED BLAIR, UH GET A CLUE EVEN LAME BRAIN NAT KNEW..  LOVE THIS STORY

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Date: 11/06/09 11:36 pm

Title: Chapter Three

OH WOW VANGE WAKING UP CAUSE SHE KNEW HER MAN WAS IN DISTRESS.  I LOVED IT

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Date: 11/06/09 11:30 pm

Title: Chapter Two

OH MY GOSH TODD IS AMAZING I MEAN TO GO AND RESCUE HIS SLEEPING BEAUTY WAS JUST WONDERFUL.  HE IS A MAN THAT IS FIGTING FOR LOVE AND IT IS BEAUTIFUL.. GOING AND GETTING VANGE WAS PURE GENIUS.   LOVE THIS STORY...

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Date: 11/06/09 11:17 pm

Title: Chapter One

WHOO THAT WAS EMOTIONAL WOW TODD HAS NO ONE TO TURN TO I JUST FEEL SO SAD FOR HIM.  VANGE WAS HIS ROCK AND SEEMILY THE ONLY ONE TO BELEIVE IN TODD FULLY HELL EVEN STARR TURNED AGAINST HIM THAT MUST BE THE KILLING BLOW FOR TODD.  LOVE IT!!!!

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Date: 11/06/09 11:09 pm

Title: Principle Cast

LOVE THE PICS!!!! TODD LOOKS SEXY...

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Date: 11/06/09 11:00 pm

Title: Chapter Fifteen

Wow.. I knew the honeymoon was going to be over soon and it was a painful ending to read too. Oh, I felt Evangeline's anger at Todd and Todd's remorse for hurting Evangeline with him not telling her that he had remarried the tramp. But did Todd expected that it was not going to be a big blow-up from the news espeically from the home video Blair the second set-up. Oh, poor everybody in this chapter. Yet, I'm so surprise about Roger and Betty. Yay!! It looked like everybody was getting the hook-up in Switzerland. lol. I'm so eager to see what will happen next and I know Todd and Evangeline will work it out, because it is never over between those two. Thanks for updating Reese.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/06/09 07:43 pm

Title: Chapter Fourteen

First off, this chapter was so good. Sighs, Starr needs to grow up first of all. Why is she so hell bent to put two people together that was and will always be toxic with one another. Don't she want BOTH of her father and mother to be happy? That is why Cole had dump her and I so believe this will be good for Starr in the end. But I know she is going to her Todd and Evangeline with her child behavior. I just hope I can wheather the storm when it happens. Oh Layla got the shock of her life when she found out the truth about Dr. Mei. Well that is what happens when you jump to conclusions. But didn't she get a sweet reward for her saying she was sorry to Adam. Oh that kiss was smoking hot and damn the pager for going off!! Okay this lawyer is going to get his ass kick for messing with Todd's happiness with Evangeline. He should never stand by the trick because it will always led to a Manning beat down. I can't wait to see the next update. :D

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Date: 07/05/09 05:52 am

Title: Chapter Thirteen

Oh my Reese...... So hot and steamy. But first the Layla and Adam scene. Those two are really are something else. You can clearly see that they feel the attraction between one another, but they are too stubborn to realize and Layla going off Adam at her department was so unlie Layla, but isn't that what happens when you have hinted feelings for someone? Poor Adam, but at least Todd found it funny. :lol: I also enjoyed seeing Lisa, Uncle Clay, and Sarah. It is always good to see family members of Evangeline and Todd since the show seems to always forget that fact in the past. Now to the hot and steamy part, You had me fanning myself in the shower scene. I got Todd pleasing himself then Evangeline pleasing him back. Good LAWD that was so sexy and naughty. Oh, you can tell I get all excited at Tangie love scenes. It was so hot to read and I love that they want each other that much. I can't wait to see what happens next Reese. Thank-you for the update. :)

Author's Response:

I love the sparks between Layla and Adam, too.  They are both fighting an attraction that both feels is crazy at the moment.  Well, at least, on Adam's part.  He's the only acknowledging the attraction while Layla is still in denial to some extent. 

You know Todd had to act a fool.  He would never let an opportunity to have fun at someone else's expense pass him by, now would he? lol 

Yeah, the whole Williamson gang was present with a little bit of Lord representation by Sarah. 

I must say that was fun to write.  Tangie is so hawt! 

Thanks for reviewing.

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Date: 02/05/09 07:16 am

Title: Chapter Ten

O_O

 

Wow. Just...wow. Like Evangeline and Todd, I have been waiting and waiting for this moment to come, AND YOU DID NOT DISAPPOINT. Probably one of the best Tangeline love scenes I've read.

It's 3am, I have to work in the morning, but damn it I'll have sweet dreams for the next four hours! Well worth the long wait. 



Author's Response:

Oh dear, I kept you up reading.  Or rather Todd and Van did. What a great compliment.  I'm really happy that you liked this very pivotal chapter.  It was an important one, especially in light of what happened on the show to our beloved Tangie.  Had to get a few things exposed concerning both Todd and Van's behavior during some of their storyline which had become sort of WTF issues for most of their fans.  lol

Thanks so much for reviewing. 

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Date: 29/04/09 09:57 am

Title: Chapter Nine

I admit I was starting to really get frustrated with Todd and all his "oh, I don't want to take advantage of her, blah blah blah" and I was yelling on the train (I printed the last 3 chaps out to read to and from work :) "DUDE! SLIP HER THE GOOD STUFF, ALREADY!"

 But then I settled down, after I realized that even though it angers my inner-horndog, he's absolutely right about it. That last conversation has made me totally root for Todd and whatever he decides because he has nothing but Evangeline's best interest at heart. Like Vange, I'm accepting it and will try to be patient.

Good stuff. Also - your vocabulary is awesome. "Adroit"... 



Author's Response:

Wow.  I'm so jazzed that you like my use of words.  But I digress. 

Yeah, it was hard having Todd stick to the program when everything in him wants to "give" it to Van, especially when she's asking him to do so.  So I hear you.  LOL 

But as we know, Todd is very protective of Van, and although going against what he wants is going against his usual nature, I think he would be adamant about sticking to what's best for her.  Quite a little dilemma for our Todd who is admittedly selfish in most matters except those concerning the people who he holds dear.

Thanks for reviewing.  :-)

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Date: 29/04/09 04:25 am

Title: Chapter Five

*shakes fist*

DAMN YOU! Why did that turn out to be a dream?! I was sooo into that shit. Btw, "delerious pleasure" is one of the best descriptions of the build-up to an orgasm that I think I've ever read. And once I read the words I was like "YES! THAT'S EXACTLY IT!"

I should totally be working right now, but I've been sneaking in a few paragraphs here and there all day.

*Skips off to the next chapter*



Author's Response:

LOL.  Yes, it was a dream.  Sorrry about that.  lol  I'm glad you liked the description.  It worked for me too.  I understand about trying to balance reading with writing.  I'm an avid reader but haven't been able to read anything of late which is bothering me.  RL has been getting in the way. I'm so behind on my chapters for my other stories it's not funny.  I totally understand the sacrifice, so thanks for reading and reviewing.  :-)

 

Reviewer: kendrawriter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/04/09 11:14 pm

Title: Chapter Three

This was sooo sweet - the perfect "Evangeline Wakes Up" scene. Her small, soft voice and the gentle way Todd handled her before they fell asleep was awesome - I read it twice.

 

Although, I must say if I were Evangeline (or Todd for that matter), I'd be terrified of falling alseep too. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment.  It was a very delicate chapter to write.  LOL.  I agree about falling sleep.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 27/04/09 02:20 am

Title: Chapter One

First of all - cheers for using the word "emoting". I LOL'd when I read that, brilliant.

 

Secondly, this first chapter has done what first chapters SHOULD do, laid the groundwork for a nice, big, juicy adventure that I for one can't wait to embark upon, just like Todd.

 

*skips off to read more* 



Author's Response: LOL.  Thanks for reviewing.  I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: kendrawriter Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/04/09 01:16 am

Title: Chapter Twelve

Great follow-up to the last hot chapter Reese. As I already believe Todd and Evangeline can't get enough of each other. Lol I'm glad that Evangeline let Todd know that she didn't wanted to stay at the penthouse due to the fact that he stayed there with Blair for years. I always felt that if you want to start over and bulid a great relatioship, you need to let things in the past go and the penthoue is one of the things that need to be set in the past. Okay, I already can see that Starr is going to cause some problems due to her false thoughts of her parents marraige. Let hope Starr don't ogo overboard with her resentment to Evangeline. Jack is cute in this chapter and I just love Vicki reaction to haveing her brother back and seeing such a strong and bold Evangeline that is willing to fight for her man. Oh dear, I knew that Blair will cause some ish when she realize that Todd in moving on with Evangeline. I just hope that the news of Todd still being married to Blair don't cause too much trouble with Evangeline and Todd, but I already know that Evangeline is going to be one piss off woman when she finds out. Poor Todd. Oh and thanks for moving on from the Evangeline and Natalie drama and showing these women are above all the silliness over fighting for a man who could never own up to his true feeling about anybody in the case of one John McPain opps I meant McBain...... Great asl always and I can't wait until the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Yes, I always felt that Van wouldn't want to stay in a place which would always be connected with Blair. 

Starr is just like her father in wanting her way at all costs no matter what he has to do.  It will be interesting seeing how she copes with the demise of her cherished family and Evangeline. 

I felt that Natalie and Van wouldn't keep harboring a resentment for each othe over John. I believe they both would have understood that neither was treated well and would want to move past that time.

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/04/09 07:05 pm

Title: Chapter Eleven

Oh Wow! Todd and Evangeline are just too hot to handle at times. I'm loving that fact that they are making up for lost time in the love making department. I love the passion they both display for wanting each other all the timeand I just know that want and need is going to become deeper as this story goes along. So, there is more to Mr. Mei thatn meets the eyes. He's a doctor?!?! Now that cool and I enjoyed his talk to his sister, Plus Adam stepping in and being the person who kidnapped Layla. Oohh, not these two are really peeking my interest and I can't wait to see what happeb next with those too. I don't like Meeks. He's too much like Todd said, but I know there is more to Mr. Meeks than meets that eyes. I guess we know more about him later since he is moving to Llanview soon. Great and such ahot updated Reese. Always, yoiu brought down the housse with allt he Tangie loving. :D :LOL:

Author's Response:

Thanks for review, Stormy.  I know there was a lot in this chapter and the introduction of some new characters.  The story is going to be moving away from Van's condition into the meat of the story.  Stay tuned.

Thanks for reviewing.   

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Date: 20/04/09 03:06 am

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