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Title: Character Pics

Please, continue this story! Also the pics aren't showing, FYI.

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/03/11 01:01 pm

Title: Character Pics

Update? And some of the pics aren't showing.

Reviewer: Logan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/02/11 03:35 am

Title: The Perfect Plan

That was a plan alright. This story was cute and funny but did have an important message about not letting your love ones go while you are reaching for your dream.

Reviewer: AJ Taylor Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/01/11 09:40 am

Title: The Perfect Plan

I hope that you decide to follow-up with this story.  I think a baby would be nice for the couple.

Reviewer: Romance Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/01/11 09:05 pm

Title: The Perfect Plan

Loved that story!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/10/10 11:31 pm

Title: The Perfect Plan

that was really cute, thanks. It was obvious that there was still something there between the parents. I used to live in Aurora Co.

Author's Response: Really that is cool!  I grew up there!  I am glad you enjoyed the story!!

Reviewer: rosie rolle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/02/09 02:25 pm

Title: The Perfect Plan

Sweet story...I enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I am glad you enjoyed the story!  Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Nay Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/02/09 02:55 am

Title: The Perfect Plan

Redbird, this was wonderful. I love the family relationship between all the characters.  Josh was such a great dad and I so felt Theresa's pain with how she'd placed her career over her daughters.  It would have been easy to just write her off as selfish, but I see it as her being very human, which is great writing on your part.

Love the plotting by the twins, they cracked me up.  Love the way Josh and Theresa came back together, that was so touching.  Excellent work all around and congrats on your first original fic :)



Author's Response: Thank You!  I am so thrilled that you enjoyed it!!  I will probably continue to participate in the challenges...I have so many stories I have promised on the SYTYCD Fanfic board, I don't know if I can squeeze in a  full length story...

Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/02/09 07:54 pm

Title: The Perfect Plan

*glares at you*

Why didn't you write an original fic sooner? This was really good! Sweet with just a hint of sexy, and I loved the family aspect of your story. It's refreshing when families come together again and it was done in just an entertaining way. I loved the sisters, they were kind of awesome. And the end was just sigh worthy, I really, really enjoyed this story. :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the compliments!  :)  It took me a while to overcome my fear of writing an orig fic...but I am glad I did!  

 

 

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/02/09 03:44 pm

Title: The Perfect Plan

This story was too adorable! I liked the little twist of Josh pretty much raising the girls - so often, we only get the perspective of the mother as the more involved parent.  Plus, committed father = tres sexy!

I loved the not-as-subtle-as-they-thought planning of Jaleesa and Jessica.  Hee!

I also thought the casting was very inspired! Gabrielle Union is gorgeous, and Greg Vaughan is too fine! I may need to start watching General Hospital, lol.    

Thanks so much, Redbird!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!!!  Greg Vaughan is definitely Foine!!!  Lucky Spencer tends to be a bit of a jerk though... I love Gabrielle Union she is one of my favorite actresses!

I had thought about making the twins either a boy and a girl or two boys, but boys do not know how to conspire, plot and plan like girls do!!!  LOL!

Reviewer: ribboninthesky Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22/02/09 10:59 pm

Title: The Perfect Plan

Redbird, this was too cute for words! Loved the scheming sisters.  I like the Terri didn't allow her guilt for not being there keep her away from her family.  Josh and Terri's moment together was so sweet.  There's nothing sexier than a man not afraid of committment.  It was very realistic and just an overall feel good story.  You should be proud! Very good answer to the reader's choice challenge. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words!  They really mean a lot!!  I am glad you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/02/09 06:43 pm

Title: The Perfect Plan

Oh that was so sweet! I just love this story to pieces. Thanks for writing it Redbird. Great job!!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I am glad that you enjoyed it!  :)

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22/02/09 03:15 am

Title: The Perfect Plan

thanks for a great read.  I really enjoyed the story.  Thanks

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting as usual!!

Reviewer: divisionred Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/02/09 02:42 am

Title: The Perfect Plan

lol wow first get mom and dad togther and now plan for a baby lol. I like the story the liitle plots they were doing to get mom and dad back it was cute. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!  Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/02/09 07:16 am

Title: The Perfect Plan

Beautiful job.

Author's Response: Thank You Erica!  Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: Erica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/02/09 06:06 am

Title: The Perfect Plan

Loved the story.  Wish it were longer

Author's Response: Thank you!  It was hard to write as a one shot...I am glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Gale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/02/09 05:39 am

Title: The Perfect Plan

That was sooo cute and funny! I could so see the girls plotting and planning thier parents getting back together! Funny thing is I think their parents were happy for the plots!! lol

I think it is special that neither parent could imagine their lives w/o the other which ultimately drove others away from them and them closer to each other!! 

Loved it sweetie..you did good!!! :)



Author's Response: Thanks Nene...I always value your support for my stories!!  Thank you for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: neneburge Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/02/09 03:44 am

Title: The Perfect Plan

I was so looking fowward to reading this story ever since I saw the banner on tst. I loved it. It was funny and romantic. And it was great from start to finish. I hope to see more of your stories soon again.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words!  I am honored that you were waiting for the story and am glad it lived up to the hype!  :) I hope to participate in more challenges as they come up...

Reviewer: karen timothy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/02/09 01:50 am

Title: The Perfect Plan

now that was just a too cute story.  I am just so glad that they were able to work it out.

Author's Response: Thank you!  I am glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/02/09 11:47 pm

Title: Character Pics

I *WILL* read this story soon! I'm loving the cast! LUCKY!!! He's so damn cute!!!

Author's Response: I love Greg Vaughn!  He is all kinds of fine...not really liking Lucky right now on the soap!  I don't like the way he ended things with Sam...

Reviewer: madame z Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/02/09 11:23 pm

Title: The Perfect Plan

awesome! teamwork does work, lol.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20/02/09 10:24 pm

Title: Character Pics

This was great, Red.  I so enjoyed it.  I smiled, laughed out loud, and had my heartstrings tugged, too.  And of course Josh and Terri were hot together.  Throughly enjoyed it.

 

 



Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!!  It was a little intimidating posting my first original fic!!

Reviewer: Reese Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/02/09 09:05 pm

Title: The Perfect Plan

Love it . Keep the updates coming.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!  I am thinking about the Feb challenge we will see if I can write something before Feb is up!

Reviewer: juno Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/02/09 08:33 pm

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