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Title: Chapter Fourteen

Great update Reese. Now, we can see what hold Carla has on Aidan. I look forward to tbe next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks Stormy.  Yes, the truth is soon to be revealed.  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/09 11:30 pm

Title: Chapter Fourteen

He better not chickenout and I hope nothing happens between now and then to change his mind.

Author's Response:

He certainly better not chicken out, SP.  I want to know what's going on too.  lol

Here's to hoping that Carla doesn't throw a wrench into his plans to reveal his secret to Collista. 

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/09 12:27 am

Title: Chapter Fourteen

ok love the looks she was giving her man lol desver him right getting her hook on the beast lol. finaly he going to tell her the truth witch is great but something tells me someone going to get hurt. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Collista's something, isn't she?  lol  You think someone's going to get hurt, wwefan?  Hmmm. Interesting.  Very interesting. 

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/09 03:00 pm

Title: Chapter Fourteen

Thanks for another update! 

I can't wait to find out what is going on myself!!  Loved the update!



Author's Response:

Thanks Red.  Glad you enjoyed it.  Stay tuned for an interesting evening with Aidan.  I'm sure Collista is on tenterhooks.

Thanks for reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/09/09 02:59 pm

Title: Chapter Fourteen

I can't wait to hear what Aidan has to say!  I hope nothing happens to delay his telling her.

Author's Response:

I hope not either!  LOL  But you never know with these two, do you? 

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/09 04:59 am

Title: Chapter Fourteen

Ok you on an updting roll girlie and they are all good!! Ok I am kinda worried about Aiden's past and what could be there strong enough to allow that cow to come along and blackmail him??There is something he is ashamed of and it could not just be the relationship he had with the wicked witch of the east when he was young ..that is nothing so it must be more!!

I cannot wait to find out..I just hope whatever it is Collista will not turn her back on Aiden (with his fine self..lol)...



Author's Response:

Well, thank ya ma'am!  I aim to please. lol  Oh, you guys are funny.  After calling him out in successive chapters for not being truthful, NOW you're afraid of what Aidan will reveal about his past?   LMAO, nene! I love it!  Man, Carla's the wicked witch and a cow.   Interestsing combination. 

I'm hoping Collista loves Aidan enough not to take off running for the hills too after the reveal.  We'll see very soon.  *wink*

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/09 04:59 am

Title: Chapter Fourteen

Thank you for updating so soon. It was great LOL@ the beast stirring, that was classic. I think Aidan under estimates Collista love for him or at least I hoping.  Glad Aidan is finally going to tell her what is up. He is giving Carla to much power by not coming clean. Look forward to what  Aidan has to say.

Author's Response:

You're welcome.  Glad you enjoyed the bit of humor.  I agree with all you've said.  And now on the reveal.  It won't be long in coming. 

Thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: PAW Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/09 04:44 am

Title: Chapter Fourteen

I like that Collista and Aidan are back together, despite his ex-lover's manipulations.  And I think it is high time that Aidan trusted Collista, like he wants her to trust him. 

Nyeesha



Author's Response:

I didn't you know you read TAOTS, Nyeesha.  Welcome aboard.  I know you're waiting on Her Dirty Little Secret.  I'm trying to finish up An Uncalculated Risk first.  Just one chapter to go and maybe an epilogue.  So HDLS is on the way.  lol

Now back to the story.  Yes, Aidan has been deficient in the trust department as regards Collista.  Hopefully, their newfound love with be able to withstand this first serious challenge.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/09/09 04:37 am

Title: Chapter Thirteen

well thank goodness that he didn't kill rocky lol. i love your storie girl they keep me laughing and smiling all the way thu. thannks for the updated.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you found the story, wwefan, and are enjoying it.  Aidan and Collista are two 'characters', aren't they?  LOL 

Thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/09 01:29 am

Title: Chapter Twelve

well glad that she has faith in her man. i was hoping he broke the woman hand for trying to touch what belongs to collista. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

LOL, wwefan.  You guys are vicious when it comes to Carla.  Aidan didn't break her hand but I'm pretty sure he wished he could though. 

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/09 01:27 am

Title: Chapter Thirteen

Now that a hit first think later type of man. Aiden didn't even give Rocky a chance, he just took him out as soon as the door was opened.

Author's Response:

I love that about Aidan.  He's so bookish that he doesn't seem like the type.  I think Collista brings the He-Man out in him.  lol

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/09 01:20 am

Title: Chapter Eleven

omg please please let Collista beat that carla ass please i beg you. what did carrla have adien do in the past? thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

LOL, wwefan, you are hilarious.  Everyone hates my Carla.  *ducks*   What does Carla have on Aidan?  You'll just have to keep reading to find out.   :-)

Thnks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/09 01:18 am

Title: Chapter Ten

is it that nasty ugly italy woman fowlling her? adien must did something huge and scared that the love of his life going to get hurt. thanks for the updated. i hope the woman trips over her dress.

Author's Response:

LOL, wwefan.  Carla is keeping tabs on Aidan, I believe.  But I wouldn't put it past her to also be spying on Collista.  She's the type. 

Aidan's secret must be something life changing because he's scared to death. I think most of Carla's power over him stems from his not wanting to hurt Collista than it does from trying to protect himself. 

Carla tripping over her dress! lol  I like the way you think.  Carla does need tripping up but maybe not in the way you think. 

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/09 01:15 am

Title: Chapter Nine

that bitch adien need to get rid of her  like they need dential reords to id her . Collista need to know that he loves her but soemthing it going to be fire works tonight at the gal. thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/09 01:04 am

Title: Additional Characters

nice pic of the cast.

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Date: 13/09/09 12:55 am

Title: Chapter Eight

wow so he was feeling her for a very very long time nice. It good that irsh got her back no matter what and that adien respect that in her. I hope they don't get caught. thanks for the updated

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/09 12:54 am

Title: Chapter Seven

well glad that aidan is back not dr.bell. He should had know wanted you get a taste you not going to quit it lol. I like the a couple they so cute togehter i bet irish jumping up and down right about now lol. love it girl and thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/09 12:38 am

Title: Chapter Six

wow about dam time lol finaly he cave in lol. girl that was some hot hot hot my computer on fire lol. They love each other so it was right to do what they did but they keeping secrets from each other. his past what ever it is and that fact she a heir wow. love your stories girl they are realy good thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/09 12:29 am

Title: Chapter Five

i feel irish just screw each other brains out already lol but it good he taking it slow because he doesn't wanted to mess up any thing btween them. love how he defentd her honor and i think dr.bell just made a new male friend who help him out in gym today. love the story girl and thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/09 12:14 am

Title: Chapter Four

dam you go girl get your man.Poor Dr. bell thinking that he can resite choclate but you can 't he wanted it wanted it bad. so glad that he didn't sleep with the blond. iris right if you going to rock the man world least call him by his first  name lol. thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/09 11:46 pm

Title: Chapter Three

Dam i thought collista would had pasted out when she seen him naked but me proably jump Dr. bell right then and there lol. she brought his favoirted food how nice of her and teaching himhow to wash dishes. lirs and rocky right they both love each other and need to make sure to take it slow. thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/09 11:27 pm

Title: Chapter Two

oooo the droctor love her he wanted to kiss her he wanted to take her on the desk and do naughty things to her lol. I see Iris her best friend notice something going on btween these two. Well i dont' blame her dumping the boy friend what the point keeping one if he going to cheat. thanks for the updated. you had me lmaof during the whole chapter lol.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/09 11:14 pm

Title: Chapter One

wow they realy don't like each other lol if looks could kill they both be dead.I like collina she a realy good friend taking  notes and helping her out. you don't find to many friends like that. That Dr.bell is a hottie make you wanted to be a very very naughty student lol. thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/09 11:01 pm

Title: Characters

like the cast pics.

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Date: 12/09/09 10:48 pm

Title: Chapter Thirteen

Poor Rocky getting hit for no reason.  Poor Aidan, jumping to conclusions.  Poor Collista and Lindsey, their long suffering girlfriends.  That was real sweet.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/09 05:37 am

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