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Title: Chapter Four

Now that took restraint. I mean they were a minute away from sealing the deal, and he damn sense of right and wrong juat had to kick in.


Author's Response:

LMAO!  Okay, I see I have another irate reader.  I'm sorry, and as Bell said, 'What else could I do?'  I don't think we'd like him so much if he wasn't the man he is.  But yeah, I know what you mean.  I want them together, too.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/03/09 03:39 am

Title: Chapter Four

Great update

Author's Response:

Why thank you.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story. 

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Gale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/03/09 03:29 am

Title: Chapter Three

I love Iris!! She is so to the point and a honest friend to Col.  I like how Col saw him naked and didn't run out of there like some school girl or tried to seduce him like a slut.  Very well done and very mature on both their parts.  Things are heating up.  Loved it.

Author's Response:

I love that you love Iris.  I really like her too. She's a great counterpoint to Colista I think.  We'll see more evidence of that later on in the story.

Collista, for all her youth, does seem to have a level of maturity beyond her years.  I think it will hold her in good stead.  Also, she does seem to have a moral base.  Not a bad thing in this day and age, huh?

Yes, both Bell an Collista have shown themselves to be likeable people.  Futhermore, ones who seem to have more in common than is apparent on the surface. 

Thanks for reivewing. 

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/03/09 03:24 am

Title: Chapter Two

I just began reading this story and I like it.  I like that he is able to admit to himself that he's attracted to her.  He's in a tough spot and he's angry with himself.  I really want to see where this goes and what will bring about the change.  I think he wants her around besides his better judgement.  Off to read the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Yes, Bell has quite a dilemma on his hands with this attraction that he knows will spell trouble. As an older man, he really thinks that he should be beyond this. But when has love ever been a respector of age? 

Yes, Bell is drawn to her and on more that just a physical level which I think he will have to admit too soon. 

The journey is the thing, isn't it?  How they get from obliviousness on Collista's part to self-realization, and on Bell's, acknowledgment that this thing--this atraction--has it's roots in something far deeper than transitory lust.

Thanks for reviewing.  

 

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/03/09 03:10 am

Title: Chapter Four

Oh lord, this story is getting better and better. How can he stop in a middle of a good love scene! Professor! :P

Author's Response:

:-D  Thank you.   

As for Bell's self-control, all I can say is the boy got yours, mine and a few other people's share.  Obviously.  lol   But we have yet to see just how long that lasts.  As he revealed, it's no longer just a case of unbridled lust.  Feelings are involved now.  I think that may tip the scale.  Just don't know in which direction.  lol

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/09 03:02 am

Title: Chapter Four

I love this story!! Poor Professor has not not got a chance...lol. She gonna get her man if she does not have him already!!! It was so cute how he sat outside her place trying to get up enough nerve to knock again..yeh he is so gone ..lol. AND THE ALMOST SEX WAS HOT AS HECK..it is going to be someting else when they finally come together..great job sweetie..I cannot wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thank you, Nene.  I'm so happy you're loving the story!  Yay! 

And no, I'd say Bell has less than a twenty percent chance of out running his feelings or Collista's pursuit.

I just think he's adorable the way he's so into Collista.  This is one lady that doesn't need to read, 'He's Just Not That into You.'  lol

I'm thrilled the make out scene came across as hot as I wanted them to.  And yes, these two with all the build up between them just may give each other coronaries once they finally consummate this relationship.

I'll try to be swift with an update.  I'm juggling a few projects but not to worry. 

Thanks for reviewing.:-)

Reviewer: neneburge Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/03/09 02:53 am

Title: Characters

Um, stamina...I'm sure he has plenty...*wipes away drool*

Author's Response:

L.M.A.O!!!   Bana, you've made my day.  Oh boy, I think Aidan has stamina and then some to spare.  *glances around and wipes away own drool*  Lol!

Thanks for the laugh and the review. 

Reviewer: bana05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/02/09 03:13 am

Title: Chapter Three

Excellent, from the first page to this one, love both characters. Can't wait to see how Collista gets her man. Thanks so much, for the fun read so far.. ...JV

Author's Response:

Aww.  Thanks so much.  That means a lot.  Truly.  I'm currently writing a chapter that is brand new because I always thought that one was needed in betwwen three and four.  So that's why the delay.  I'm hoping to post this weekend. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

Reviewer: Johnandvan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/02/09 11:49 pm

Title: Chapter Three

love the story so far looking forward to the update

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  I'm shooting for an update this weekend.  It's an entirely new chapter, so that's why the delay.

Thanks for reviewing.  

 

Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/02/09 06:03 am

Title: Chapter Three

I'm still stuck on the fact that she walked in on him naked. It took some real strenght not to either attack him, or running away.

Author's Response:

Lol!  As Collista will demonstrate basically all through the story, she's a very strong-willed chick.  lol

Thanks for reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/02/09 04:24 am

Title: Chapter Three

I really like this story..I really like the self discovery (with help of friends) that these two are embarking on...neither of them realized the attraction they had for each other until someone else brought it out of them..they are sweet, funny and kinda sexy! I cannot wait to see how Col gets her man..I don't think it will be as hard as she thinks but it shouldbe very interesting to saythe least!! I cannot wait for more sweetie..good job!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  Collista certainly was clueless, wasn't she?  Aidan, well, not so much although he's fighting the attraction for all he's worth. 

I don't know if Collista is gonna prevail that easily.  Aidan seems determined to tread the straight and narrow...at least for now.  lol

Thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: neneburge Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/02/09 03:15 am

Title: Characters

....oops that's me below.....

Author's Response:

Lol.  It's all good.  :-)

Reviewer: cccH Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/02/09 09:00 pm

Title: Chapter Three

Oh my!. Where to start?!......Absolutely love the insight you gave us into Collista's (what a lovely name!) psyche (her convo with Iris). One does tend to forget that 20yrs is still rather young, mentally, no matter what........As well, Collista's one ballsy young lady, staring and looking over Bell while he's nude like he's a Gucci bag. Darn, I know I would have closed my eyes, even at my advanced age!!!

Really like how you're building up these two characters and all the other supporting cast. A well rounded I/R romance. Thanks. Update soon!.

 

PS: (muttering) why weren't my college professors that hot and intriguing...................



Author's Response:

ccch, thanks so much.  I really tried to let the reader see into her mindset, and I'm so glad that I accomplished that.  One of my older sister's had a friend who's name was Collista.  When I decided to re-write the story I was tryinin to thing of a good name for my Toccara look-a-like and this one popped into my head.  I agree; it's a very pretty name for a pretty woman.  My sister's friend was pretty, too.  lol

I'm with on the closing of the eyes.  Sometimes I don't know how I write what I do.  I guess the characters take over and I have them do what's appropriate for them 'cuz I could never have done that either.  (I think I'm living vicariously.  lol  Just a thought.) 

Once again, thanks so much. I'm glad I'm accomplishing what I've set out to do...and that is to entertain in a hopefully fun and intelligent manner.  lol

Thanks for reviewing.

 

 

 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/02/09 09:00 pm

Title: Chapter Three

Oh my god, i am so in love with this story, can i order one like aidan for myself, this story is so tender yet filled with passion, i can't wait for the love scene and what follows when they are in a relationship together................thanks so much for making my day just a lil brighter with this wonderful story, please update ASAP

 

Alex



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  I'm thrilled that you're enjoying the story as much as you are.  That means I'm succeeding in fulling my goals, and that's great to know.  I'm hoping to update this weekend with an entirely new chapter.  I felt the story needed it between chapter 3 and the old 4. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Chocolatepink Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/02/09 08:09 pm

Title: Chapter Three

I am really loving this story so far!  The interactions between Collista and Aiden are so cute...wonder how long it will take them to act on their feelings for each other!

 I'm really looking forward to the next update!

 



Author's Response:

I'm truly glad to hear that you're enjoying the story...and the leads.  I really like them.  I know that sounds funny, but sometimes a writer's relationshipp with his or her characters can be a strange one.  Not so with these two for the most part.  lol

Well, we've seen that Aidan is a little more enlightened about his than poor Collista, so we'll see how it goes once their on a little more level playing field.  I think Collista has one up on Aidan in that she's more accepting of her feelings that he's shown himself to be.

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/02/09 05:43 pm

Title: Chapter Three

LOL!!! I don't thibk that I would be cleaning up for him. Nevertheless, this chapter was awesome.

Author's Response:

Thanks to Amyfuzzy for reviewing.  I hit the submit button before thanking her.

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Lol! Writing4Eternity, I know what you mean.  But I think it goes a little ways in showing that Collista is not the average (whatever that is.  Paris Hilton or Nicole Richie, anyone?) spoiled little rich girl.  But I hear you! lol

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reviewing.   

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Writing4Eternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/02/09 03:18 pm

Title: Chapter Three

I think girlfriend has more self-control than I do...and I'll just leave it at that! lol  Slow on the uptake but quick to do something about it is Collista.  I wonder if Bell will let her!

bana



Author's Response:

Lmao!  Bana, I believe from the comments I've read that Collista has more self-control than all of us put together. 

You make me laugh!  Poor Collista.  She was soooo clueless to Aidan's feelings and her own as well. 

Hmmm, Bell is torn, doesn't want to feel the way he does but there's no telling if he has the stamina to go the distance and resist once Collista gets on his...trail?  lol

Thanks for reviewling! 

 

Reviewer: bana05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/02/09 02:30 pm

Title: Chapter Three

i'm on the edge of my seat! lol btw i was soooo embarassed for him. yikes!

Author's Response:

Lol!  You so funny you should that you're embarrassed for Bell.  All my life if something embarrassing happened to someone else, I feel so bad just like it had happened to me, but for some reason (maybe 'cuz I'm the one making it happen. lol), I don't feel for him like I should.   But I totally understand your reaction.  It's mine in the real world, so that makes me feel that it's real to you.

Thanks for reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: dolce Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/02/09 09:05 am

Title: Chapter Three

Whoa! Now that was nice. Rocky and Iris pick up the attraction between Collista and Aidan. I'm glad they was able to tell Collista about her real feelings about the Professor. Oh Collista seeing Aidan naked was so sexy and funny because they had to pretend that it wasn't a big deal. :LOL: Yes, Collista wants the Professor now. I can't wait to see how she gets him too. Thanks for writing this chapter Resse.

Author's Response:

Stormy, I just feel for our poor Collista.  So clueless.  I share your love of Rocky and Iris's insight.  Someone needed to see what was as plain as the noses on their faces.

Lol!  I'm glad the "nekked" scene was amusing...and sexy, of course.  The readers have run the gamut of emotions on this scene, and it's nice to read of all the reactions.

Yes, let the games begin for A and C, and we'll see who prevails.  lol

Thanks for reviewing.  And writing this chapter was my pleasure.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/02/09 07:59 am

Title: Chapter Two

I was wondering how long Collista was going to hold off on working for him. The attration between these two is off the charts, even Iris picked up on it.

Author's Response:

Sweet Pea, Collista might not have been as quick to work for him had he not shown up on her door.  I think that further re-enforced the little truce they had going from earlier.

I'm glad the sexiness and angst came through.  And that Iris is a downy one, isn't she?  Thank goodness because Collista was so clueless on the uptake this time.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/02/09 05:17 am

Title: Chapter Two

Great update, more more

Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I'm going to be updating this weekend.  Crossing fingers and toes. 

Thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: Gale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/02/09 05:10 am

Title: Chapter Two

WOW, old Professor better make sure he can keep it together.  I don't want him to really cross the line here.  But I can see some type of connection between him and Collista.  She decided to take the job.  WOW good for her.

Author's Response:

LOL!  Well, Bell is gonna try to resist temptation, letitia.  However, Collista is a pretty determined girl, so we'll see what happens. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/02/09 03:27 am

Title: Chapter Two

This is a good story so far... and I knew the Professor was attracted to Collista and it seems that Iris knows this as well

Adian and Collista working together is going to be fun to watch unfold.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  Yes, Bell's secret has been discovered. 

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/02/09 12:15 am

Title: Chapter Two

Oh this chapter was just perfection, the longing is gonna kill me, such chemisstry and she is clueless, when are they gonna kiss or do something, i feel his frustration...thanks for the update more please...

 

 

alex



Author's Response:

Oh, Alex.  Patience now.  lol  I'm so glad you like the chapter, and yes, the angst is there, isn't it?  Aidan is going to have company in his frustration as their little dance progesses.  lol

Thanks for reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: Chocolatepink Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/02/09 09:11 pm

Title: Characters

You respond to your reviewers!!!. Awesome. That's an even more added incentive to leave a review.

 Ok, the age difference makes me roll my eyes. You see, I've never been a fan of older men/ younger women. It's so trite. Nonetheless, I absolutely love when the hero's in a predicament whereby the heroine he wants is out of his reach, hence your premise, college Professor/student pairing preempts my totally not giving this a look-see-read.

Update soon!



Author's Response:

Lol!  Yes, I respond. 

cccH, it's so funny (and I did lol at your statement) that you'd mention you're dislike of large age descrepancies between the male and female character when the male is older.  I don't particular care for them myself.  It has been overly done. However, like you,I allow the story to decide if I think that little pet peeve should be overlooked, especially if it's integral to the story as it is in this one.

I couldn't have him be any younger or her any older so I was left with what I had to work with.  However, I hope as the story progresses that aspect becomes just a footnote when considered with the rests of the story's elements.

Thanks for reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: cccH Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/02/09 09:02 pm

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