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Title: Chapter Two

Oh Aidan has it bad for Collista, He can hardly get through being in the same room with her let along she helping him with his hamstring. I enjoyed Collista friends too. It good to have a strong support of friends like Collista has. So Collista is going to work for Dr. Bell. *yummy* Great update Reese.

Author's Response:

Stormy, Aidan was at a low point.  I think he's a principled man and this situation isn't easy for him. 

I'm glad you enjoyed part of the cast that's shown up so far.  And yes, Collista has decided to bite the bullet and work for Dr. Bell.  Was there ever any doubt?  lol

Thanks for reviewing.   

 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24/02/09 07:19 pm

Title: Chapter Two

So far so good.

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Stay tuned there is a lot more to come. 

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Writing4Eternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/02/09 04:34 pm

Title: Chapter Two

omg i love this already. until you narrated in his point of view i had no idea the professor had the hots for collista. he does a damn good job of hiding. i wonder how long that will last.

Author's Response:

Hah!  Aidan is trying to keep his feelings under wraps, isn't it?  I guess he has succeeded so far with the exception of Iris.  Collista sure doesn't seem to have a clue.  And yes, it will be interestsing to see how long he can last.

Thanks for reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: dolce Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/02/09 10:16 am

Title: Chapter One

Oh this is sounding good!! I can't wait for the next chapter or possibly chapters...hint, hint:-) Just kidding. Great job!

Author's Response:

Lol!  I'm glad that you're wanting more. So no worries.  I'll be updating soon. 

Thanks for  reading and reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/02/09 05:54 am

Title: Chapter One

I am so loving this story.  It is refreshing and I can't wait for more.

 

Thanks for the ride.

Ro



Author's Response:

Oooh, that is so nice to here.  I'm glad you love the story and that it is a bit off the beaten path.  I hope so. 

Thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: Romantic Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/02/09 01:34 am

Title: Chapter One

Poor Aidan,  he has it really bad for collista, i loved the pace and the characters of this story,please update, its gonna be a good one

 

Alex

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Alex, Aidan really is in a quandry.  i feel for him, too. 

So glad that the pacing is just right.  I don't want to rush things or have it go to slow either.

Thanks so much for reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: Chocolatepink Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/02/09 09:29 pm

Title: Characters

Um, yes, I'm excited to see where this will go, especially when it involves a Toccara lookalike, because she is fantastic and fierce, yes.  I do have a weak spot for semi-forbidden romances, and this one appears right up my alley!

 

Bana



Author's Response:

LOL!  I'm so glad you're excited. 

I adore Toccara, and to me, she was the perfect Collista.  I had no one else in mind.  Full figured, sexy and gorgeous. 

Then we have a shared sisterhood as I love semi-forbidden romantic relationships, too.  I'm gonna try my darnest to do your expections justice.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: bana05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/02/09 02:51 pm

Title: Chapter One

Ok, you got me, I'm hooked. Please don't make me wait a full week to see these two go at it again.

Author's Response:

I won't. lol  I'm going to re-write the second chapter asap. 

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: islandlass Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/02/09 02:38 pm

Title: Chapter One

Oh I'm going to enjoy this new story Reese. I love the setting and plot very much. I never been into art, but I'm looking forward to get into it as this story process. I'm enjoying Aidan and Collista already. Great chapter Reese.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you're liking what I've submitted so far.   Don't worry too much about feeling lost as far as the art portion in the story.  It's easy to follow and not terribly complicated.  I'm enjoying writing for Aidan and Collista.

Thanks for reviewing. 

 

 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/02/09 07:19 am

Title: Chapter One

Realy good start. The sexual tension between the two is mind-blowing.

Author's Response:

Glad you're liking the story so far.  Ooh, goody.  I was hoping the tension between the two was palable.  Whatever their mouths may be saying, they're hot for each other.  lol

Thanks for reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/02/09 06:02 am

Title: Characters

great start. I really like the tension between those 2. I can't wait until the get it on.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the encouragement.  I'm glad that the reluctant attraction between these two is coming through.  You won't have too long to wait.  These two are hot to trot for each other and eventually Collista, who isn't as in tune with her feelings as Aidan is, will come to realize what this antagonism between them really is all about.

Thanks for reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/02/09 05:27 am

Title: Chapter One

Great start, update soon

Author's Response:

I'm going to try to update again as soon as possible this week.

Thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: Gale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/02/09 04:16 am

Title: Chapter One

Okay, I am so loving this story thus far.  I can't wait for what you have instore next.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/02/09 03:34 am

Title: Characters

it is incredibly hard to read. you should probably seperate it out into paragraphs or give the dialogue parts their own lines or double space it

Author's Response:

For some reason, I'm having trouble getting my text, which is properly spaces and paragraphed, to show up that way.  I'm working on it having encountered this before.

Reviewer: Imani Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/02/09 12:00 am

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