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Title: Chapter Seventeen

Great update Reese. It was good to see Collista getting information for Aidan from her step-mother and father. I didn't even realize the importance of an art collection and how much people have protection for it. Thanks for sharing that information and I look forward to the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: Thanks Stormy.  Yes, art is very important and it's a world all by itself.  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/09/09 04:11 pm

Title: Chapter Seventeen

Little Miss Colista is diggging out all the info she can to help her man..I hope Aiden can see how much better it is when they work toegthee..

You know I did not realize Colista was not 21 tears old yet..Dr. Bell is really robbing teh cradle..rotfl..!!

I loved how she worked her step mom and Dad to get the answers she needed to without them even suspecting anything was wrong!!

I will be glad when the threat of her being his stident is over and they can come out from hiding!!

Great job sweetie...it is coming together right nice..I cannot wait to see what happens whe Aiden mets Papa!!

 

 



Author's Response:

LOL, Nene.  That's why Aidan was so reluctant to get involved with her.  He thought he WAS robbing the cradle. 

Collista straight up snowed her peeps without them being none the wiser.  I'm proud of her, too.

Thanks for reviewing.  Oh, and yeah, Aidan meeting Ben should be...interesting. 

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/09/09 03:17 am

Title: Chapter Seventeen

If Aiden comes to dinner, they better work hard at hiding their feelings for each other. Their looks always give them away, and a daddy can usually tell when a man is interested in his little girl.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/09/09 12:31 am

Title: Chapter Seventeen

Oooh, this is such a mystery... I lobve it

Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the story, D.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/09 05:09 pm

Title: Chapter Seventeen

I really like the insight we get here about Collista's family. I still want to know more, but it was nice to see her on her own.

Reviewer: femmenoire Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/09/09 05:00 pm

Title: Chapter Seventeen

i'm loving how she got her mans back trying to help him get under neath that devil hands. it good thing that she left when she did before she told daddy she seeing teacher  hope they don't get caught and dad and step mom house lol. love the story girl and thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/09 05:37 am

Title: Chapter Seventeen

Thank you for another wonderful update! It was great. Collista got a lot of information Cant wait to see ow all of this plays out.

Author's Response: Thanks PAW.  And thanks for the review. :-)

Reviewer: PAW Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/09 05:00 am

Title: Chapter Sixteen

I know I reviewed this chapter, but it must been lost. I love the chapter Reese. Aidan and Collista are beautiful together and you can feel the love between the two. I love their lovemaking, talking and Aidan present to Collista. They really do fix each other perfectly, but we all know a storm is coming. I just hope that both of them can stand the rain in the end. Thanks for the update Reese!!

Author's Response:

That's okay, Stormy.  Glad you liked the Aidan and Collista's small window of peace.  It's going to have to sustain them for quite a while. 

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/09/09 10:39 pm

Title: Chapter Sixteen

oh, i love it. they're just so darn sweet together... keep it coming!

Author's Response:

Thank you Femm.  Glad you enjoyed it.  And thanks for the review.

Reviewer: femmenoire Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/09/09 05:14 am

Title: Chapter Sixteen

I want to see what wickedness you have in store for this couple.

Author's Response:

SP, something wicked this way is coming.  LOL  So hold onto your seat.

Thanks for reading and the review.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/09/09 05:07 am

Title: Chapter Sixteen

LOove them both..the professor is extremley sexy and perfect for our girl..she is perfect for him..I am glad they are really starting to realize that !!

This was sexy, sweet and romantic!! I loved it sweetie!! Great job!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Nene.  Glad you liked the chapter.  The fun is going to start right soon, and Collista and Aidan deserve a bit of alone time. 

It's going to be a bumpy ride. 

Also, my apologies to Red.  I called her Nene in my response to her review.  Sworry Red. 

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/09/09 03:29 am

Title: Chapter Sixteen

ok love the gift the key to his place very nice. yeah i think he better call the insurance people for he past out from all that loving lol but sure collista can bring him back to life lol. girl i just love the story the couple the dram the hot loving everything good work and thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Wow Wwefan. 

What a wonderful review.  Thanks again.

 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/09 11:30 pm

Title: Chapter Sixteen

oh lovely!!!! this is nice!

Author's Response:

Thanks D.  :-)

Now on to the drama. 

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/09 01:16 pm

Title: Chapter Sixteen

Awww...they are so sweet...but yeah you can smell the DRAMA coming!

 

Loved the update!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it, Nene.  Yep.  Drama is definitely right around the corner.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/09/09 06:32 am

Title: Chapter Sixteen

This was an excellent chapter.  I love Aidan and Collista.  What a great couple!

Author's Response:

Thanks Juju.  I thought they needed a moment to just be a couple before the hi-jinks.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/09 05:48 am

Title: Chapter Sixteen

Awesome and hot update!!! The key to his apartment was a nice touch, I liked that. I just love Collista and Adian they are a hot couple!!!  I hope there love for one another will weather what ever storm is coming.

Author's Response:

They are kinda hot, aren't they? lol  Glad you liked the key scene.  I thought it was time to move them along a bit.  Collista having a key to Aidan's apartment will serve them well in the future. 

I'm hoping their love is strong enough too and I think the chapter gives us plenty of hope that it is.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: PAW Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/09 04:54 am

Title: Chapter Fifteen

Well, I must admit I'd been sleeping on this story and shame on it, it's fabulous!  I look forward to reading much more.

Author's Response:

LOL!  Better a little late than never.  Besides, I know how it is. There's so many stories on this site that I'd like to read, and although I love writing my own, I some times feel like I'm in prison because I can't do what I'd like to and that is read other's work. 

Anyway, I'm so glad that you found a little time and chose TAOTS as one of the one's to read.  That's a great compliment.  :-) 

There's more to come and thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/09/09 05:00 pm

Title: Chapter Fifteen

Reese, great update dear. I'm sorry I was late to share my thoughts. I been so busy, but I finally glad to read about Aidan past. The poor dear, so it was his father's past that has a cloud over him and Carla is willing to tell all who want to listen about his father's past and his relationship with Collista. Though Carla is evil with using Aidan past against him, I still like a woman because she's good at what she does. *LOL* Hmm, I'm looking forward to see how do the two lovebirds get through this problem and still be together without people finding out about their loveaffair.

 BTW, I'm so enjoying a very bright Collista. There no stupid women in this story!!! *hugh-five*



Author's Response:

Stormy!   *hugs*  I know you've been swamped lately, so no biggie. 

Yes, Aidan's problems are linked to his father's past.  Collista really came through for him, and I think the way she did not only demonstrates her humaness but her metal.  She's tougher than she has seemed to be in prior chapters and is showing her smarts, as you pointed out.  No dumb women in this story.  *high five back at ya* 

As for Carla, I'm tickled by the fact that you actually like her.  It's you against the "world" in that respect.  LOL  But as you say, you kind of have to give her her due as a villainess because she is good at what she does.  But hopefully not too good.

I'm glad you're enjoying the ride; it's going to get bumpier.  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/09/09 03:43 pm

Title: Chapter Fifteen

Well now that is th secret..that was not bad at all..I could even deal with Aiden being the theft as long as h never hurt anyone and he still loved our girl..lol!!

Collista handled it very maturely coming to her man's defense was awesomeness....they both together will get to the real reason that cow Carla is there and they will together figure out how to destroy her and keep her out of their lives forever!!

I am loving this story sweetie..you are doing your thing!! Great job Reese!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Nene!  Yeah, the secret isn't as ominous as it seemed to be, is it?  LOL at your accepting Aidan even if he was a former crook as long as he hadn't killed anyone.  Oh, and he still loved Collista.  I love it!  A dedicated Aidan fan, I see. 

Collista is finally coming into her own and giving us some signs of perhaps the man who raised her, her grandfather who had to have been a fairly tough cookie to establish a successful corporation at a time when black businesses of the magnitude his became were anomalies.

So here's to Papa Jonas Dixon's granddaughter.   Carla may just have met her match!

Thanks for reviewing.  *hugs*

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/09/09 03:20 am

Title: Chapter Fifteen

I would like to know what Carla wants to involve Aidan in too.  Hopefully, Collista will be able to figure it out during her investigation.  Excellent chapter.  Can Collista slap the hell out of Carla just once, please? LOL

Author's Response:

Thanks, Jujubee.  Collista's investigation is going to unearth some interesting information.  How they deal with it is another matter, however. 

LOL.  Carla just can't catch a break can she? Not that she deserves one.  Hmmmm.  I'll see what I can do. lol

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/09/09 08:57 pm

Title: Chapter Fifteen

Awesome update!!! So glad Adian got it all out in the open. I hope Caral pays and I think Collista is just the woman to make her. Look forward to more

Author's Response:

Thanks PAW!

It was time for Aidan to come clean to Collista really showed her character in taking the unusual situation in stride, so to spreak.  Atta girl!  I'm in agreement.  I think Collista believes she can handle what Carla dishes out.  We will see.

Thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: PAW Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/09/09 03:42 pm

Title: Chapter Fifteen

So glad that Aiden didn't have anything stolen art. I'm also glad that he finally Collista and that she is strong to not past judgement. I Love this couple.   Keep up the good work Reese. ( may I have another please lol)



Author's Response:

Thanks, kiki.  It's a relief that Aidan finally came clean, and Collista showed her metal in this chapter.  She has a slightly different style than Iris, but I'd say she's just as tough.  She will need to be.

Thanks for reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: kiki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/09/09 07:16 am

Title: Chapter Fifteen

Awesome chapter!  I was actually beginning to think Aidan had something to do with the theft of the art.  I am glad to know it was his dad and not him!

I can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thanks Red.  Yeah, Aidan's reluctance to come clean to Collista was starting to make him seem like he had something to hide in regards to himself.  Stay tuned.  There's lots more to come.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/09 06:51 am

Title: Chapter Fifteen

i hope he tells her the rest of the secrets before he lose her. girl was about to head to bed until i seen the story updated couldn't go to sleep with out reading it first lol. i'm glad he shared what going on with him. it sad he paying for his father sins and hope that evil old hoe bag and her hubby go away and leav bell and collian alone but they going to find a way so he can be free from everything. love the story girl good work and thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

I think he's laid all his cards on the table, wwefan.  He really doesn't know what Carla and Domenici are up to except that it probably has something to do with the exhibit.  

Now as for Carla going away and leaving Aidan and Collista alone.  We know that ain't gonna happen.  lol

I'm glad you're enjoying the story and thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/09/09 06:23 am

Title: Chapter Fourteen

I wonder what truth Aidan has to tell Collista. I hope it's something forgiveable.

Author's Response:

Well, you'll just have to keep reading to find out.  LOL 

Thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: karen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/09 11:58 pm

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