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Title: Chapter Six

Great Story!

Author's Response: Thank you.  Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: loveisreading Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 05:47 am

Title: Chapter Six

Bravo Reese! Though I'm sad that the story is over, I'm so glad that Alexx and Ryan worked it out. I love their talk because it was real and Ryan and Alexx laid everything in the open. Ryan was so sure the Alexx was finish with him, he didn't realize it when Alexx was tying to say the she wanted to be with him. Oh and did she ever wanted to be with him. Lovely and hot love scene Reese!! It really display the growing love the have for each other. After some teeth pulling from Ryan again, Alexx gave into Ryan's and her relationship. I'm so happy for Ryan and Alexx. Yes, there will be some issues that will come along with them being with each other, but I believe the will worked out everything as they grow together in love. Great ending Reese!!!

Author's Response:

Aw!  Yes, I too am feeling a bit deflated although happy to have finished the story in a satisfactory manner.  At least, I hope it is satisfactory. lol

Ryan and Alexx are a great couple to write for because they are interesting individually.  Neither has really been tapped as they should have on the show and explored.  It was great fun fleshing them out a bit.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.   

 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 05:33 am

Title: Chapter Five

Alexx should feel shame. She was upset that Ryan would be mad not give her a change to explain her presence there with Preston, but she wouldn't let him explain his actions with Natalia! I want these two to hurry up and get it together.

Author's Response:

Alexx is really the one who fell below expections this time.  Ryan of course screwed up but that doesn't make Alexx's faux paux any less grevious.

Hopefully it will all even out in the wash.  Thanks for reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 12:14 am

Title: Chapter Five

Oh, that was a good chapter Reese. I'm glad the Alexx and Preston settle their issues and became friends. Though I have to say that Preston had a lot of nerve to think that he could start something with Alexx though he was enaged. Men! And Ryan just had to make things worst with hanging out Natalie. But in a way, I don't blame him because Alexx was giving him the cold shoulder. Yet, he has to know this attraction and love is just as hard for Alexx to open up to as it is for him. I have a feeling we will see things get settle for the both of them in the last chapter. Thanks for writing and updaint this chapter Reese!



Author's Response:

Alexx and Preston have managed to remain friends even though Preston is still not a supporter of her potential relationship with Ryan.  We got to see that he truly does care for Alexx though when he laid his agenda aside to foster that which was in her best interest.

Alexx has a big decision to make.  Ryan is all in and she has yet to be.  The resultant confrontation should be interesting.

Thanks for reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/08/09 07:22 pm

Title: Chapter Five

oooh girl, you left me hanging. I absolutely love this fic. I like the idea of Alexx and Ryan together. I hope they can work it out. The older woman, younger man totally works for me. Please write another chapter soon. Good job. This is hot, hot, hot.

Author's Response:

Lol!  It wasn't intended as I hate cliffies.  Yet it couldn't be helped.  However, as promised and update is on the way, sooner rather than later. 

Glad you like Rylexx.  I'm very partial to them and think that Khandi Alexander and Jonathan Togo always had red hot chemistry only the show was too chicken to go there.  But not me.  lol

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/08/09 06:18 pm

Title: Chapter Five

You're evil personified!!!  How could you stop there?!?!

This show bores me to sleep, but the way you write it...If you wrote for the show I'd be there with bells on every Monday at 10.

Alexx was wrong and Ryan was wrong.  I hope they can work things out with a nice, truthful, honest conversation.

Great job.  Are you working on the sequel?



Author's Response:

You don't like CSI:Miami? Aux contraire.  lol  I'm glad that you decided to give Rylexx a chance.  And thank you very much.  That's a really nice compliment. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

I'll let you know about the sequel.  lol

Reviewer: YHH Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/08/09 05:03 pm

Title: Chapter Five

I am not sure why Ryan keeps trying with Alexx.  She keeps shooting him down she came the event with another man that she knows that Ryan doesn't trust.  Then she has the nerve to get mad at him because he is dancing with someone else...please she started the mess by bringing that sneaky bastard along to the event.  Whom admitted that he was enjoying Ryan acting like an ass until he realized how it was upsetting Alexx.  As far as Horatio goes...dude needs to mind his own business.  The new lab tech is a piece of work and she is going to have problems in that lab because they all have mad respect for Alexx.  Thanks

Author's Response:

Wow.  If I didn't know better I'd think you were reading my mind.  Yes, Alexx is now the one with something to prove to Ryan, who for all his faults, has been honest about his feelings.

Let's see see who does the pursuing this time around.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/08/09 05:16 am

Title: Chapter Five

Oh WOW!!!  Thank you Reese for giving us an Update.  I LOVE this story and have been checking twice a day to see if you updated.  Ryan is just a HOTTIE and Alexx complements him well.  I seldom see stories with an older Black woman and a younger while man, so thank you, Thank You, THANK YOU!!!!!!!

I can't wait for your next Update this week!!

Nyeesha



Author's Response:

You're welcome.  Rylexx is one of my all-time favorite couples.  And the editing for the last chapter is going so well that it might be up sooner than expected. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Nyeesha Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/08/09 03:07 am

Title: Chapter Four

Can we expect an Update this weekend?  Can't wait to see what happens next.  What will Alexx do?  What will Ryan feel forced to do to keep "his" woman..   Please Update SOOOOOOOOOOON!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading.  I've updated although it took a while.  The final chapter, number six, will be up no later than next week.  Stay tuned.

 

 

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/07/09 03:32 pm

Title: Chapter Two

Wow!  This was a WONDERFUL Update.  SOOOOOOO HAWT! Ryan knows what he wants and he is NOT afraid to go after it with both barrels.  It is just what Alexx needs. 

 PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  This chapter was a bit difficult to write.  I'm glad that you enjoyed it.  Ryan is indeed the man for Alexx.  Let's just hope that she sees it that way.

 

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/07/09 07:42 am

Title: Chapter One

I LOVE this story and this couple!  Alexx and Ryan are really good together.  And Ryan's decision to step up his steadfast quiet pursuit of Alexx makes me impatient to see more. 

Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  They really have a lot of chemistry together even on the show between Khandi and Jon.  I truly love writing about these two.

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/09 04:40 pm

Title: Chapter Four

I just love Ryan in CSI: Miami.  And I like having a postive role model in Alexx.  The two of them together works wonderfully for me.  I hope you can give us another Update.  I don't think Ryan's actions are immature or juvenile.  He is just trying to protect what he considers his...Alexx.  And I think it is WAYYYYY past time for these two to have "sealed" the deal.  They care for each other...it is obvious.  Now, it is time for Alexx to let Ryan in OR time for Ryan to storm the castle.

I can hardly wait.  Please don't make us wait too long for the next Update.



Author's Response:

I've already thought that Alexx and Ryan would make a great couple because of their contrasting characters.  Ryan has always respected Alexx and held her in such affection and esteem that it's not much of a stretch to me that if she was free, he would be trying to get with her. 

It's good to have another opinion of Ryan and his character or lack thereof.  lol  He definitely doesn't see himself as immature just determined in his objectives. 

Thanks for reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/09 07:28 am

Title: Chapter Four

It's been a while, but I wasn't disappointed.

Excuse my language, but Preston is a dick and I hate that Ryan ended up being the one seen as doing wrong.



Author's Response:

Preston has issues.  And in this instance, he hasn't been entirely honest, so Ryan is somewhat justified in his actions.  At least his motives were right.  I think Alexx took issue with his execution. 

Nevertheless, it was interesting to see how Ryan's actions are seen in a less than positive light even when he's trying to do right.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/06/09 06:26 am

Title: Chapter Four

Glad to see this story back, it was missed.

OK Preston is a JERK, he as a fiance waiting for him, yet he is all under Alexx, what did he think was going to happeen, Ryan was right he is a Dog.

Alexx needs to just admit that she loves Ryan, girl the man is HOT just GO FOR IT.

Ryan was kinda wrong for "spying" on Preston, but IMHO Alexx kinda used this to push Ryan away a little b/c she doesn't want to admit her feeling for him.

Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Love your comments.  Yes, Alexx just needs to go for it.  The Ryan/Preston dymanic is one where the blame seems to keep changing hands, doesn't it?  lol

Hopefully, Alexx making a decision will put an end to the back and forth. 

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/06/09 08:13 pm

Title: Chapter Two

Damn. Hot. And I must say, I'm pleasantly surprised that they didn't go all the way. Though that scene in her office was extremely good, I'm glad he held off. I'm not sure why exactly he did but redardless, I'll be reading farther to find out.

Ah, Preston of Grey's Anatomy. Another show I'm not such a big fan of, but sometimes I do find myself watching it because on occasion it's not so bad. Though the woman who plays the title character annoys the crap out of me....

I digress - i like this dude, despite that. He's sexy. And a nice competition for younger, earnest Ryan. Good stuff. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter.  Ryan is a bit of an enigma, but he does love Alexx.  Those feelings keep him from moving too fast. 

I stopped watching Grey's when the character Preston Burke exited.  The show lost it's appeal for me.  Preston was/is a very complex character.  He's not a bad guy, but one who's conflicted...and perhaps with good reason. 

He is a good contrasting suitor for Alexx with Ryan on the other spectrum. 

Thankks for reviewing. 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: kendrawriter Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/06/09 12:34 pm

Title: Chapter One

Excellent start. Just enough to get the juices a-goin and get me to the next chapter pronto. I admit, I'm somewhat of an anti-fan of CSI. Just don't like it very much. 

Nevertheless, your writing has me getting into to these characters, and I am more than willing to set aside my usual disdain for cop shows and just sit back and enjoy the ride.... 



Author's Response:

Well, this is wonderful to have the antithesis of a fan reading a Rylexx story.  I'm flattered and happy that you gave the story a chance. 

You know, I figured most would think the story was about solving crimes, so I purposely stayed away from that angle and just got into their relationship.  I personally never got enough of them together without a crime in the way or a third party involved with them.  So interest was in focusing on the elements building a presonal romantic relationship for Rylexx because they never got that treatment onscreen on the show.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: kendrawriter Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24/06/09 11:26 am

Title: Characters

FYI - I think his name is Ryan Wolfe, isn't it? You labeled him Woods. : )

Author's Response: Thanks I corrected the error.  And that for the reivew.

Reviewer: kendrawriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/06/09 10:53 am

Title: Characters

Cleavage! She looks good.......I'm in.

Author's Response:

LOL.  Khandi/Alexx is hot.  She had the best body on the entire show.   If you don't believe me, look up Talk Radio clips on youtube.  The woman's body is just sick.  lol

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: kendrawriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/06/09 10:46 am

Title: Characters

Cleavage! She looks good.......I'm in.

Author's Response: LOL.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: kendrawriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/06/09 10:38 am

Title: Chapter Four

Okay I don't even watch these shows and I thought this was a good pairing and a great idea.

Author's Response:

Thanks.  I love CSI:Miami and those two characters especially.  They really should have explored them together.  Oh well, thank goodness for fan fiction.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Acorn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/06/09 05:51 am

Title: Chapter Four

It's great to see an update, Reese.

I have to agree with Alexx: both Ryan and Preson are acting like jackasses. I like the smooth intergration with Grey's. So, now we know what Preston was up to when he left Cristina at the altar. Preston is an ass for leaving Cristina, but it explains him behaviour. Preston is pretty hung on race, so I can see him as a man who wanted the typical middle class black family that uplifts the race by existing, and marying Cristina screws with that. So, of course he runs to Alexx, who he thinks would understand, and she does, but she's not about to get into anything with him so he can have his little fantasy come true.

And Ryan, so immature. He's whining because Alexx isn't paying attention to him. I wantd to smack him. I think if he wants to be in a serious relationship with Alexx, a woman with children he's going to have to do some serious growing up. How in the hell is going to discipline if he needs some discipline himself?



Author's Response:

Alexx called them both out and hit the nail on the head: idiots both of them.   You got everything I was trying to convey with the Grey's scenario.  That is Preston's challenge and dilemma. 

Ryan is going to have to demonstrate some self-restraint at some point.  If for no other reason than he does have something to prove to Alexx who seems torn between what she wants and what she thinks she should want.

Thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: luckybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/06/09 03:30 am

Title: Chapter Four

I LIKE THIS STORY A LOT. PLEASE UPDATE/



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing the story.  The next update won't be long in coming.  Seriously.  :)

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/06/09 12:15 am

Title: Chapter Four

I love the two of them together. The sexual attraction is so palpable. Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  I'm glad you're enjoying them.  I won't be long at all with the next chapter. 

Thanks for reviewing.

 

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/06/09 11:01 pm

Title: Chapter Four

he is so jealous he can;t even see straight, i like it he's all like i have been cultivationg you like a rare flower and som other bee thinks he's gonna pollinate my hard work, naww i will pollinate all over you and mark you as mine so all other bees must stay away. hilarious.

Author's Response:

This is the best analogy ever.  Hilarious hardly does it justice.  Leave it to the med. student to come up with that one.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  

 

Reviewer: monique32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/06/09 10:34 pm

Title: Chapter Three

I have to say again that you have   made Ryan "dead sexy" to me in this fic, i mean gosh damn. I may have to actually go wath some old CSI: Miami now and I hate that damn show, that is impressive and once again with the balls of steele that ol' boy is totin' around, I am quite sure he has a hernia now.lol

Author's Response:

Wow.  You hate CSI_Miami, MoniQ?  That's both hilarious and a great compliment. Well, I'm just glad that you decided to give the story a try.  Alexx, Ryan and Preston are really wonderful characters.  All are riddled with flaws which makes them interesting and fun to write for and about.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: monique32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/06/09 10:23 pm

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