That was an amazing story! I loved how flawed the main character was yet so well written for that we could emphathise with her. Despite the fact she was so cruel to her daughter.
It’s a great portrait of how paralyzing loss can be. You get sucked into this vortex. I loved Toni, and how strong she was. If I was her, I might have gotten impatient. I would have just taken Mia and left. Which would have been the wrong thing to do. So yeah, I really admire her.
Great story! I look forward to reading more from you!!
Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]Date: 30/04/09 02:46 am
An absolutely beautiful story! It was heartbreaking to read, but amazing all the same! I am glad that Toni did not give up on Layla and continued to be there for her friend.
I am also glad that she got through rehab and that her daughter recovered from the poison!
Awesome job! :)
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]Date: 31/03/09 12:17 am
Wow!!! I am speechless. That was riveting. It's hard to say that I can't believe that Layla fell apart and let her life crumble away like that all because she lost a loved one becuase I fell where she was coming from. But, I have never been in her shoes so I honestly can't say that I would or wouldn't react in that way. I'm just happy that she chose life and her daughter, Mia. I also love that she had a good friend to stand behind her through think and thin and through ups and downs. Great Story!!!!
Reviewer: Vie Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/03/09 04:14 am