This just keeps getting better and better. Love the pace, the suspense, the dialogue, the characterization and, of course, the romance. Can't wait to see what happens when Martha and Dean get more than 2 minutes uninterrupted. More, please!
Author's Response:
Hi KP!
Thanks for reading, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. I'm trying to keep all that going, and keep the pace moving forward as well, don't want it to drag too much. And Dartha love will happen very soon. Uniterrupted. For the most part. :)
Reviewer: KP Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/08/08 05:49 am
I wanted to slap Ellen so bad!!! She knows how Dean feels about his brother and Father, and then to throw it in his face like that was just mean. SKANK! (In case you couldn't tell, I can't stand anyone trying to go off on my Dean!!!!!!!)
So now the Doctor knows Dean's secret. Maybe now they can figure out how the switch occurred.
I WAS FINALLY READY FOR SOME DEAN/MARTHA ACTION AND THAT PUNK COMES AND INTERRUPTS THEM!!!!!! AHHHHHH!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL, she is a bitch, isn't she. I loved writing her though. And the stuff about Dean's dad, I had to get into that too, because it's so important to Dean's character. And yes, the Doctor knows about Sam which is good. Should move things along a little more.
I promise the Dean/Martha action will come very soon, but not before a bit off ass kicking. :)
Thanks for reading Sweet Pea!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 25/08/08 06:08 pm
Okay, as usual this was awesomely fantastic. Loved the Supernatural stuff. Dean and Martha are just too damn hot. Loved his line about her ex-being a fool. And this line...
“You didn’t see the girl.” Martha said, and his grip on her hand tightened once more.
“I see this one.” Dean replied. “That’s all I need to know.”
Swoon worthy.
And okay, I knew they would get interrupted but by Gordon? Is it me? You hate me right? That's it isn't it :-(
The Doctor stuff was just bad ass. You captured that dark side of him perfectly and I loved his dialogue about that thing seeking vengence. Great you brought out the demon stuff with Sam, and loved Donna and Sam arguing about the key.
A hello, welcome to the TARDIS, go on, have a key
Freaking LOVE Donna Noble.
Doctor/Donna. *sigh*
Great update. Great, great update.
Author's Response:
Oh, I'm glad you liked that line. Cause Dean is pretty damn swoon worthy. LOL, I knew you'd hate the Gordon stuff, I think I am picking on you just a little. Gordon's so damn useful too.
And yay! on you liking the Docwho stuff, I always get worried about that part. And Sam and Donna are my new favorite couple, I'm so shippping them right now. :)
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/08/08 04:55 am
I have to say that I hate you just a little bit for not giving me my Martha/Dean sexing, but it's all good. It'll come in time and so will they. ;)
I can't wait to see how this all fits together. The planet being afraid of Sam means that the demon world trumphs the scientific. You can have planets that are alive but that at the end of the day there's some serious mystical stuff out there to be afraid of.
I'm loving your Donna and Dean voice. They're spot on. I could hear Catherine Tate in my head as I readand visualize her doing this little gestures.
Can't wait till the next update.
Author's Response:
Sorry about the sexing..I know it's been seven chapters...I didn't want it to happen quite yet. But soon I promise, very soon. And thanks for commenting on the mythology stuff, I think that's been the hardest for me to write in this fic. And you hearing Catherine Tate is awesome, I love her and Donna, and I picutre her everytime I write this. :)
Thanks so much for the reveiw!
Reviewer: luckybrans Signed [Report This]Date: 25/08/08 03:32 am
WONDERFUL as usual! I'm glad Sam told the Doctor about his hybridness! And this is so classic Donna:
“He gives all of us a key, he must have hundreds of them stashed away somewhere. Don’t mean anything, it’s like a party favor. A hello, welcome to the TARDIS, go on, have a key!”
The thing possessing (I guess that was like a possesion, right?) the Doctor was really creepy! You described that part very well, I got goosebumps!
Really digging the tender moments between Dean and Martha! Damn Gordon had to show up and ruin the hotness!! I hope Dean kicks his ass!
Author's Response:
LOL, that was one of my favorites too, I love writing for Donna. I never want her to leave actually. Glad you liked the creepiness and I guess it was a possesion, at least that's what it felt like when I watched the show. So I'll just go with that. Glad you liked the Dartha moment, and Gordon and Dean will fight. And I like Dean better then Gordon, so...
Thanks so much for reading idjunkie!
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/08/08 02:15 am
TBG, you gave us a lot in this chapter...thank you! Sam is part demon?! WTH! Damn, can Dean and Martha catch a break? Demons always interrupting the loving! AARRGH!
Martha has more restraint than me 'cause I would have had to go off on Ellen! Why is Martha still wearing her engagement ring anyway?
Hurry up and update...'kay?
Author's Response:
Hey lovemboth!
Sam is part Demon, it's a big part of his character on the show, so I wanted to bring it up here as well, cause I thought it was kinda cool. And they are having problems with the whole demon thing, aren't they? :)
Martha's a Brit, so I had her basically just be uncomfortable by the whole situation. She is getting use to the whole Supernatual world though. And she's wearing her ring honestly because she's been avoiding the situation. And she's use to wearing it...well, that all with come up in the next update.
Thanks for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 25/08/08 02:03 am
Dammit! Right when it was getting hot and heavy, you gotta pull the bad guy out, that sh*t ain't funny...actually I always love a good fight:)
God, I am so confused with what the sun said....and at this moment I like being confused, keeps me oh so intrigued, not that I need a reason, one sentence keeps me glued..
I saw that you updated and jumped with joy (literally) and now I will be waiting for that next one, you seriously got me hooked TBG. Keep it comin!
Author's Response:
LOL, I know, I know....I couldn't resist. Gotta up the tension just a bit more, but soon I promise. Heck, maybe in the next few chapters.
I love a good fight too, especially with Dean. I love watching Jensen do those scenes. :) And don't worry about the confusion, it's all a bit jumbled right now, but hopefully will start making more sense very soon. a
I'm so glad you liked this chapter, I thought I went on a bit in this one, so I was a little worried. I seriously get into this a bit too much sometimes, but I just really love writing it. ;)
Thanks so much for that great review and for the stars!
Reviewer: Rocky13Depp Signed [Report This]Date: 25/08/08 01:40 am