Aww the doctor waxing poetic about their trip to the moon while Martha is getting her swerve on. Well he can stew in it. Yea can't wait for Lilith to punish Ruby hehehe. I'm loving the Dartha action but I think it's about time to get everyone back together before Lilith gets too involved in her rip roaring rampage.
Author's Response:
God, I love writing him mooning over Martha, I'm with you. He should have grabbed her on that damn ship when she left him the first time. Ruby's gonna get hers, I love beating her up a bit, it's fun.:) And there are maybe five more chapters in this story (or less) so the gang will be joining up pretty soon...
Thanks for the reveiw greatodin!
Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/09/08 08:43 pm
Damn...that was hot! Loved it, loved it, floved it. I honestly don't know the Doctor Who series, but I'm liking the Martha charcter. I hope you update soon! Oh ummh yeah, I was also kinda wishing I was Martha...;-)
Author's Response:
Thanks shanesgirl!
Thanks for reading this, even without previous Who knowledge. Martha is a awesome character and I love writing this for her. And I'm right there with you on wishing I was her, Supernatural can't come back fast enough in my opinion. :)
Reviewer: shanesgirl Signed [Report This]Date: 09/09/08 10:02 am
LOVED IT!!!
soo steamy
loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks j_whispers! Glad you liked it and thanks for the review! Reviewer: j_whispers Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 08/09/08 06:41 am
Excellent! Loved it! That Lilith is one scary looking kid/demon/whateva.
Author's Response: Yep, she's creepy as hell. I loved using that pic too. :) Thanks for reading lovembooth!
[Report This]Date: 08/09/08 05:41 am
I was never a bit Ruby fan and can't say I'll miss her. It was good to see Dean knock her around.
Is it wrong that I imagined it was me Dean asked to say yes, I hope not. LMAO!
It seems that the Doctor's feelings for Martha run deeper than he's willing to admit. I wonder what will happen when they find each other again and he finds out about her and Dean.
Author's Response:
Oh, I coudn't stand Ruby, but she's so useful in my story. Someone has to get knocked around a bit. And hell no it's not wrong, so was doing that myself when I was writing this. I WAS Dr. Jones. :)
And your right about the Doctor, there's a bit of Martha/Ten shipping mixed in with this, I couldn't help myself. And the cofrontation should be interesting, I hope anyway.
Thanks for reading Sweet Pea!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 08/09/08 05:32 am
Yay for Martha/Dean sexing, but that wasn't the most important part for me. I'm still enjoying the non-romantic/erotic portion of the story. Take out the sexing and I'd still be reading.
Forgive me if I'm a little dense but basically what's happening is that the TARDIS is going backwards to places where he and Martha have already been. If so, then it's point back to the Master because ultimately that's what the journey with Martha led up to. The doctor's missing the obvious clues, well they're not that obvious if you're him.
Great job! Looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response:
Hey luckybrans!
I'm glad you're enjoying the fick especially all the small bits as well as the bigger ones. And your right about the Tardis traveling through his and Martha's history. And yes, the Master is a pretty big part of that, though the Doctor still hasn't accepted Sam's world yet, which is handicaping him. Only getting half the picture right now.
Thanks for the review, glad you liked this!
Reviewer: luckybrans Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/09/08 11:09 pm
Wow!
Martha and Dean...my screen just about melted from the heat. And Bobby...my dear, sexy Bobby. I just love the way you write him.
Author's Response:
LOL, glad you you liked the Darth action. And yes, Bobby is pretty damn cool, I love that character on the show, so I just want to throw every cool line at him I can think of. So glad he's coming back.
Thanks so much for the review mskel!
Reviewer: mskel Signed [Report This]Date: 07/09/08 08:07 pm
I was having a downer day and I saw that you updated this and it literally brought a smile to my face, so thanks! :)
Dartha is pure hotness! WOWZERS! I can't picture the two of them with anyone else but each other. Loved Dean kicking the shit out of Gordon's ass. Was thrilled when Martha kicked Ruby in the knee and knocked her on her ass. Bobby was wonderful as usual and I just love the potty mouth on Ellen. Donna is love. I was dying when she asked Sam to pull his shirt down further because "she couldn't see."
Wonderful update TBG! :)
Author's Response:
Hey idjunkie!
Sorry about your day, I'm glad this could cheer you up. It kicks my ass on occasion when I write it, but I do smile when it's up again, becuase I really love this story. Glad you liked the Dartha action and Dean's ass kick abilities. Bobby is such a great character, I love grumpy older men for some reason. And I could write Donna all day, she's by far my favorite Who charcter after Martha.
Thanks for reading idjukie!
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/09/08 06:56 am
Yay! Okay so great, great update. Loved the Papa Winchester moment. Very creepy indeed. And Dean kickng Gordon's ass was like music to me. And BOBBY FREAKIN' ROCKS. I was sick of that shit too Bobby. That's my boy.
Hot, hot Dartha action. Loved how intimate it was. Dr. Jones got her some lovin' and the church said amen.
Starting to think the Dark One might be Sam. Loved the moment where they landed on the moon. And this...
She was afraid, I could see it her eyes, but she did it anyway. And we stood there, staring at that planet. And then I knew..."
"You knew what?" Sam said, and The Doctor met his gaze.
"That I wanted her with me." He replied, then looked out the doors once more.
"I still do."
Totally screwed with my Dartha lovin' head. What the hell are you trying to do to me. Shit, I'm shipping Martha/Ten again.
Great update as usual.
Author's Response:
Dartha action is fun, may get a bit more before the fic's over. And yes, while I'm writing the Dartha loving, can't resist a little Ten shipping now and again, I just can't help myself. Everyone should be in love with Martha Jones. :)
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/09/08 05:51 am
This is good. I love Supernatural, and especially, the Dean character, so this is a treat. I like Martha on Dr Who, too. So glad they got together.
Author's Response:
Hey Robin!
I love Supernatural too, I'm counting the days until the new season. And I heart Dean too, though Sam is growing on me a little more as well. I'm a huge Martha fan, so every time I write this, I'm in fangirl heaven. :) Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Reviewer: Robin Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/09/08 05:46 am