I'm absolutely blown away at how perfectly you've nailed *everyone's* voice in this...it's pretty freakin' impressive. I haven't even finished the chapter (nine) yet, but when Ellen said, "Boy, don't make me cut you," I knew it was time to leave a comment. That absolutely *killed* me. ;-)
I'm loving the story so far, and as a firm Martha/Ten shipper and an avowed Dean girl, I'm also loving the dynamic you've set up with Martha and Dean, and Ten very much missing his companion. I can't wait to see how it all plays out in the end!
Fox
Reviewer: foxmonkey Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/01/10 06:47 am
Dean and Martha! Dean and cookies! Jack! And OMG, the trashcan! Love this more with each chapter.
Author's Response: LOL, I love them too, honestly I don't know how I'm gonna stop writing this fic. It's so much fun.:) Thanks so much for reading KP and for the review!
[Report This]Date: 22/09/08 03:17 am
Awww, poor Dean. ALthough I must admit, jealous!Dean = sexy!Dean.
Poor demonic Sam. I really feel bad for him. He has no idea what is going on with him, and the one person he's ever really turned to is so far away. I just want to pull him into my arms and do deliciously naughty things for (to) him. Poor boy.
OMG!!! John f'in Winchester?!!! That's nothing but good. What is it about the men of Supernatural? Thanks for that pic of JDM! So damn fine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really enjoyed the flow of this. I find myself so thoroughly enthralled everytime I open a neew chapter. I don't want it to ever end, but at the same time, I gotta know what the end result will be (Martha/Ten, Martha/Dean, Martha/Master(maybe?))
BTW, hooray for Jack finding his nightingale.
Author's Response:
I know, jealous Dean is all scowly and broody, and I love it. And Sam is slightly clueless at the moment, though he does know about his demonic tendencies, so it's not too much of a leap for him. But the feeding thing is new.
I'm so with you on the SN men, did you see the angel in the premiere? Lord, I can't take all that pretty, it's just too much. I was happy to resurect John, love JDM to pieces.
The end result?.....complicated. :)
Thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: mskel Signed [Report This]Date: 20/09/08 06:04 am
I love this!!! I'm going to register right now and follow this story!! It's so flipping awesome!
Author's Response:
Hey Amanda!
I'm so glad you like this story, and you're registering for the site! Thanks so much for reading and for the review, I hope you like the next one too. :)
Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/09/08 01:54 am
My lord Dean is hot so very make you wanna slap ya mama (okay not really) hot. Oh yeah forgot to comment on the part about the dad coming back, so it looks like he is a guardian angel, does he have the missing piece of the puzzle? He called her Adriana I wonder what the significance of that is. woo hoo, Jack found Martha, I am looking forward to the snarkiness between him and Dean. And I love Sam coming into his power but eww Ruby when is Lilith going to come get her ass?
Author's Response:
Dean is hotnes and now he's buffed up a bit more....which god lord. I'm praying for a shirtless scene, I need a shirtless Dean desperately. And Sam. Can't forget old Sammy. :)
Much more snark to come and Ruby will get hers in the end. I honestly just need a punching bag at the moment. And she's it.
Thanks for reading greatodin!
Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed [Report This]Date: 19/09/08 08:55 pm
Very nice. Started with a dash of Dartha lovin' which is a good thing. Loved the scene with Poppa Winchester. Adrianna huh? Hmmmm....
Jack appearance was awesome. Voice of a Nightingale indeed. And that comment about Dean was funny as hell.
Loved Sam callin the Daleks trashcans. Too funny. But his eyes turning white like a little scary ass demon we know and love was very interesting indeed. The plot thickens.
I want some more.
Author's Response:
Papa Winchester is miss by all I think. And I loved getting to look for pics of John, I missed JDM's lovely face. :)
Everybody would call the Daleks trashcans. At least right before they started shooting anyway. :)
Thanks for reading Black!
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/09/08 05:52 am
Fantastic update! More action than I could shake a stick at. What a ride.
Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks lovemboth! Glad you liked it. :) Reviewer: lovemboth Signed
[Report This]Date: 18/09/08 08:03 pm
I had a big grin on my face while I was reading this. The mystery is deepening around Martha and I love it.
“Boy, don’t make me cut you.”
I love Bobby, just love him. I love how much of a good father figure he is. Ellen is a great mother figure too. I think she is who Mary might have been had she survived and had to deal with the supernatural.
Adding Jack to the mix made me grin too. I'm imagining Ellen/Jack now because that would be awesome. I can also imagining him hitting on Bobby because he'd just have to.
So basically Sam has the same powers as Lilith. Interesting. I wonder what her connection to the YED is then.
I can't wait for the next part.
Author's Response:
Heh, I think the easiest people for me to write are Bobby and Ellen, have no idea why. I always liked Ellen's role on the show, I seriously hope they bring her back this season. Jack always makes me smile, and yes, he'd probably sex up that entire house. But I always loved his relationship with Martha on the show.
Glad you picked up on the Sam/Lilth thing, wasn't sure how clear that was. It's so odd writing that part now that the seaon's started, Sam is mighty different now then he is in my fic. And that's such a good thing...:)
Thanks for reading lucky!
Reviewer: luckybrans Signed [Report This]Date: 18/09/08 07:02 pm
Awesome! Dean is so EFFING HOT!!! Martha is by far the luckiest girl in the world! Loved the kitchen scene with Martha and John. I wonder why he called her by her middle name? That'll be interesting to find out. Donna is love. I can't believe she slapped Sam! You got the Daleks down! I hate those cheesy robots but you wrote them soooo well! EXTERMINATE! And Jack finally made it to Martha. I wonder what Dean's gonna do about his jealousy! Wonderful as usual Token! :)
Author's Response:
Dean is just...*sigh* there are no words really. I could tons of those kind of scenes with him really. Easy as hell with that man.
Daleks make me cringe and laugh everytime they show up. They can be so draining to a story, but they're also classic Who, I coudn't write this story without them really. Jack is back and Dean..well, he's Dean. :)
Thanks for reviewing idjunkie!
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/09/08 07:46 am