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Title: Chapter Ten

Excellent chapter! Thank you so much for the update... Jack, Martha, Donna and a reference to the Brady Bunch. It can't get much better!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm just glad i finally got to update :) I'm getting close to the end with this one, so I have to give as much love to Docwho as possible before it all wraps up. :)

Reviewer: cvgirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/10/08 02:49 pm

Title: Chapter Ten

A demon obsessed with Martha...why, who? Well, the gang's all here now. Sounds like it's time to summon a demon.

Does Adriana really translate to Dark One in Latin? Poor Martha must feel lower than low. Who wants to be known as a death bringer?

The moment between The Doctor and Martha was bittersweet. Looks like we have a tri!



Author's Response:

Hey lovemboth,

The demon she was talking about was the Master, he's in hell right now which techincally makes him a demon, I should probably make that clearer in the next chapter, it's part of the whole Supernatual mythology thing.

Adrian does mean The Dark One in Latin which worked out really well for me. :) And yeah, that news is pretty depressing, and its a bit downhill for her after this I'm afraid. :)  I know I'm asking for trouble with the Doctor moment, but I couldn t' resist. :)

Thanks so much for reading lovemboth!

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/10/08 04:33 am

Title: Chapter Ten

Excellent update! So Adrianna means Dark One... that's interesting! Loved Dean and his slight jeaslousy towards Jack, who was just kick ass in this chapter! Dean beating the crap out of Ruby was beyond awesome.  So happy the Doctor is now reunited with his dear Martha and Sam is finally home, though I think he'll miss the adventures he had with the Doc.  Great Job Token!



Author's Response:

Hey idjunkie,

The latin traslation for Adrian is dark one, which I though was cool. Jack had to get a big moment before the story ended, and I've always loved his stuff with the guns. I think I was channeling my Ruby hate a bit more with the scene with Dean, she didn't get her ass reeemed enough for my tastes. And the gangs all back together, hugs and kisses about. :)

Thanks so much for reading idjunkie!

Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/10/08 01:55 am

Title: Chapter Ten

I love this story.  I never watch supernaternal, but I feel like I know this show now.  I love how you combine two different worlds.  It great that Dean has feelings for Martha.  I love that the Doctor finally find Martha.  I can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Hey Nicnac!

I'm so glad you're enjoying this, even though you haven't watched Supernatural (which is an awesome show by the way). I did want to make this crossover fic plausible, and it was fun figuring out ways to put them together in this. And Martha gets all the mens in this one, as well she should :)

Thanks so much for reading and for the review. :)

Reviewer: nicnac Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/10/08 01:45 am

Title: Chapter Ten

Great chapter as usual.  Loved the presence of Jack and his big gun in all the demon hunty craziness.  Nice unraveling of the mystery about the Dark One. Can't wait for Martha to realize it's the Master who's been pulling the strings.

Loved the Doctor's reunion with Martha.  Does my shipper heart good.

Great job!



Author's Response: Thanks Black, I glad you enjoyed all the Jack in this chapter. Martha will realize who it is very soon, promise. And my heart went pitter patter a bit too, I love Martha and The Doctor too. :)

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Date: 02/10/08 08:23 pm

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