Oh this is so rockin'! So Martha is a Time Lord and it's all because of the Master's ignorance... I love it! Dean was not about to let Bobby salt Martha! I could see him going berserk real quick. Nice reveal about Martha's mind sending Sam and the Doctor to all those places. Love that the future Martha's TARDIS is a Port-a-Potty! Nobody's gonna wanna go in there... Alright to the next chapter I go! :)
Author's Response:
Heee, thank you idjunkie. And Martha being a timelord is my ultimate wish for that character, I loved her and miss her terribly.:( And you're right, no one likes the Port a Potty. And yet....still blue. :)
Thanks for reading and the stars!
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 06/11/08 04:23 am
Okay, that was so good but I'm confused as I am not familiar enough with Doctor Who. Why would the Doctor apologize to Martha for being a Time Lord? Is it a solitary existence? No lasting relationships?
Author's Response:
You're right, it's the solitary existance, no relationships. And everyone kinda dies around him, he's kind of a gloomy character at times. And he passed it onto Martha which wasn't the best thing he could have done. The Doctor is just kind of tragic in a lot of ways.
Thanks for reading lovemboth!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 06/11/08 02:56 am
What does that mean that he's sorry? I'm freaking out over herer! I gotta know the ending to this awesome, kick-ass story. BTW, cool chapter!
Author's Response:
That was him apologizing for making her a timelord, it's not really that great a deal for him. And he passed it onto her. Thanks so much for reading I'm glad you like it!
Reviewer: bballangel726 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/11/08 02:56 am
*hugs Token*
I swear I will get to this piece very soon :) I have a great desire for Jensen *cough* so I will read it as soon as my Blockbuster Online acct. stops trippin' and sends me season 3 of Dr. Who.
And guess what? I'm giving you stars anyway. LOL.
Author's Response:
*hugs MZ back*
No worries, it will be here forever now that it's finally completed. *throws confetti!* I think you'll like season 3, I've got my older sister and my 9 year old niece loving the show becaues of the Martha seson.
Thanks so much for the stars :)
Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]Date: 05/11/08 08:31 pm
Great update. I loved the slow reveal of Martha's transformation. The Master had no idea what he was doing. I think it's funny he's so lost in the spirit world that those things never occured to him.
Love that Martha is a TL. Love that she took Sam to fight the sun demon. Love this story and cant' wait to see the final chapter. Great job Token.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I always felt the science guys should be a bit lost when it comes to magic and spells. But then the Whoverse comes back at that as well, so...it's kinda even maybe?
Thanks so much for reading Black!
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/11/08 07:22 pm