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Title: Chapter Three

This is kind of an addictive story.  I really enjoy it.  The dynamic between Martha and Dean is awesome, lovin' the banter, and the stuff with Sam and the Doctor... amazing.  I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! These are two of my favorite shows, so I'm glad you like it. I love writing those characters, it's so much fun. Hope you like what's to come as well.

Reviewer: x5649 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/07/08 10:57 pm

Title: Chapter Three

Wee one's staring at my cock... very funny! Another brilliant chapter.  The Library Planet is one of my fav. episodes of Dr. Who, so I like that you added that into the story! YAY! I'm eager to find out exactly why Lilith wants to get to Dean and how Sam and The Doctor will find Martha and Dean. Great job!

Author's Response:

Hey idjunkie!

That's one of my faves too, and I couldn't wait to send those guys back to The Library. Glad you're digging the story, and I hope you like what's to come as well.

Thanks so much for reading and leaving those pretty stars!

Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/07/08 03:12 am

Title: Chapter Three

You had me scared there for a moment! "Hey, who turned out the lights."

Author's Response: LOL, I love that line. Loved that whole episode really. Thanks for reading and the reveiw!

Reviewer: cvgirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/07/08 04:20 am

Title: Chapter Three

Oh man, I love this story. The character voices were right on target and the classic one-liners were awesome. I loving the chemistry and banter between The Doctor and Sam and Dean and Martha.

BTW, because of this story I starting to get into the Doctor Who universe and I'm loving it. I recommend it to anyone who hasn't seen, Doctor Who comes on Sci-Fi Friday nights at 9 PM.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. This one takes a while to write, because I try to get as close to the shows as possible, so you're reveiw makes me very happy.

And to know you're watching Doctor Who now makes me even happier.:) That show is awesome, and I'm so glad you found it!

Reviewer: bballangel726 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/07/08 02:02 am

Title: Chapter Three

Hurray, a new chapter! I love the near-hand-holding moment between the Doctor and Sam, and I really love the chemistry between Martha and Dean. Great dialogue, as always, and the pacing is perfect. Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Hi KP!

Glad you liked this one. I coudn't resist the handholding thing, I've always wondered how that would go with a male companion. :) Glad you're liking Martha and Dean, I have a lot planned for them in this fic.

Thanks so much for reviewing and for the stars!

Reviewer: KP Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17/07/08 08:30 pm

Title: Chapter Three

Ooo! It gets better and better! Monsters in books eating people; shadows eating people, WTH? I've got to watch some epis of Dr. Who. Looking foward to the next update.

Author's Response:

Hey Lovemboth!

Doc Who has some of the best villians and mosters, you should definately check it out. I'm glad you're liking the fic, it's starting to get into the main plot a little more now. Hope you like the next chapter too!

Reviewer: lovemboth Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/07/08 05:38 pm

Title: Chapter Three

Okay. Didn't realize you have screencaps. This will help me LOL I'm printing this badboy out. Will read at lunch ;)

Author's Response: Hey MZ. Just got the screencaps and I'll probably go back and add some to previous chapters. I thougt about doing that at the begining but I got kinda lazy.....

Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/07/08 04:15 pm

Title: Chapter Three

*sigh* I love this story.

The library sequence was great.  Sam having the two shadows made me very, very nervous. But as the Doctor said, why did they leave him alone?  This chapter was classic for Dean. His Ruby convo was funny as hell.  Loved Martha's quick thinking and the addition of the pictures was a great idea.    Update it soon. I demand it.



Author's Response:

I love the Library, it's so creepy.....

I thought I should add pics for those who may not have seen the shows, because I'm not the best at detailed description (I know and accept this about myself...)

Thanks for reviewing, and the stars...they are very bright.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/07/08 03:19 pm

Title: Chapter Three

Lilth and the Master oh dear.  Dang can't even get away from Ruby in a fanfic huh?  Great update, Sam and the Doctor are hilarious together.  Favorite lines from this chapter: 

"Fly away home wicked bitch from down under"

"That's kind of rich coming from you Mr. Doctor, no last name, just the Doctor."



Author's Response:

Heh, I love Lil and the Master. Writing villians is so much fun. And yes, I did want Ruby in this, for reasons I can't get into quite yet. And I felt okay writing her now that I know the character's gone for good. :)

Thanks for reading and the stars!

Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/07/08 02:13 pm

Title: Chapter Three

Okay, I've never watched an episode of Supernatural, but Dean is a real pice of work.

The writing for Martha and The Doctor is very in-character.  Like I can hear them in my head.

I always had a soft spot for this Master, he's funny and such a cutie.

And this passage just had me laughing out loud... 

“Did you just turn off my damn radio?” Dean repeated. Martha blew out a frustrated breath. 

“Yes, Dean. I touched your penis—I mean stereo.” 



Author's Response:

Hey Shocol!

Glad you liked this even though you're not into Supernatural, Dean's an awesome character, and he got even better as the show progressed. Writing Martha and the Doctor is awesome, but also kinda stressful, I always want to make sure I get those characters right.

And I'm a big fan of the Master (you could probably tell that), so I had to pu him in this.

Thanks so much for reading and leaving the review!

Reviewer: shocol Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/07/08 09:57 am

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