The man’s eyes turned to Sam, and brightened with interest.
“And who’s this?”
The Doctor cleared his throat a bit.
“Sam Winchester, meet Captain Jack Harkness. Stay away from him.” The Doctor said.
“Oh, now. I don’t bite. Not unless you want me to.”
“Jack.”
“Kidding. Sort of.”
JACK!!!!! Yay! Damn, just when I thought this couldn't get any better, here comes Captain Jack F'n Harkness.
Dean!
The Doctor!
Sam!
The Master!
Bobby!
And now Jack?!!!
My screen is melting from all the hotness!
Author's Response:
I know right? Too much hotness on those shows, I get dizzy sometimes, no lie.
Happy you enjoyed the Jack into, I always miss him when he's gone..
Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: mskel Signed [Report This]Date: 15/08/08 11:22 pm
When Dean called Martha Baby, I was like did he really just say that only for her say it in the next line. Brilliant! The prelude speak to the kiss was exactly how I imagine Dean would have done it.
Poor Martha, I would be scared as hell with every demon, vamp, and whatever else out there trying to get me. I would probably have said "Fuck it, I'm done," took Dean's hand walked back to the house, and fucked just for the hell of it.
Author's Response:
LOL, Oh my god, I couldn't breath for a second after I read your review. I feel exactly the same way, wouldn't be able to keep my hands off that man. :) Dean is one of the easiest characters for me to write in this for some reason, perhaps because I focus on him a bit too much when I watch the show?
Thanks for reading Sweet Pea!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/08/08 04:34 am
Awesome as usual TBG. I need to start watching both of these shows! Why do the demons want Martha? Is Jack Harkness a good or bad guy? Why won't my son clean his room without me telling him to? Oops, sorry I got carried away. Looking forward to my questions being answered in the next update.
Author's Response:
Oh, these shows are just awesome. I recommend you rent them immediately, they get better with each season.
Can't comment on the demon/ marth angle (no spoilers..:) but Jack Harkness is a good guy, he was actually a companion to The Doctor for a while, like Martha, Donna, and now Sam. The Doctor just kind of collects these friends that he takes along on adventures because he's lonely.
Well, I say Jack's a good guy, but he's a bit of a rake too. :)
And I welcome all questions, even the ones I don't have the answers to. Things will become clearer soon, though.
Thanks for reading lovemboth, and for the review!
Reviewer: lovemboth Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/08/08 08:02 pm
Martha and Dean was hot!!!
Love that Jack is back! Yummy!
It is all coming together,,, can't wait to see how you do it.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, happy you liked the Dartha action. And I had to bring Jack in, love him and can't wait to write him with the others.
Glad your digging the plot too, I do want to keep that moving as well. Thanks so much for reading and for the review!
Reviewer: cvgirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/08/08 06:16 pm
Wow, that was great.
I love that Sam is going through what Martha did with the Doctor. Now Martha is the ideal, and, from my end, that's wonderful.
Did I detect a bit of Sam/Donna there? I wouldn't mind seeing that.
I love Jack showing up. I love that man.
Martha/Dean is hot. That is all.
Author's Response:
Hey Luckybrans, I'm so happy you liked this one. Sam is exactly where Martha was, which is kinda fun to play with. And Sam/Donna, well I can't begin to describe how much fun I had writing those two together.
And I heart Jack, especially when he shows up on Doctor Who. And glad you're feeling Martha/Dean too.
Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: luckybrans Signed [Report This]Date: 04/08/08 03:23 pm
Awwww, poor Sammy feeling out of the loop and slightly jealous I may add. Damn Lilith is one creepy-ass demon, she freaked me out in the show and she's freaking me in this story. I just adore the Doctor and his quirkiness :-), it makes my day. Ha, Dean had to give in to Martha eventually, too bad they couldn't enjoy the moment a little more. Those damn demons! Lol! Loving the story! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Yeah, he's kind of in awe of his surroundings, yet he's feeling a bit underappreicated. And Lilith is creepy, but that's a good thing. Yellow eyes just wasn't scary to me at all. And I love The Doctor's oddness too, though he can be frustating to those around him I think.
Glad you enjoyed the Dean/Martha action, and they do need some time alone. After they fight off hte demons of course.
Thanks for reading and for the review!
Reviewer: bballangel726 Signed [Report This]Date: 04/08/08 07:38 am
Opps, sorry did it twice, the anonymous review below is me
Sorry again!
Author's Response: No worries. Thanks again for the review! Reviewer: Rocky13Depp Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/08 07:02 am
Okay once again in fangurl heaven. Love Donna and her family. Her grandfather getting his good hat had me LMAO. And poor Sam. He really is clever. He's just no Martha. Loved Jack's entry, it was classic.
Bobby and Deans argument over the snoring made me LOL. Then there was that sexy ass kiss with Dartha. Yummy. I hate her and I love her all at once.
Finally, those closing scenes with the master in hell are always creepy perfect. I LOVE it. Great as always!
Author's Response:
Oh, I geek out everytime I write this. I always wonder if I'm a bit too enthusatic though, if I'm jamming too much from the shows in one story. Especially Doctor Who, I'm in overload right now I think.
Bobby and Dean could argue all day if it were up to me, I love those guys. And I kind of hate Martha for the kiss too, and she's in my head.
I love crazy and I love the master going crazy. Never underestimate the power of the creepiness....
Thanks for the stars Black!
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed [Report This]Date: 04/08/08 07:01 am
OH MY GOD! Where to start:
Sam and Donna were hilarious (gotta love her) and again with the rose/martha, sam/martha thing...loving it, it's like he has the same thoughts she did when the Doctor mentioned Rose (sans romantic) makes me go back....
JACK!!!!!YAY! He's here, and I totally saw the hit on Sam coming and I loved it, you gotta love Jack and his love for...well everything!
Now to Dartha(liking the name)..they are HOTT to the double TT, loved the spaced out moment at breakfast, Hilarious, and the kiss.."fuck it" God thats hott
I see lots more action to come (both romantic, and not) and I am soooo waiting for the next update....you've got me begging for more with this story!! Excellent Job as always!
Author's Response:
Oh, I'm glad you liked Sam and Donna, I couldn't wait to write their scenes together. And Sam is going through what Martha did with "she who shall not be named." And The Doctor, being himself, has no clue how Sam is feeling.
And I couldn't wait any longer to bring Jack in, so I was really happy about that. And Dartha...well, I couldn't wait for that either, thought it was time for a little lip action. Dean is kind of a horndog.
And the next chapter will be more actiony, on both sides I think. I'm so glad you liked the chapter, and the story. Thanks so much for reading and for that awesome review!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/08/08 06:56 am
Wow awesome update! Okay first of all Donna wiping the invisible crumb from Sam's mouth when he hadn't eaten anything, hilarious. I could literally picture the scene actually happening in my mind. And yea Dartha action, I love the Doctor but he dropped the ball so I don't feel bad one bit. And the introduction of Harkness makes me very happy! And I knew the Master was way out of his league playing around with demon child. Great update TBG!
Author's Response:
I don't know where that Donna scene came from, it just popped up in my head as something she would do. And Sam would let her, cause he's a sweetheart, and out of his element. And I was happy to provide the Dartha action, thought it was about time for a little touch and grab.
And Jack makes me smile even when I'm writing him, so I was happy to have him show up. And the Master...well, he's a bit out of his element as well at the moment.
Thanks for reading Greatodin, will update again soon.
Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed [Report This]Date: 04/08/08 06:46 am
HEART every bit of this chapter! First, Donna... I just adore her, always searching for a man! LOL! Poor Sam, he is really smart and the doctor needs to realize how valuable he is to him right now!
DARTHA = HOTNESS!!! Dean could fuck it and kiss me anyday... skip the hesitation! LOVE!
No demon action this chapter but I'll be expecting some soon, right!?!
GREAT UPDATE TOKEN!!!
Author's Response:
Hey idjunkie!
I heart Donna too, even more now that I've seen the end of S4. I love writing her and her family, especially Wilfred. Love him to death.
Sam's the odd man out, and of course The Doctor is too distracted to notice.:) Glad you liked the Dartha action, had a nice visual there when writing that scene. :)
And the demons are coming, trust me. The demons are coming.
Thanks for reading and the review!
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/08/08 06:18 am