Oh this is so rockin'! So Martha is a Time Lord and it's all because of the Master's ignorance... I love it! Dean was not about to let Bobby salt Martha! I could see him going berserk real quick. Nice reveal about Martha's mind sending Sam and the Doctor to all those places. Love that the future Martha's TARDIS is a Port-a-Potty! Nobody's gonna wanna go in there... Alright to the next chapter I go! :)
Author's Response:
Heee, thank you idjunkie. And Martha being a timelord is my ultimate wish for that character, I loved her and miss her terribly.:( And you're right, no one likes the Port a Potty. And yet....still blue. :)
Thanks for reading and the stars!
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 06/11/08 04:23 am
Okay, that was so good but I'm confused as I am not familiar enough with Doctor Who. Why would the Doctor apologize to Martha for being a Time Lord? Is it a solitary existence? No lasting relationships?
Author's Response:
You're right, it's the solitary existance, no relationships. And everyone kinda dies around him, he's kind of a gloomy character at times. And he passed it onto Martha which wasn't the best thing he could have done. The Doctor is just kind of tragic in a lot of ways.
Thanks for reading lovemboth!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 06/11/08 02:56 am
What does that mean that he's sorry? I'm freaking out over herer! I gotta know the ending to this awesome, kick-ass story. BTW, cool chapter!
Author's Response:
That was him apologizing for making her a timelord, it's not really that great a deal for him. And he passed it onto her. Thanks so much for reading I'm glad you like it!
Reviewer: bballangel726 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/11/08 02:56 am
*hugs Token*
I swear I will get to this piece very soon :) I have a great desire for Jensen *cough* so I will read it as soon as my Blockbuster Online acct. stops trippin' and sends me season 3 of Dr. Who.
And guess what? I'm giving you stars anyway. LOL.
Author's Response:
*hugs MZ back*
No worries, it will be here forever now that it's finally completed. *throws confetti!* I think you'll like season 3, I've got my older sister and my 9 year old niece loving the show becaues of the Martha seson.
Thanks so much for the stars :)
Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]Date: 05/11/08 08:31 pm
Great update. I loved the slow reveal of Martha's transformation. The Master had no idea what he was doing. I think it's funny he's so lost in the spirit world that those things never occured to him.
Love that Martha is a TL. Love that she took Sam to fight the sun demon. Love this story and cant' wait to see the final chapter. Great job Token.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I always felt the science guys should be a bit lost when it comes to magic and spells. But then the Whoverse comes back at that as well, so...it's kinda even maybe?
Thanks so much for reading Black!
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/11/08 07:22 pm
AWESOME but I can't wait for the next chapter... you got some 'splaining to do! LOL! So a future Martha came to rescue them??? And I was shocked when Sam realized that Donna was Lilith! I was like, where the hell did this lil heffa come from and why Donna... she didn't have to call Donna's butt big either! (Even though that part made me LOL!)That was really written well.
The Master is such a douche! I can't stand him and he effing stabbed Martha in the heart... :( And poor Dean! This was a great action packed chapter Token and I can't wait for the conclusion... though I will miss this story immensely.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much idjunkie, I know, there's a ton of stuff that needs to be explained, I just hope I can cram everything in the final chapters. Shocked is good, I like shocked :) I got a bit poessesion happy, but I wanted Donna to stay in the mix until the very end. The Master is a twisted bastard, wanted to get one last kick into The Doctor before he left. :) Thanks so much for reading, I'm glad you've enjoyed this story. The conclusions is two parts, but should be posted soon, one right after the other.
I'll miss this story too. :(
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/11/08 03:40 am
What?! What the hell is going on? Martha dies downstairs and time travels to the present or past to help Sam and Dean defeat the demons and The Master? I don't know what the hell I'm talking about so I'll just hold on till I get the epilogue.
Author's Response: LOL, actually, you're on the right track, trust me. I hope the last chapter clears everything up, it should, if I do it right. Finger crossed? Thanks for reading lovembooth! Reviewer: lovemboth Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/11/08 01:32 am
WOW...um....I am going to love to get to the bottom of this...yet...I don't want it to be over: (
The part when the Master took over Martha's body, freaked the crap out of me..I was like "No No! Leave her alone!" and then you had to go and stab her, you made my heart hurt with that one
and now you leave me with this......Yay!, that Martha is back but......how? and why was Lilith afraid of her.....awesome questions you leave us TBG and so many twist and turns...you are brilliant!! I can't wait for the final chapter....but I also don't want it to end....
Author's Response:
I'll try my best to set things straight, it all makes sense in my head though. Which is good, right? Glad you were surprised, espeically with the Martha killing, that was hard to write, but important to the story. I hope you like the end too, will update that as soon as possible. :)
Reviewer: Rocky13Depp Signed [Report This]Date: 30/10/08 10:27 pm
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awesome. Martha's bad ass.
I’m with you Martha Jones. Don’t you see?
Oh God.
I’ll always be with you love. Forever.
Love, love, love the Martha/Master scenes. Shipping now. Shipping HARD. Is it too early to request a fic about them? Pretty please???
“Look’s like I pierced the heart.” He said. “Fitting, that. The little bitch did break mine.”
He wuvs her :-)
Hated Donna being posessed by Lilith. That little freaky chick needs to get gone. And holy crap that cliffhanger. You're a cold woman, you know that?
Can't wait till the answer-palooza.
Author's Response: Thanks Black. Yep, Martha's about to regulate, so that's gonna be kinda fun. I with on shipping Master/Martha, trust me, it's in the works. :) Thanks so much for reading, hope you like the final chapter. :) Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 30/10/08 10:21 pm
Another awesome chapter to the saga! Dun Dun Dun! So what is really up with Ruby? Is the Master possessing her crazy self? Love the reunion and blending of worlds. Dean is a little beside himself with Martha and her relationship with the Doc, huh? I really loved when Bobby called him out and snatched the beer from him! I can't wait for the next chapter, which I'm sure will be full of action! YAY! :)
Author's Response:
LOL, the reveals are in the next chapter, promise. Well, maybe the next two, there's one more cliffhanger before it ends. I always thought Dean drank a lot of beer for someone who runs around shooting guns, don't you? :)
Thanks so much for the review idjunkie!
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/10/08 07:15 am
You're back! And you've brought the whole gang together beautifully. Great interactions, and a nice, suspenseful note to end it on. Can't wait to see the finale! And the epilogue, because that's when the girl gets the guy again, right?
Author's Response:
Hey KP!
Yep, finally got to update, and plan on doing so again pretty soon. I think it's time to bring this one to a close, I hope you like the final chapters. As for the girl geting the guy? Hmm....which guy would that be? :)
Thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: KP Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 21/10/08 04:40 pm
*sigh* Dean and The Doctor glaring at each other. Sweet!
Sam needs to get down there fast and help Martha. Doesn't he hear that ruckus? LOL
Jack is killing me with his silent stalking of Ellen. She doesn't quite know how to handle him.
Okay, Sam and Martha need to start generating fear in some demons and stuff. Let's get this show on the road, okay?
I liked the update.
Author's Response:
There's no way Dean and the Doctor would get along, I didn't even want to try. And you're right about Sam being useful, but he's gonna have his hands full in the next chapter. Lots of sh*t hitting the fan, and stuff. :) Jack's a horndog. Always in heat. :)
Thanks for reading, hope you enjoy the rest.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 21/10/08 12:07 am
Girl, you get me everytime with this sh*t, I am hooked to this story in an unhealthy way, but other than that......goodness, I'm already getting sad with only two chapters left...your killin me here :..(
Loving the tension between the Doctor and Dean, but I gotta say..the Doctors had his chance and the gave that up, and Martha and Dean are smokin hot together
And again about the you torturing me bit, why would you leave it there...now I will be thinking about what will happen next all the time......but other than that, loved when the brothers met up again, it is so how they do it!
Another fantastic update, to your awesome story!
Author's Response:
Hey Rocky!
Yep, there are two chapters, I thought it might be one, but there's too much info left I think. Good to know you're on team Dartha, I like them together as well.:) The next chapter will end on a cliffhanger as well, because I can't resist, but I think you may enjoy it. I hope so anyway. :)
Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: Rocky13Depp Signed [Report This]Date: 20/10/08 07:58 am
Awesome chapter. Best one yet. Love that the gangs all here. My favorite had to be the awkward meeting between the Doctor and Dean. Loved the Doctor calling Dean on hi shit and Dean giving back as good as the Doctor dished out. Ruby's possession by the Master was creepy goodness. Loved it. Can't wait for the finale. I know it's gonna rock. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks Black! Will update this again sooner this time, must finish before the hair falls out. :)
[Report This]Date: 20/10/08 06:27 am
AMAZING!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hope you like the rest. :)
Date: 20/10/08 03:42 am
Excellent chapter! Thank you so much for the update... Jack, Martha, Donna and a reference to the Brady Bunch. It can't get much better!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm just glad i finally got to update :) I'm getting close to the end with this one, so I have to give as much love to Docwho as possible before it all wraps up. :)
Date: 04/10/08 02:49 pm
A demon obsessed with Martha...why, who? Well, the gang's all here now. Sounds like it's time to summon a demon.
Does Adriana really translate to Dark One in Latin? Poor Martha must feel lower than low. Who wants to be known as a death bringer?
The moment between The Doctor and Martha was bittersweet. Looks like we have a tri!
Author's Response:
Hey lovemboth,
The demon she was talking about was the Master, he's in hell right now which techincally makes him a demon, I should probably make that clearer in the next chapter, it's part of the whole Supernatual mythology thing.
Adrian does mean The Dark One in Latin which worked out really well for me. :) And yeah, that news is pretty depressing, and its a bit downhill for her after this I'm afraid. :) I know I'm asking for trouble with the Doctor moment, but I couldn t' resist. :)
Thanks so much for reading lovemboth!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 03/10/08 04:33 am
Excellent update! So Adrianna means Dark One... that's interesting! Loved Dean and his slight jeaslousy towards Jack, who was just kick ass in this chapter! Dean beating the crap out of Ruby was beyond awesome. So happy the Doctor is now reunited with his dear Martha and Sam is finally home, though I think he'll miss the adventures he had with the Doc. Great Job Token!
Author's Response:
Hey idjunkie,
The latin traslation for Adrian is dark one, which I though was cool. Jack had to get a big moment before the story ended, and I've always loved his stuff with the guns. I think I was channeling my Ruby hate a bit more with the scene with Dean, she didn't get her ass reeemed enough for my tastes. And the gangs all back together, hugs and kisses about. :)
Thanks so much for reading idjunkie!
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/10/08 01:55 am
I love this story. I never watch supernaternal, but I feel like I know this show now. I love how you combine two different worlds. It great that Dean has feelings for Martha. I love that the Doctor finally find Martha. I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Hey Nicnac!
I'm so glad you're enjoying this, even though you haven't watched Supernatural (which is an awesome show by the way). I did want to make this crossover fic plausible, and it was fun figuring out ways to put them together in this. And Martha gets all the mens in this one, as well she should :)
Thanks so much for reading and for the review. :)
Reviewer: nicnac Signed [Report This]Date: 03/10/08 01:45 am
Great chapter as usual. Loved the presence of Jack and his big gun in all the demon hunty craziness. Nice unraveling of the mystery about the Dark One. Can't wait for Martha to realize it's the Master who's been pulling the strings.
Loved the Doctor's reunion with Martha. Does my shipper heart good.
Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks Black, I glad you enjoyed all the Jack in this chapter. Martha will realize who it is very soon, promise. And my heart went pitter patter a bit too, I love Martha and The Doctor too. :) Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 02/10/08 08:23 pm
Dean and Martha! Dean and cookies! Jack! And OMG, the trashcan! Love this more with each chapter.
Author's Response: LOL, I love them too, honestly I don't know how I'm gonna stop writing this fic. It's so much fun.:) Thanks so much for reading KP and for the review!
[Report This]Date: 22/09/08 03:17 am
Awww, poor Dean. ALthough I must admit, jealous!Dean = sexy!Dean.
Poor demonic Sam. I really feel bad for him. He has no idea what is going on with him, and the one person he's ever really turned to is so far away. I just want to pull him into my arms and do deliciously naughty things for (to) him. Poor boy.
OMG!!! John f'in Winchester?!!! That's nothing but good. What is it about the men of Supernatural? Thanks for that pic of JDM! So damn fine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really enjoyed the flow of this. I find myself so thoroughly enthralled everytime I open a neew chapter. I don't want it to ever end, but at the same time, I gotta know what the end result will be (Martha/Ten, Martha/Dean, Martha/Master(maybe?))
BTW, hooray for Jack finding his nightingale.
Author's Response:
I know, jealous Dean is all scowly and broody, and I love it. And Sam is slightly clueless at the moment, though he does know about his demonic tendencies, so it's not too much of a leap for him. But the feeding thing is new.
I'm so with you on the SN men, did you see the angel in the premiere? Lord, I can't take all that pretty, it's just too much. I was happy to resurect John, love JDM to pieces.
The end result?.....complicated. :)
Thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: mskel Signed [Report This]Date: 20/09/08 06:04 am
I love this!!! I'm going to register right now and follow this story!! It's so flipping awesome!
Author's Response:
Hey Amanda!
I'm so glad you like this story, and you're registering for the site! Thanks so much for reading and for the review, I hope you like the next one too. :)
Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/09/08 01:54 am
My lord Dean is hot so very make you wanna slap ya mama (okay not really) hot. Oh yeah forgot to comment on the part about the dad coming back, so it looks like he is a guardian angel, does he have the missing piece of the puzzle? He called her Adriana I wonder what the significance of that is. woo hoo, Jack found Martha, I am looking forward to the snarkiness between him and Dean. And I love Sam coming into his power but eww Ruby when is Lilith going to come get her ass?
Author's Response:
Dean is hotnes and now he's buffed up a bit more....which god lord. I'm praying for a shirtless scene, I need a shirtless Dean desperately. And Sam. Can't forget old Sammy. :)
Much more snark to come and Ruby will get hers in the end. I honestly just need a punching bag at the moment. And she's it.
Thanks for reading greatodin!
Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed [Report This]Date: 19/09/08 08:55 pm
Aww the doctor waxing poetic about their trip to the moon while Martha is getting her swerve on. Well he can stew in it. Yea can't wait for Lilith to punish Ruby hehehe. I'm loving the Dartha action but I think it's about time to get everyone back together before Lilith gets too involved in her rip roaring rampage.
Author's Response:
God, I love writing him mooning over Martha, I'm with you. He should have grabbed her on that damn ship when she left him the first time. Ruby's gonna get hers, I love beating her up a bit, it's fun.:) And there are maybe five more chapters in this story (or less) so the gang will be joining up pretty soon...
Thanks for the reveiw greatodin!
Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed [Report This]Date: 19/09/08 08:43 pm