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Title: Chapter 13

Great Job.  This story was very funny.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading the story. I had the best time writing this story.

Reviewer: Ashauna77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/08/08 05:28 am

Title: Chapter 13

Thats it!!
Aww, but it was wonderful. I love how everything ending. I was about to kick Eva in her ass though, man she is so stubborn, but there is nothing better than to end any woman's resolve than seeing a man cry over her. I can so see why Todd thought Eva just wanted him physcially because of this pass and self-doubt. Which could be farther to the true because Evangeline love Tod all her heart, it just she was scared of getting hurt in the end. Todd and Eva crying over each other was so touching, beautiful, and needed for the both of them to know how uch they love each other. Finally we have Eva breakdown and admit that she does love Todd and we have sly Monquie to thank!! I love her little saying in the end.I love when they both say they love each other too. Of course Todd and Eva's massage and lovemaking was hot as always. I love it when Todd takes control of the situation when it present to him. tongue.gif thud.gif This was wonderful story Jen and sign0092.gif for writing it. hug432.gif happy0065.gif sign0100.gif

Author's Response:

Thanks for all your reviews Stormy. I really appreciate it. As you can see I'm late responding. LOL

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/07/08 02:16 am

Title: Chapter 12

Jen you are so bad!!! How could you do that to poor Evangeline. Than again, Evangeline should be so happy that Monique set this little massage up! Oh, I know the next chapter is going to be on fire!! love0058.gif Speaking of Monique, she so got Evangeline's and Todd's number. I'm glad she is trying to put these two back together. Who knew Evangeline can be so stubborn!! But she is about to be broken down Manning style. And Todd, thud.gif What is about this man and being rude is so hot to me. If it was anybody else it would be a huge turn off, but when Todd is rude it is hot as hell!! wub.gif Great update Jen and I can't wait to read the next part soon!! biggrin.gif tr.gif sign0100.gif

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/07/08 01:52 am

Title: Chapter 11

 love this chatper. So Monique meet the man that has Evangeline's heart. Now she knows why Eva has her panties in a twist. laugh.gif Todd could have been more polite, but that's won't be our Hot Toddy. tongue.gif Eva needs to stop hinting from the truth and claim that hunk of a man before it's too late. Oh I can't wait to see what's in store for the next chapter!! sign0092.gif sign0100.gif happy0065.gif

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/07/08 01:51 am

Title: Chapter 10

Thank-you Jen for the update and sign0175.gif Todd is so hot and so bad. But that's what Eva gets from running away like a scared child. We all know that Eva was ready jump Todd right then and there. I'm loving Monique too. She know that Eva is also running away from Todd. I so glad that Tood call Eva on her all her excuess for Todd and her not being together. Todd played her like a flute, and if I know the TREW, she is going to go talk to Todd and get her freak on too! tongue.gif sign0092.gif For the lovely update Jen, I been missing thiss story so much!! This was a smoking chapter girl. sign0100.gif happy0065.gif

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/07/08 01:48 am

Title: Chapter 9

Jen, how can Van run when she had unbelieveable hump.gif from Todd? Todd and Van was working it girl. laugh.gif

Van you may run, but you can't hide. Hot Toddy got a tastes of the your lovin' and he aint' give that up for nothin'. laugh.gif Oh, Van is in love, scared and she's running away, go get her Todd. sign0098.gif Jen,

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/07/08 08:07 am

Title: Chapter 8

Great update Jen! I love the talk between Todd and Evangeline. I can see this story heading in so many ways and I'm so looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/07/08 07:48 am

Title: Chapter 7

Nice chapter. I love the Evangeline and Layla talk. Layla was sweet and showed Eva some tough love and the truth about everything. This who Layla should be, and not the traiter she was on the show to Eva. I knew Evangeline was going to run. Poor dear. Todd got her so sprung that she afraid to lose control. But she fell to realize that she lost control when she and Todd kiss for the first time. Todd was the one who as at the door when she was in the shower. This is going to be good. *rub hands*

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/07/08 02:05 am

Title: Chapter 6

LOL, this chapter was a trip. One thing came out this chapter was John and Blair are hypocrites, liars, and assholes. Todd is going to be Todd no matter what, and Eva is running scared from her love for Todd. I love all the one-liners in this chapter.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/07/08 01:50 am

Title: Chapter 5

Whoa!! Is all I can say. Todd made her cry!!! He put it on her! LOL Um, beside the wonderful and love scene. I felt that Eva was trying to fight her feelings for Todd, yet Todd made up his mind to be Eva every since he saw her come back from th dead. That was so sweet in the end. I wonder who's that at the end of the chapter. (like I didn't know already) LOL

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/08 08:55 am

Title: Chapter 4

Star and Jack made me proud in this chapter. They actually listen to Todd and understood where Todd was coming from. A nice change from the usually. Oh so Evangeline is back. Interesting.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/08 07:42 am

Title: Chapter 1

this story is great you are a great writer.. this is a true tangeline story and i am a big tangie fan, please, please give me more of them...........

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/07/08 02:34 am

Title: Chapter 3

This chapter kick so much ass. A person who only care for his or herself hardly changes and that is who Blair 'the trick' Cramer is. What she did to Todd was cruel and so uncall for. If a person don't want you then bounce. I'm glad Todd told her ass off. She deserve so much worst, but then we can't get into the real story if we do that. Which is getting back to Todd and Evangeline.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/08 02:25 am

Title: Chapter 2

Oh what a hot love scene, yet Todd and Evangeline always turn up the heat. I knew Evangeline was going to push Todd away after they made love. She scared of getting hurt. et, she doesn't know the Todd would never her like the other men in her past. Something is up with Blair too, she is too nice for my liking. I don't trust whore at all.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/08 09:42 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I never got the chance to review the early chapters of this story so here it goes. I love it when Todd and Evangeline first met each after Todd thought she was dead. It was a very emotional scene. Which got hotter as Todd and Eva started to give in to their feels that been hinted for so long. Wonderful start.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/08 09:02 pm

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