I wish there was more of this! Its so good I love Logan and Ororo, but so many of hte stories are cliches this one is so good.
Reviewer: Fatalmars Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/06/11 09:12 am
Caught up with this story - me likey! Update soon!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/09/10 10:37 pm
That was good. I can't to read more.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 11/10/09 07:35 pm
u just have to update this story because i think i am in love =) pretty plzzz...
Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]Date: 04/06/09 05:36 am
Keep it coming. Can't wait to see how this plays out.
Reviewer: indycoolchick Signed [Report This]Date: 03/05/09 02:37 pm
Thanks for a great update. So at this point none of them have powers except the monster that is eating people?
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 03/05/09 02:25 pm
Thansks for a godate
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 03/05/09 06:17 am
Good add chica! I like that she keeps Logan on his toes so to speak. He already has a nickname for her... so cute! It will be so interesting to see how their relationship developes over time. I can tell they will start to strongly rely on each other. I can't wait for the next add!
Reviewer: shiree022000 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/05/09 05:48 am
Please don't stop. It feels like torture to have to wait for the rest of the story.
Good job.
Reviewer: GIGI Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/04/09 02:19 am
I like the immediate connection Storm and Logan have... it's very sad she's only sixteen but if I was her I'd say to to hell with age. I wonder how they're gonna protect her. Will she end up staying with him until this dude is found? I sure hope so!
Reviewer: shiree022000 Signed [Report This]Date: 28/04/09 01:28 am
I like the immediate connection Storm and Logan have... it's very sad she's only sixteen but if I was her I'd say to to hell with age. I wonder how they're gonna protect her. Will she end up staying with him until this dude is found? I sure hope so!
Reviewer: shiree022000 Signed [Report This]Date: 28/04/09 01:28 am
I'm in love already. I live for Logan/Ororo fics and there's not that many around. This one seems pretty damn interesting. I'm off to the next chapter!
Reviewer: shiree022000 Signed [Report This]Date: 28/04/09 01:10 am
A great second chapter. I like that Logan and Scott don't have the strained relationship they did in the X-Men movies. I hated the tug of war between them with Jean Grey in the middle and I'm glad that's not here. I'm liking Scott because he's a boyscout but a likeable one (unlike in the films).
I'm wondering if Logan's going to take Ororo home with him or is something going to get in the way of that. She's jailbait right now so some time has to pass before the romance can happen.
Reviewer: luckybrans Signed [Report This]Date: 27/04/09 10:25 pm
This story is so good and you a great job! i cant wati for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Maddie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/04/09 04:47 am
Enjoyed learning a bit more about Ororo. Now the introduction of Scott and bit more info on Wolverine. I do hope you will continue. I do wonder if Scott will allow her to return to the streets as Wolvering promised her? Looking forward to seeing Remy and Kurt.
Reviewer: Robin Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/04/09 02:58 am
Great update but a little creepy that Logan is lusting after a 16 year old. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 27/04/09 02:20 am
This is really good and I'm really curious how things will work out between Ororo and Logan.
Reviewer: indycoolchick Signed [Report This]Date: 27/04/09 02:05 am
Can't wait to see how it develops, anxiously awaiting an update, thanks for writing it, I am taking it a spin off on x man or wolverine great job
Reviewer: Chocolatepink Signed [Report This]Date: 27/04/09 01:18 am
Very good start!! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.
Reviewer: CrimsonSin Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/04/09 12:55 am
Love the characters and love the movie. I can't wait to see where you take this tale.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 24/04/09 04:47 am
My favorite X-Men is Ororo/Storm, so looking forward to more of the story.
Reviewer: Robin Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/04/09 05:05 am
Hey there, so nice to see over here from LJ!
I'm really interested in where this story goes. I love the Nancy/Hartigan storyline from Sin City, so I'm sure I'm going to love this. I already love this incarnation of streetwise orphan Ororo. She's jaded but still has enough of that innocence and caring nature.
I also like Logan too from what we've seen of him. Hard ass with a motorcyle, but also with a good heart. My favourite kind of leading male.
I'm also interested in Victor Creed, even though he's only mentioned. I'm sure he'll have a role to play in all this.
Can't wait to see how this turns out.
Reviewer: luckybrans Signed [Report This]Date: 22/04/09 02:34 am
WOW I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THE MOVIE SIN CITY AND SURE AS HELL LOVE STORM/WOLVERINE PAIRING!!!!! PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY SOON, YOUR NEW FAN VICTORIA!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 22/04/09 01:55 am
My goodness I read that holding my breath...Yikes. shit, damn....wow. That was really good and scary. I thought I was the one hiding behind the dumpster. I like the fact that Logan is a police officer and the city where he works sounds like hell instead of a town. Poor Ororo to witness or I should say hear that woman being brutally killed how awful for her. Please update the story soon. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 22/04/09 01:36 am