Great cast. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/03/11 12:48 am
another LOVE!! loved how this story evoled! :) you're writing style is wonderful.. so sweet!! keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: Thanks Ashbyfan for reading, glad you enjoyed it. I am having fun with the Santi Clan. It's really been a blast.
Date: 31/01/11 05:57 pm
Thanks for the story it was really good!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed.
Date: 13/01/10 12:48 am
Hey Spark! Have just finished reading this!! The ending was so sweet! I’m so glad Nic decided to stay on earth after all-her babies are so gorgeous lol.
All in all, a happy ending. I love weddings!! And I’m also glad Brian’s parents split up. It was for the best. You can’t stay with someone like that, especially after what she did.
Can’t wait to read more from you Spark, and I hope you keep adding to these series! Love your cast and group of characters and I know I’m going to enjoy reading about them!
Author's Response: TY for reading and reviewing d_i. It all began with them before I rolled it all back to John, his dad. You will see some revisits in "Hello, my name is Sammy" and "Dr. Feelgood." 'Sammy' is playing now, the latter should be going up soon. I promised Sammy would be short, but it seems there's so much to tell that it is going to be maybe twice as long as I expected. And as for 'Dr. Feelgood' it is going to be short--for sure! This story is going to tell some of what went on behind the scenes during the weekend of the wedding. Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/10/09 02:27 am
Yeah!!!
Author's Response: Awe thanks. I'm a soaper at heart so most of the cast is a pick from GH!
Date: 27/07/09 05:32 pm
That was great story! Looking forward to Greg, Peyton and Jonathon. I may have to reread the first story to get all the other players in my mind again.
Author's Response: Thanks qualidee...
Greg, Peyton, and Jonathan's story is on the way!
Oh there will also be more stories to come in the series! Hope you get to meet all of them! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 27/07/09 01:59 am
Thanks for a great read. I really enjoyed the story.
Author's Response: Thank you divisionred! You are pure awesome! I'm so happy you gave Nicole a chance! See she's not so bad!
[Report This]Date: 25/07/09 04:13 pm
Sweet ending for a cute, sweet family. I notice no Vanessa, YES!!!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL...so you don't like Van??? lmao!
Thanks for reading. I really appreciate your reviews and comments! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 25/07/09 03:04 am
Girl I loved this story!! I hate it is over but there are so many more stories to be told with these folks. I love the babies so much, I can't wait for them to grow up and hear more about them!! Brian and Nicole are teh sweetest cutuest young couple out there..just sweet!
I think I want Peyton story next that will be awesomeness!! Think about..:)
You did an outstanding job sweetie and kudos to you for getting done early and still putting out exceptional work! I loved it!!
Author's Response: Thanks nene for reading and for all of the wonderful reviews. I really appreciate your comments too. Brian and Nicole do grow on you--I know! I was so unsure if they'd be loved...since they had such an unpredictable beginning. And the babies...yes I can't wait til they start walking and talking and going to school... Peyton and Jonathan are on the way...without a doubt! ;-) Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/07/09 01:38 am
This was a great story SPAC.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I appreciate your responses and reading your comments. There shall certainly be more to come! Stay tuned! :-)
[Report This]Date: 24/07/09 11:56 pm
Great story.
Author's Response: Thank you yummy for reading! I appreciate
[Report This]Date: 24/07/09 05:14 pm
What a fun a beautiful chapter. This has been one great story, disappointed it's ending!
Author's Response: Awe...jovanfan4evr that's a feel good statement! Thanks for reading. I know it had to end and I'm going to miss writing it too. But they'll be visiting us through and through via their friends, family, and of course the trials of raising a boy and girl the same age!
Date: 24/07/09 01:26 pm
They are not ready for more kids right now. At least wait until the twins aren't in diapers anymore.
Thank goodness John got away from the snake wife of his. She is a nasty person. She was nasty when she was young, and her actions towards Nicole proves that she just got nastier with time.
Author's Response:
LOL Sweet Pea...tell me about it. Brian is making up for lost time...ROTFL! They'll take a few years...don't worry. Nic loves Brian and their babies but she's an overthinker. She took the initiative to get on BC. I'd say around three-five is a good time to pull the string on her IUD! LOL!
Yes...John is in the neutral zone with Vanessa. In Denied this will be detailed a bit more (i.e. their separation, living in separate rooms, and the final decree.)
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 24/07/09 05:48 am
Nicole said it she fought Brian all the way but he was determined to win her heart and he did. Thanks for a great story.
Author's Response:
Boy did she! LOL! If I gave you guys the story which was intended to be Brian's Journal comparative to It's All about You, it would have done poor Nic no favors with you Divisionred...and I would have had to double this story to undo the damage. But I'm glad you liked it and hopefully the couple is set on a good course with everyone. Nicole's trip to Serenity was a must! Prior, a lot of readers were skeptical that she wasn't fully giving herself to Brian, and she wasn't. So that was as far as I dared to go with Brian's interpretation of their budding romance. He wasn't use to a woman like her...she's so different than Liz who basically told him what their day to day would entail. Nicole brings out the manly in him...makes him want to run a little faster, work a little harder, etc.
They're a good match!
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 24/07/09 04:50 am
Great update. I'm glad that Jonathon calmed down and everyone seems to be getting along. Hope to get a storyline with Peyton, Jonathon and Greg.
Author's Response:
Hi qualidee3
Jonathan has some real insecurities. He had a lot of surrogates but he really doesn't relate that well to men because of the lack of male presence in his life growing up. He just needs tough love, and good whack on his bum, and some isolation from the women he considers his No. 1 fanbase (Pat, Jessy, and Amaria) and then he comes in from the storm!
There will definitely be a story with the three of them. A lot to tell and more to share! Stay tuned.
Reviewer: qualidee3 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 24/07/09 02:47 am
I love thes two, their friends and now their sweet little babies!!
Their vows especially Nicoles was so beautiful and heartfelt..I almost cried!! They have been through a lot but now it is all worth it!!
I am sad it is over but it ending perfectly!!
Now if she coukd just keep Bryan from giving her another baby..rotfl!!
So many opportunity for spin offs..wow..I would love to read Peytons story with two guys and a soon to be ex husband would be ubber interesting!! I love Peyton anyway and she deserves somne happiness!! Plus we can check in with the newlyweds and my babies!!
You did a wonderful job sweetie..this story was a masterpiece!!
Author's Response:
Yes...indeed Nene, Nicole has been fighting love from the onset, fearing it was another joke on her. And Brian's shifty feet and strong family committment didn't give her much to cling to in the beginning. But naturally when he realized he could lose her he put things in perspective...and that wasn't easy to do with an old bitch-ass mother like Van who plays on the emotions of the men around her.
Thanks so much for reading this to it's end! I appreciate your loyalty to the fic! ;-)
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 24/07/09 01:43 am
That was a nice romantic wedding, and I loved the vows that Brian and Nicole said to on another, and the twins chiming in was just so adorable.
Its sad that Peyton's marriage is over, I think the distance was much for them, but I have a feeling that there is more to it.... and the fact that both Greg and Johnathan are into Peyton is intriging.
Looking forward to the epilogue.
Author's Response:
Thanks Lady Liberty, I'm ecstatic that you liked the wedding. It was one of the first chapters I doodled then locked away. The babies...they say so little but with so much inflection!
I feel bad for Peyton too. But her story is going to flesh out her history, her hidden insecurities, and more of why she's the bestest damn friend a girl could have! :D
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 23/07/09 11:13 pm
You know I thought this was the wedding right. I was imagining the babies in their cute outfits, BJ in a little tux and Blake in a gorgeous white dress!!
Author's Response: No SweetPea, not yet! But its on the way! Can't you just imagine them now...by the time of the wedding they'll be five months old! Wow!
[Report This]Date: 22/07/09 04:39 am
You are such a perfectionist and creative as well!! The invitatons and prrogram perfect..wow!! Everythin is beautiful!! I want to be at this weeding!!
Author's Response: Awe...thanks! You guys have been so supportive of this tale I felt you deserved something special!
Another special gift is coming!
[Report This]Date: 22/07/09 02:43 am
Thanks for the invite. I will be there with bells on.
Author's Response: Glad to know it! It's a three day event...and then our couple leaves for their honeymoon! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 22/07/09 01:23 am
She better say yes, a thousand times yes!
Author's Response: Oh she's said yes already...he wants a date circled on the calendar...I'm sure he didn't let her up from that bed until they put a date on the calendar.
[Report This]Date: 18/07/09 12:24 am
This was a great update...poor Brian suffering because he couldn't get over the fact that he thought that Nic wanted to leave him. I can't believe that we are down to the wire on this one. Thanks
Author's Response: Yes...Brian loves so hard. True to his zodiac! Yep we're approaching the end...and it's been great sharing! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 17/07/09 01:26 pm
Ok Blake s a pistol..but too cute!! LB long his tummy is full and he is dry , he is cool with anyone..that made me laugh!! I am sure Blake will come around soon after sh egives daddy a run for his money!!lol
I am so glad Nic and Brian finally got to make it hawt again..and it was truely hawttttt!! They are back..and it is so nice!!
I am sorry to see this one end but it was a great story sweetie!!!Now one to marriage and epilogue!!
Author's Response: Yes neneburge, it's approaching it's final destination. But you know with all of these people single and running around that something is boud to happen! So glad you enjoyed the read...now to the wedding! Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/07/09 02:50 am
about time they got married.. its taken them long enough. great update.
Author's Response: I know right?
They've finally arrived at the same place. I can't wait to roll it out! I hope you return to catch it.
[Report This]Date: 16/07/09 11:26 pm
That was GOOOOD
Author's Response: Thanks Lady Liberty for supporting! Glad you enjoyed!
[Report This]Date: 16/07/09 10:59 pm