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Title: Chapter 15

I loved it!  How precious!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you loved it!

Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/07/09 03:54 pm

Title: Chapter 16

I love Winnie the  Pooh!! It's so sweet that the entire family went home together! And Paw Paw was there to greet them made it all the more special.

Author's Response: Me too! It's such a classic throwback! Family is home, now the real work begins.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/07/09 06:21 am

Title: Chapter 16

That was just so sweet, Brian/Nicole and their babies are home and a family, thats the BEST.

Loved John being their and seeing his grandchildren.

Johnathan did a good thing despite his being a arrogant jerk.



Author's Response: LOL...Jonathan an arrogant jerk...no doubt! I'm glad you enjoyed the update. Nicole and Brian have been looking forward to seeing John hold those babies. And Blake behaved too!

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/07/09 04:52 am

Title: Chapter 16

Thanks for a great update.  So there is history between Jonathan and Peyton.  I am glad that the pediatrician allowed Blake to go home with her family.  That was nice of Peyton to get Johnathan to talk with their pediatrician.  I am not sure if I want to see a Peyton Jonathan hook up.  But what will be will be.  Glad that their grandfather was their to see the twins and the rest of the family except for the mean grandma.  Thanks again.

Author's Response: Thanks divisionred for reading. Yes there is some serious love hate going on with Jonathan and Peyton. Yes! PawPaw got to hold his grandbabies.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/07/09 04:30 am

Title: Chapter 16

yay, john was there and jonathan did right by making sure the babies both went home together with their parents. good update!

Author's Response: Thanks KellyLi for reading. See, Jonathan can do good. It's in him to do good! Once I hammer out some stuff, I'll lay down his story! He's getting a good turn to shine!

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/07/09 03:39 am

Title: Chapter 16

I love this story so much..I will be sad to see it end though it can have it's own sequel...lol!

I love how the babies are so different but eah has the personality of the parent!! I am so happy Peyton was able to get Jonathan's snake behind to help her get them both home on the same day!!

I hope Peyton can find happiness she deserves..she is a awesome friend to Nicole and deserves to be happy with or without her husband ...

 I am glad PawPaw Santi got a chance to see and hold his grandbabies...that made me smile!!

Great job sweetie..I will be sad to see this wonderful story end!!



Author's Response: Awe neneburge...that's just about the sweetest thing I've heard! You make me smile and cry at the same time! The cast is huge so the possibilties are endless! Thanks for reading my story. I so appreciate it! ;-)

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/07/09 09:23 pm

Title: Chapter 15

That was a tear jerker.... I'm so happy that Nicole is back with Brian and her babies.... and Blake in her own way knew that her mommy wasn't there and thats who she wanted, that scene was the sweetest.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. I'm glad you felt the sentiment. It was indeed written as the reunion of all reunions. Blake is a pistol and she definitely sensed something was off. Nicole carried her so close to her heart and missed her mommy.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/07/09 10:35 pm

Title: Chapter 15

I am so happy, make that jubilant that Nicloe woke up. Now their family is complete again. Now, what's going on with John.

Author's Response: I so happy you're happy!!!  Family is complete!  They will fight hard, love hard, and stand the tests of time!  John is still in rehab...and is approaching discharge.  You'll see how he balances the love, the lives, and the nuSon, and the what the future holds.  Much of this will be carried out in the running fic Denied...

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/07/09 05:02 am

Title: Chapter 15

Yes, I really did enjoy the update...thank goodness Robbi showed her what she would be missing.  Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response: Yes...she fastened her sights on the losses and forgot about the gifts...she's home now...let's see what is up next! :-)

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/07/09 04:01 am

Title: Chapter 15

I am so happpppyyy!!!! Finally Nicole si with her babies and they have their mommy!! Her man has his woman his lifeline back again!! I am so happy for them!! All Nicole needed was see her babies and know they needed her and it was over...St. Anthony came through big time!!

I was so happy for them all..now they can begin that wonderful life together..with two gorgeous little ones !

Ezcellent excellent excellent sweetie!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for the wonderful review!!!  Yes mommy and woman is home!  Now we must make it all legal!!!  Yes...she just needed to see her family...and forget the pain long enough to take a closer look.  St. Anthony rocks!!! He's getting his wings!!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/07/09 02:11 am

Title: Chapter 15

Thanks for bringing Nicole back!

Author's Response: You're welcome! I never would have...even in my wildest of ideas, would killed her.  She's the integral part of this entire Saga.  She's going to be around...someone has to keep little Blake-Kiersten in line, certainly won't be daddy-mush Brian! 

Reviewer: qualidee3 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/07/09 01:43 am

Title: Chapter 15

Beautiful to see a mom bond with her baby.  It is so real and surreal.

I remember those days.  Yes.

Wonderful update.



Author's Response: The bonding was a toughy...I have to admit! Thanks for reading and for the wonderful review! :-)

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/07/09 11:37 pm

Title: Chapter 15

That were  so sweet.

Author's Response: thank you for reading...i do love them so!

Reviewer: yummy954 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/07/09 11:08 pm

Title: Chapter 14

OMG! I had a feeling that he was really Robbie. Wait, does this mean that an Angel lied!! Things that make you go Hmmm.

She better wake up before Vanessa and Liz try to raise those poor babies.

So, John survives, that good news for the other story. 



Author's Response:

Angels lie...heavens, how do I explain that???  It's complicated to explain.  It's not a lie.  In the mortal world he was Robbie.  In Serenity he isn't.  When he passes the test, he gets his wings...K!

The calm before the storm of storms...Vanessa has to pay the piper.  Liz too!  John is alive...will live and he will be coming home soon...where???  What happens with him and Van??? Time will tell!

Thanks for reading...thanks for the wonderful review! :-) 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/09 06:26 am

Title: Chapter 14

Thanks for a great update.  Way to go Brian step up to the plate.  Take control of the situation.  He dealt with his mother very respectfully and made sure that she didn't move Nicole's things...good for him,  Kind of sad when you can't trust your own mother.

Brian's talk with Greg was on point.  Greg needs to stop trying to be with Paige,  And Paige needs to remember that she is married.

Nicole needs to come back to the living she can't be with Rob anymore because he is dead.

Thanks



Author's Response:

LOL.  Brian has a full plate.  And he's spinning more plates than he ever thought he would.   He has to keep Van on watch.  She's a pushy woman and he can't let her get to far out on her own.  She'll take over.

Greg needed a wakeup.  How much good it will do?  Still don't know yet.  Nicole's getting her stuff together.  She doesn't want Robbie.   She wants a promise that no one can give her...that she won't suffer anymore loss.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/09 02:00 am

Title: Chapter 14

It is breaking my heart all the pain Nicole's serenity stay is causing her family..I almost cried wiith Brian and felt La Dona' pain watching her child this way. This is so sad..the babies need their mom..why is she being so selfish....if he cannot get her back then the Elder has too...she has to come back to her family!!

I really love this story sweetie!



Author's Response: It's not her intent to cause pain.  She's really believing they are better off without her.   Thanks for reading and the wonderful review! :-)

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/09 01:29 am

Title: Chapter 14

what! He really is robbie? I wish she could know and know he's fine and he'll watch over her and the babies but her life is with brian now. great update!

Author's Response:

Yes...he's indeed Robbie.  But he isn't suppose to be 'her Robbie' he's St. Anthony to all who are lost.  But she needed to cross paths with him.  He's going to help her against the rules of the world he lives in.  But the reward will be sweet.  He knows he can't love her, he knows she's afraid, so he'll make all the necessary sacrifices to get her home on time!

Thanks for reading. And for the great review! I'm so glad you enjoyed.   :-)

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/09 12:50 am

Title: Chapter 14

Seems that Blake has fire like her mother.... she is going to be a handful.

Nicole please come back tp your family, they need you as much as you need them, you can't hide from life.



Author's Response:

Both stubborn...como el toro!

So you see where time is going to take the family...remember the babies were born in 2000 and we have nearly ten years of life to come to in order to reach the present (2009). 

She's coming...and indeed her family is in need of her.  She's the anchor.  Brian is a wall of strength and can get himself stirred up to pull out another leg in the race, but he needs Nic.  And he will have her back completely. 

There lives will be forever changed by this experience. 

Thanks for reading. ;-0

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06/07/09 11:38 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Hey Spark! Have finally caught up and wow, what an emotional roller coaster. Alot to take in.

It's very sweet though, all the relationships. I felt sorry for Brian cause I felt that Nicole was always emotionally distant and then to learn that his mother had kept such a secret from him like that. To have a half brother...that is huge! God, she's an evil bitch. I felt bad for him cause of his mom and liz and then Nic...At least Nic is surrounded by awesome friends and family

I thought it was because she was still in love with Robbie but the latest add has clarified it for me. She's not in love with Robbie, I mean, she still is but the love of her life is Brian now, she's only holding back cause of her fears of being hurt. *slaps forehead* It's so obvious, now that I think about it. But I'm glad that's resolved.

But there's still so much more. Peyton and her marriage, the issues between Jonathan and Nicole. Brian and his family, esp his mother.

I hope Nicole wakes up okay! And congrats on the babies, they are gorgeous!

Great fic so far, spark. Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Yes...it's a tale of emotions isn't it?  I still can't believe that it was suppose to only be a 10 chapter tale...L@@k!

Thanks for reading and catching up to it!

Nic may only have Peyton...but the truth is one good one is better than a sleuth of uncertainty!

Oh you nailed it! Nic will always love Robbie.  Their love was interrupted by death.  She has grown a new limb and loves Brian from a very special place.  The more she grows to love him, the more she fears the reality that she can't retain him forever--she can't.  It's not in her power to do so.

Jonathan doesn't love Nicole.  He's infatuated with the love he passed on.  He's wondering 'what if' and he's a spoiled mess of conflicted good/bad.  He has some unresolved issues with his absent parent, the death of the stepfather, and then Robbie his altar brother. 

And so Nic is an effort to try to claim something he refused to get by without.  Robbie was an awesome friend.  He loves his friend/brother and would have never taken his girl, but Jonathan is spewing at any and everything that represents loss in his life.  He's lost nearly thirty years with John...and he knows how Van dotes on the baby boy of hers...so he's thinking...see if he can pluck Nic away.

The woman he passed on is actually Peyton...and this will be opened up more and more.  So much story to tell with these characters...I know! It makes writing for them so much fun!

Thanks for the baby compliments.  I searched for so long for babies...so glad you like the pics! 

 

Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/09 03:11 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Thanks for a great update.  Glad that Peyton told off Liz...but what the hell is she doing kissing Greg?  Now that is so not cool.  Thanks

Author's Response:

LOL.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Peyton hates Liz.  She wants to walk up and down her like Nancy Sinatra...fer shur!

Not cool...pain can come.  They have relationships...they love their best friends who are indeed having an emotional spin cycle going on...but again hurt and pain could come from moments of pleasure.

Hmm...details to come! :-0 

 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/09 10:02 am

Title: Chapter 13

I'm sure Nicole will find the closure that she needs. Liking the scene with Peyton and Greg, but not sure where it's going she is after all married(even if it's unhappily)

Author's Response:

She's married.  It's an emotional struggle for her.  But Joel has made it easy for her.  He's been no angel and still it doesn't right her wrong.  She was thinking she wanted this life he was offering...and now she's wondering...wondering...and this is where she and Greg share common ground.  They see Brian and Nicole as the life they want, but their current circumstances fail to yield 'family' as the prize.

They are a mess...I'd love to write their story.  It's coming! I can feel it! 

 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/07/09 08:59 am

Title: Chapter 13

A kiss like that is never safe. I hate to tell Peyton, but she's already crossed that line with Greg.

Author's Response: Very lingering kiss...like the kind that can last for days??? They've crossed a major line.  A story is coming...stay tuned!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/09 05:34 am

Title: Chapter 13

I knew that Liz was going to show up at the hospital and try to use this to her advantage, she is pathetic and desperate, Brian doesn't want her. she needs to Get a Life....  Peyton handled her real good, I was kinda hoping that she would Jack Liz's Jaw.

Peyton and Greg.... I kinda saw that one coming, it seems to me that hubby is either kinda selfish, or he is hiding something, b/c he never comes to  Peyton, she always goes to him.

OK Nicole can't stay at "Serenity" she is doing nothing byt hiding, forever is not promised to anyone... she needs to face this and love Brian and her babies until her time here is done.



Author's Response:

Very pathetic and desperate indeed.  Van may not have bred her, but IMO she is born out of a sinful deed.  Her life is pathetic.  She may be successful, but she doesn't have love.  She chases the life she thinks she wants and has no clue how to handle it when it arrives...good teaching huh?

Brett's getting a story.  He has too.  He's a hottie and he deserves a warm cup of cocoa to mix it up with.  LOL!

Peyton/Greg are both horny for each other and have been for some time now.  She's lonely and he wants Brian's stability...in love with with the love he see's with Nicole/Brian.  And now the babies have him wanting...wanting...despite his 'playa vibe'.  He wants the wifey!

Story of Peyton and Joel is coming too...searching for a Joel...there will be a triangle coming and Peyton will be at the APEX.  I'm still toiling with the persons who can frame this and make it a unique story.  I'm always searching to challenge myself as a writer...stay tuned.

Nicole is going to get a ride back to reality from a very much needed driver! LOL!

Yes.  She is going to get some repair to her spirit and her heart.  It's all coming...in bits! 

 

 

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/09 03:07 am

Title: Chapter 13

Is it wrong that I really wanted Peyton to kick Liz's behind..not go to jail but just wipe that witches butt!! She makes me ill!!

Ok Peyton and Greg...ok well ..I like them both I know she is married but...I guess she should do the right thing ..but!

 I understand getting over the past but her future is worrying at the foot of her bed and sleeping in that nursery and they need her..she got get over all of this and come back to her family!!

Ok I am finally caught up and so loving this story!!!

 



Author's Response:

Nope! Not wrong! LOL!

Peyton and Greg are a visible recreation of the emotional struggle of two forces meeting with a single cause in mind...to find strength in the globule of uncertainty.  It echoes the friendship that Jonathan and Nicole shared (but no kiss transpired).  I am not going to write that, because it is not going to be an element that could mess with my bubble (Nic / Brian).

Love me some Nic/Brian.  They are such a beautiful mess!

As for Nic's spiritual walk...she's getting the rest she needs as well as finding the peace in the closure her heart had sought for so long.  But if she won't come willing she may need an escort to drop her off...show her what she's turning away from!

It's all in the way of love!

Thanks for reading and I'm glad you are enjoying...so much more to come.  Funny this story was only to be about 10 chapters.  I could never tell this story in that limit.  I'm glad I stretched the canvas.   Jonathan was a element that came to me but I needed an integration point.  And needed a time line for his point of entry that would make the story come together--explanations to questions that weren't going to be answered in a single shot.

:-) 

 

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/09 11:17 pm

Title: Chapter 13

So glad that Nichole is getting the closure that she needs.  That Liz is still a trip.  Looks like things may heat up between Peyton and Greg...maybe...maybe not?  Good chapter.

Author's Response:

She's a stubborn little gal.  But she's forcing the answers she needs.  It's all her will to get herself the closure she needs.  It may not seem that way, but she wants to come back and be the wife she thinks Brian deserves for all the love he offers.  Thanks for reading!

I have a story for Peyton.  I keep recycling the idea.  But I need to get Heyden integrated fully and I think I have an idea!  Heyden's character element has been slowly depicted throughout two of the series stories.  But I need to take some time and pull it out.  It may be coming by Fall!

Stay tuned! 

 

 

Reviewer: qualidee3 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/09 06:34 pm

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