Please let Nicole wake up.... I hope that St Anthony gets her to see that Brian loves her and the babies need her.
Glad that Vanessa and LaDonna get along, and I hope that Vanessa does out up barriers with her and Liz's relationship.
Author's Response: It is going to be a vey loving and tender reunion. But she has to heal her spirit and then she will come back to her family. Thanks so much for reading. ;-) Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 01/07/09 08:14 pm
Poor Brian. He's trying to celebrate the birth of his children, as well as deal with the fact that their mother, the love of his life, is in a coma and may never wake up.
Author's Response: His shoulders are heavy and he hasn't had much sleep...not good. Help is on the way. Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/07/09 07:38 am
upon reading the other reviews i see that everyone has the same sentiment as myself. It would do us faithful readers a great diservice to kill Nicole off. We've been through two great stories rooting for this couple only to have them go through tragedy. I'm no writer and I don't claim to be so I won't tell you what, nor will I tell you how to write. But please don't kill her off.
kiki
Author's Response: I promise you...she'll be home to hold her babies and be loved by her man. Reviewer: kiki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/07/09 01:08 am
great update, when r the babies going bring brian and his brother together?
Author's Response: If I told you KelleyLi that this story was only estimated at 10 chapters...would you believe me?
LOL...
It's coming...timed and strategized...but surely coming.
[Report This]Date: 30/06/09 08:42 pm
Please, please please, do not kill her off...that woukd be so unfair to Brian and the twins. Thanks for a great read. Glad that at least the twins are doing ok.
Author's Response: All will end well. Don't worry. Nicole is resting and doing some real spiritual healing!
:D
[Report This]Date: 27/06/09 02:54 am
So happy the babies made it, and they are just sooooo cute, Brian and Nicole are going to be great parents... Please Please let Nicole make it.
I liked the flashback with Brian and his friends... Neil IMO was being kinda a jerk, but it seems that he maybe just a bit jealous b/c he wants a family but Celeste doesn't.
I sorta feel bad for Vanessa, b/c of her funky attitude she is missing out on the babies.
Can't wiat for more.
Author's Response: Yes...the babies! I must have spent weeks trying to find just the right images and how to present them to the readers. Neil and JT envy Brian a bit. Neil wants a family and JT wishes he had the maturity and self-reliance of Brian. Brian is simply bred to take charge and accept responsibility. But he also loves kids. So he's got the right stuff. Nicole will be good too because she has a natural whispering about her. I'm writing their wedding vows...if that connotes anything of a future prediction...;-) Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 26/06/09 10:32 pm
Great update! I was a little worried for a minute that Nicole wouldn't make it.
Author's Response: She's merely working out her issues in love, trust, and acceptance.
And St. Anthony will be her teacher.
[Report This]Date: 26/06/09 04:07 pm
Please Please let the babies make it, I so want Brian and Nicole to have their family.
Jonathan is a TOOL, I just wanna Slap him until my Hand Hurts.
Author's Response: LOL...to slapping Jonathan til it hurts... Thanks for reading. I love that line! ;-) Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 23/06/09 04:19 am
am surprised by Jonathan. His mother is so nice and he is nothing but the devil. I can't believe that he spke the way to Peyton what an f...ing idiot. He does need someone to kick his sorry behind the foll. I want his POV for the reason why he is acting this way.
As for Vanessa I guess that blood is thinker than water for her son to forgive her crazy ass.
I hope that Nicole and the babies will be ok and that Brian will survive this.
Thanks for a great read.
Author's Response: Thanks DivsionredFor reading and reviewing. Jonathan is a brat, overindulged to compensate for the absence...and a little of the poor me syndrome. He's such an ass. He likes Peyton because she doesn't take his crap. He hasn't mastered the rudiments of communicating with a pretty girl you like.
Author's Response: Thanks DivsionredFor reading and reviewing. Jonathan is a brat, overindulged to compensate for the absence...and a little of the poor me syndrome. He's such an ass. He likes Peyton because she doesn't take his crap. He hasn't mastered the rudiments of communicating with a pretty girl you like. Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/06/09 01:29 am
Great update. Thanks! Jonathan is a just dirty! Like how Peyton put him in his place. Thank goodness for Greg keeping Brian from being barred from the hospital, if a fight broke out.
Author's Response: LOL...jovanfan4evr
Jonathan is a piece of work, isn't he?
Good save on the part of Greg. It would have been a shame to fight his brother and be tossed out, unable to see his babies or Nicole. ;-)
Date: 22/06/09 07:45 pm
The babies are coming thats good, I hope that they will be OK.
My shiesty radar was on alert with Johnatha and for good reason, seems he wants Nicole... good think Nicole set him straight..... now Brian needs to talk to Nicole about what he's feeling and trust her.
Author's Response: Yep...birthday is coming. Jonathan's reacting to the revelation and Nicole gave her best effort to lay the truth on him. Thanks for reading. Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 16/06/09 10:06 pm
Wow, what great casting! Who's the woman you've chosen for Kym Rodarte. She looks really familar, but I can't place where I've seen here.
Have just started reading this, look forward to it!
Author's Response: Hi there...Thanks. They've been on the caravan ride with me now since the original. Kym Rodarte is played by Marissa Ramirez, she was the original Gia "Sparky" Campbell from General Hospital. Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/06/09 03:07 pm
Your sure know how to keep us on a hanging on a cliff. Jonathan is messing where he shouldn't, he sounds delusional with the "us" word coming out of his mouth.
Author's Response: Jonathan is a little delusional. Thanks for reading! :-)
Date: 16/06/09 12:22 am
uh,oh..i guessi wa s wrong. i hope it will all be cool. those are going to be his niece and nephew or nieces or nephews. great chapter.
Author's Response: Hang in there KelleyLi, don't lose it yet...Thanks for reading and reviewing! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 15/06/09 11:45 pm
i dont think bri has anything to worry about. at least not that. he should be worried about the lies he mom kept from him, his sister, and father. and the shower was so sweet. good update.
Author's Response: Hmm...that's inspiring KelleyLi...Glad you loved the shower. I'm workin on some images for the babies...can't wait to share!
[Report This]Date: 15/06/09 11:39 pm
Wow, that was a shock then a sweet surprise at the end. Great update. I cant wait for the brothers and sister to get closer. And John, what will he do? What about his lost love... I know you have the new story, but I was wondering will they meet now he knows.
Author's Response: it's mostly revealed in Denied and then we shall have to wait to see how this story rounds out to get the confirmation.
[Report This]Date: 05/06/09 12:45 am
Ooh, what is all the tension in the room. It seemed like they all wanted jump and scream. I'm off to read your latest update.
Author's Response: LOL...oh diggity just you wait and see!
[Report This]Date: 05/06/09 12:34 am
I think she's scared of marrying him. Like she'd be the first woman pregnant who got married. Even full-figured and overweight women have no problem getting married and fitting into a dress for the man they love or even dont love. Somethings going on inside of her.
Author's Response: Not saying...your on to something! :) thanks for the great reviews! :)
[Report This]Date: 05/06/09 12:27 am
She needs to marry him and soon. He's too good of a man and she's need to see what she truly has, if someone is telling him that out of spite.
Author's Response: I would...but Nicole has a lot in her head...but isn't he a great guy? I so love him!
[Report This]Date: 05/06/09 12:23 am
I loved when he pretended to leave. too cute...
Author's Response:
Brian is trying so hard. He's good through and through, but they are growing. Thanks for the great rating!
Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed [Report This]Date: 05/06/09 12:19 am
i love them , you can feel it. great chapt.
Author's Response: They are Love. It's such a hard row for Nicole. But she grows on you. Young girl to have lost 'her everything'. Brian's a good match for her!
[Report This]Date: 05/06/09 12:12 am
A sweet chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks hun!
[Report This]Date: 05/06/09 12:02 am
great casting.
Author's Response: Thanks KelleyLi!
[Report This]Date: 04/06/09 11:56 pm
This is an interesting story and can't wait to find out what Vanessa actually did. I feel some sibling rivalry coming on over Nicole.
Author's Response: Hmm......thanks for reading! So glad you find it interesting. I'm working very hard to keep my readers fed. : - o
[Report This]Date: 04/06/09 03:19 am
Ok I am confused about what Vanessa did...she stole Brians; dad from a woman that has his child who is Nicole's ex? A BABY SHOWER!!!!YEAH!!!! Thanks
Author's Response: No...No...d'red, not Nicole's ex, but her dead ex's best friend. He was kinda sweet on her. Nothing happened. I'm happy to say.
[Report This]Date: 03/06/09 12:39 pm