This was so cute! Hate that it didn't get finished.
Reviewer: stacktowngurl Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/17 02:31 am
I saw an update on Mercy & decided to reread them all. I have missed your stories I hope you get to them all again.
Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]Date: 15/07/14 02:31 am
update soon
Reviewer: jdubbs Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/04/14 12:43 am
This is the first Justin/Bee story i've ever read. Can't wait to see how the story unfolds, keep up the good work!
Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]Date: 30/09/13 04:39 pm
Why did you stop this story???? I loved it! =(
Reviewer: LittleRedRidingHood Signed [Report This]Date: 04/07/13 06:24 pm
Please, please, please update soon!!! This has to be my favorite story on the site!!
Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]Date: 12/04/13 01:40 am
It's cute, but I wonder if Justin - charismatic superstar that he is - is actually as shy as he is portrayed to be in this chapter. I've seen a few interviews with the singer but never one quite like this, yet I can imagine it. I could literally hear Sexy Back in my head and I absolutely hated it. I abhor that song, though, so it's nothing against your story. It was one hit of his that I will never be able to understand the popularity of. I did not know T.I.'s name was Clifford, which was an interesting choice on his mother's part.
I like this and I took note of your warning in the beginning, but I noticed it isn't actually your spelling that seems to be the issue but the old standard word-confusion. "Where" is used instead of "were" a few times, the "your" and "you're" mix-up pops up as well, but these can be easily fixed if you run the chapters through some sort of grammar program. I think it would help, or getting a BETA.
♥PEACE.
Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/06/11 03:20 am
I'm interested to see where this goes. Looks like it's headed towards a pretty great start at least. I love Justin with Beyonce, they would have absolutely adorable babies. Justy and Ci-Ci are hot together, too! Still, I am feeling this pairing.
♥PEACE.
Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 16/06/11 10:58 pm
I really enjoyed your story so far please update soon. Something tells me that little Ciara is going to try and cause trouble and end up hurt because J really loves B and he not going tolet her go.
Reviewer: Nichole Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/04/10 07:56 am
please....pretty please update this story. thanks!!!
Reviewer: vmck Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/10/09 05:31 am
tres belle histoir a quand la suite
Author's Response: I'm sorry, I don't speak French.
[Report This]Date: 15/10/09 01:57 am
i have missed this story so much!! thank you thank you for the update and please update again soon...like this week!??!!
Reviewer: vmck Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/07/09 06:08 am
OMG! I think it was good they had that talk at the beginning. They needed it. I can't believe Justin's father did all that. No wonder he hates him so much. I wanna know what Ciara's about to pull. I can feel something in the works. You did your thing with this chapter like always. This is my story! Add soon.
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/07/09 03:11 am
I don't understand why you always think your chapter suck. this was fire. you are a great writer. you had me in tears by the end of this chapter.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/07/09 08:41 pm
They were made fore each other! That shower scene's got me blushing! Loved the add!
Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/06/09 06:00 am
this chapter was one of the best. the conference room was my fav (of course). keep up the great work because we need more
update soon please!!!!
Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]Date: 06/06/09 04:59 am
Excellent. I've been checking every week to see if there is an update. I love this and you are doing a great job of writing the story. Keep it up. Hurry up with a new chapter!! :-)
Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/06/09 06:32 pm
I was hoping Justin jumped on his father. That's really messed up about his dad being a jackass! I love all the comedy in this chapter. It showed both beyonce and justin's playful side. They are truely ment to be. Wonderful chapter as always.
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/06/09 12:51 pm
That was HOT! The entire chapter as a whole was great and well worth the wait. Great job!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/06/09 09:12 am
the length was perfect. i don't know how i missed this update?!?! i was beginning to think you abandoned this story. i can't wait for more...much more
Author's Response: Glad you found it!
Date: 24/05/09 05:01 am
I have been keeping up with this story and I just want to say two thumbs up.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's nice 2 hear.
[Report This]Date: 10/05/09 02:05 pm
What Beyonce did for that child at the zoo almost had me in tears. That was so sweet and Justin was so sweet a first day to the zoo was classic. I like that he didn't go all fancy on her and she still had a great job and the finish was even better with his mother. This is one of my favorite fics.
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/05/09 01:13 pm
Loved it! Their so in love it's cute!
[Report This]Date: 08/05/09 07:02 am
Oh! I forgot to say you can really see how much Justin loves her. It was so very odvious the way he was protecting her when the paps came. The were a mess!
Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/05/09 03:02 am
This had to be my favorite chapter yet. Girlfriend, you wrote your ass off with this one. I loved how you ended it. The talk Beyonce had with Lynn explained alot. I got alot out of it and I'm sure Beyonce did as well. Add soon.
Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/05/09 02:00 am