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Title: Marcel Alejandro

Great update AshAli.  Really enjoying Keesha as a cop.  Keep it coming!

Author's Response:

Thanks for your Review BlackMamba!!! I would have love if GH made her a cop. They didn't so I did:)

I will def try to update asap. 

Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/07/08 05:04 pm

Title: Marcel Alejandro

Mexico here we come! Nice update.

Author's Response: :) What happens in Mexico..... Thanks so much for the review. I'm hoping to update soon.

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/07/08 11:54 am

Title: Marcel Alejandro

Yay you made my nite ......i was hoping you would update this story ASAP....and just my luck you did....thank you cant wait to keep reading....

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I so glad you're enjoying the story. I will definitely try to update asap.

Reviewer: Cmami Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/07/08 07:13 am

Title: Body Language

Hi, again! :-)  Not sure what happened to my rating. :-(  I thought I gave it five stars, but it came out as 2-1/2. :-(  Sorry about that! I'm sure it was my error!

Anyway, looking forward to reading more.  Still loving the banner! :-)

 



Author's Response:

That's okay I'm happy with any stars :D

I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

I will try to update soon. and yes The Banner Rocks!!!

Reviewer: pinkrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/07/08 03:36 am

Title: Body Language

i adore keesha....you just became my new found hero....thank you for writing for her....i luv it

Author's Response: I love finding Keesha fans out there:) I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I love writing for her since GH chose not to;)

Reviewer: Cmami Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/07/08 06:22 pm

Title: Conversations

Ahhh, Deacon. The image is of the original AJ, no? Love it! Keesha's caught up between three men...lucky heifer! LOL :)

Author's Response:

Yes he played AJ...Loved him and I loved Deacon on B&B. I had to borrow him for my story:)

Thanks so much for the review!! 

Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/07/08 03:42 pm

Title: Body Language

Mmm, Keesha and Jason. I remember them back in the day. She was his first true love, NOT Robin. I hated recently (last year I guess) when they brought Robin back claiming she was Jason's first. Yeah, RIGHT. Jason and his brother AJ pulled a freakin' Paris of Troy over Keesha. They both wanted her and of the two Jason was the one actually in love with her (intially...I think later AJ actually fell for her), but ohhh, the way these soaps whitewash *cough* I mean 're-write' history...just amazes me. :) Loving this so far! Love the banter between Keesha and Sonny and Jason (hubba hubba) ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review. It's really hard to get over the way they treated her which is probably why I still haven't. I also hated the way they re-wrote the entire history as Robin being his first. it makes me wonder if Keesha had Jason's child would Robin still be considered his first. That's one of the main reason I got into fanfics:)

Thanks Again! 

Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/07/08 03:37 pm

Title: Body Language

Hi!  I really like this story and can't wait to read your updates.  I remember when Keesha talked about joining the police force on GH, so it's nice to read a story about her actually having that occupation! :-) 

I saw your note about loving your banner.  I love it, too.  It's nice to see Senait/Keesha again!!  The banner looks great for your story with Steve/Jason. :-)



Author's Response: Thanks so much for your Review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. And I love my banner as well thanks to TokenBlackGirl:)

Reviewer: pinkrose Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/07/08 05:52 am

Title: Conversations

Hmm..the plot thickens. Can't wait to read their confrontation, it's gonna be interesting.

Very nice chapter, I'm looking forward to the next!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!!!!!! Yeah Jason and Keesha need to have a few more conversations:D

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/07/08 07:45 am

Title: Mutual Understandings

Very nice, Liked how she handled Sonny. And I love Scotty showing up, I miss that character on the show.

Great job! 



Author's Response: thank you so much for your review!!!! I adore Scotty Baldwin. He does sarcastic like no other. Yeah Keesh will stay on top of Sonny. Not literally of course:) That's a whole new fic! 

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/07/08 07:42 am

Title: Conversations

So i'm guessing that she and jason hook up when she was with decon?  I loving this story girl thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!!! Yeah they had a hook-up or two that i'll need to go explore. It's a really old story from like five years ago. So I'm changing a lot as I go along. I'll try to update soon.:)

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/07/08 04:29 am

Title: Conversations

Jason seems pretty sure that Keesha won't give the tape to Rick, could there be a "reason" for such faith in her?

 

Good update, and I can't wait for the next chapter. 



Author's Response: Thanks so much for your reviews. Hmm That's a really good question:) I'll try to post a new chapter soon:)

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/08 01:13 am

Title: Conversations

Deacon huh? Cool addition since Sean Keanan was paired opposite Keesha on the show.  Nice choice.

I found myself wondering why she doesn't just break it off.  What's the point in lying? Is she afraid of what he'll do? Great update AshAli



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!!!! I wrote this about five years ago when Deacon was on B&B so I'm kind of changing a lot as I go along. Hoping to update soon:)

Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/07/08 06:06 pm

Title: Mutual Understandings

Interesting....

Man you got me thinking about General Hospital and what should have been!! Keep it going! 



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. GH had so many possibilities for Keesha. I'll try to update soon.

Reviewer: Minx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/07/08 04:58 pm

Title: Conversations

Yay I love SK, but I wish Keesha wouldn't lie to him about her feelings, she should just be honest and say that she's not looking for a relationship.  I don't care if I'm the only one, I'm still on Sonny's side and it wouldn't be smart of Jason to assume Keesha would jeopardize her career for him, he better get that tape.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the Review!!!!  Keesha is going through her own thing right now. So her brain is all over the place. I figured Sonny is use to this, so he know what he's talking about. Hoping to update soon!

Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/07/08 04:21 pm

Title: Body Language

Very good start. I got to get my head in this cause 1. I never knew Keesha and Jason so I'm fascinated. and 2. Alexis with Sonny brings back some yummy memories. So I cant wait to see where this takes us!! Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!!! You Tube has a lot of great Jason Keesha scenes. I was also one of the few who love Sonny and Alexis. But I wanted to give her a bitchier edge in the story.

Reviewer: Minx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/07/08 02:54 pm

Title: Mutual Understandings

Sleezy Scott, needs to be taken down a notch.

Where did the tape come from, don't leave us hanging. 



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!!!! I will try to update soon.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/08 06:29 am

Title: Mutual Understandings

Wait, wait, wait...

So her exes are Lorenzo and Ric?

Are you trying to kill me? *thud*

Nice update. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Yeah she got around...lol:) Had to put my guys in there.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/07/08 04:56 am

Title: Mutual Understandings

I see Scotty is still being an A-Hole.. Nice Update..Can't wait to read more..

Author's Response: I love big bad Scotty!!!LOL Thank you so much for reviewing!!!!  I will definitely try to update soon:)

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/07/08 01:18 am

Title: Body Language

What a nice start to your story..You really have a good understanding of the Keesha character... and what's up W/Sonny.. Can't wait until the next update.. Thanks for sharing



Author's Response: Thank  for the review!!! Yeah what is up with Sonny...Lol. I'll try to update soon:)

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/07/08 01:10 am

Title: Mutual Understandings

I like how she goes toe to toe with that jerk scott. So I wonder who killed manny? something tells me some we least expect. I'm loving this story thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Although I love Scotty he plays the perfect jerk. i will truly try to update at a faster pace:)

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/08 09:43 pm

Title: Mutual Understandings

woah, rewind, Keesha and Lorenzo AND Ric, hmmmm I hope that gets revisited. . .

I love me some Sonny though, even still.



Author's Response: Yeah they are my guys. I try to squeeze them in whenever possible:). Sonny on the other hand... Well I do love him in FanFic :D

Reviewer: GreatOdinsRaven Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/08 03:54 pm

Title: Body Language

Okay so I have to admit that I wasn't going to read any Keesha/Jason stories because it still to this day pisses me off the way ABC played them and the way Jason treated her after his accident (plus  I prefer original AJ hahaha).  But I'm glad I read this, it's really good and I love the fact that Keesha isn't being Jason's doormat.  Nice start.

Author's Response: I thought I was the only one still pissed about their 'break-up'. I was also a Huge fan of Sean K but I was a Huge fan of Billy as well. I will definitely try to update soon:)

Reviewer: GreatOdinsRaven Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/08 03:52 pm

Title: Body Language

What's up with Sonny telling Keesha he would never resist her. HMMM!!

The sexual tension between Jason and Keesha is undeniable. 



Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Yes they are and always will be undeniable.:).... regardless of how the idiots in charge  wrote them. I will try to update soon.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/08 03:16 am

Title: Body Language

Oooh, I'm so excited. I like the idea of Keesha as a cop and Jason as...well, Jason. And nasty Sonny in the mix, well..this is just all kinds of interesting. Great start, hurry up with the next chapter!

Author's Response: I remember when they had no idea what to do with her post Jason. One day she was a social worker the next a policeman. So I picked up where they left off.:)...

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 04:36 pm

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