Perry let out a harsh laugh, "Is this motherfucker high?? Did he really just try to tell me that my own motherfucking smoothie maker makes good smoothies? Like he's not standing in the million-dollar house that I OWN???"

This is why I love Perry!  Yes, yes and YES!!!

Its obvious the Thompson have some unfinished business between them.  You just don't throw away 15 years.  I can't wait to see where you take us with them! 

You've done it again HP and for that I am grateful!  I'm also glad you know how the side eye works, so I need Perry to knock Sass up PRONTO!! 

I really like Saskia and Perry.

 Parade reminded me of Little Cuba festivals when I lived in Miami..lots of people and little scary..but hell of alot of fun.

More please.

Awesome!. Really great beginning. Looking forward to learning more about these two.

Author's Response: Thank you, Pashmina! Trust me, you'll be getting more :) Thanks for reading/

Thanks for a great update,  I like Perry and Sakia.  I was stunned by the abiuse that Whitman endured by the hands of his dad.  That was very sad.  It seems that Perry's mother was a piece of work as well.  Thanks

Author's Response: Hi Div-Red. Yes, these two bonded through their not so great home lives. Neither one dwells too hard on it but it's had its effect on who they've become. Thanks so much for your comments and for reading!

How in the hell did he end up marry to Destiny?  He was suppose to win Jasmine back.  And now Jasmine is married to one of his friends by the name of Bo...WTH?  ALso she is a big time writer and his wife finds out that Jamine and Bo just returned from Ireland and her come back is didn't a man from Ireland come into the library...WTF????Oh man, hood rat alert,,,damn poor thing so jealous.  I guess that she thought that she was getting a winner but oops not yet.  See that is what she gets for listening to her crazy ass mother and then they have another child on the way.  DAMN!!!!Sucks to be her and him right now...the Whitmans....Thanks

Author's Response:

Div-Red! Oh man, once again you have me rolling :oD Thank you for your reviews. You have many great questions which I plan to answer.

Poor Destiny is right. Jealousy is a bad, bad thing isn't it?? It can make you paranoid, and leave you open to evil whispering from bad-minded people - like crazy ass mothers :o(

Thank you for reading!

Poor Whit...

That's what happens when your penis does all the talking for you: you get a big life sized bitch slap in the face!

I am excited as all get out to be reading this again.  I can't wait for the intro fo the other characters.  I'm invested in everyone but there is a certain couple that I just can't help but root for (Eastern Parkway anyone?)

HP, all you need to do is ask and I'll give u all the advice you want!  Besides it doesn't hurt that I would get to see 'the goods' first. 

You know this story is my crack!!! 

Hit me up whenever you are ready.

Loving this Girl

Thank you everyone for your reviews!

I love the start of this story.  I wonder how Aaron is going to deal with the news of being a dad.  I can't wait for an update.

Jazz is really out the door now.  One thing to be an immature frat boy at times, it's another to be someone's baby's daddy.

Author's Response:

True words, YHH. That's the problem with immature Frat boys, they often don't think about the consequences of their actions :o/ Bye-bye Jazz.

I think Destiny needs to hear your words of wisdom too, though...

i am really loving the beginning of this story, more please

Author's Response: Cheers for reading, Mslelee. I hope you continue to enjoy it!

That was so much easier to read. Thank you for making the changes.

I think he can consider Jazz forever gone. Although she probably still loves him, and he obviously still loves her.