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Title: Chapter 6

I loved this update. Kyle and Suzette are smoking hot together.Rene is a piece of work, her whole she is probaly from the ghetto and would kill her made me laugh. Cant wait to see how this story plays out.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, that part made me laugh when I wrote it.

Reviewer: Pawoo Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/06/09 03:42 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I must say that I was surprised by the town people. Thank you for making them so friendly. I love those two together. Instant love. More please.

Author's Response: no problem, glad you like them together!

Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/06/09 02:50 pm

Title: Chapter 6

These last two updates have been hot and I love the connection that Suzette and Kyle have but I think that Suzette is thinking that it is only a vacation fling for her b/c she is talking about when she goes back hom and cooking things for her family and not understanding that Kyle baby is playing for keeps and she better watch out for that Renee even though she doesn't have much to worry about cause see seem to bring alot of folk over to her side.  Great update can't wait for the next one on all of you stories keep up the good work.

Author's Response: lol glad you like it, Im doing my best!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/06/09 02:15 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Fantastic update, Sade!!!

Kyle and Suzette are H O T!!!!

But is she's mad even thinking of leaving this fine specimen of a man...not only is he sexy as hell...he cooks and caters to HER...owns his own home...knows how to treat his lady...can throw down in the bedroom...and he not only wants her physically...he's showing her in a million wordless ways how much he's falling in love with her...hell, if she don't want him...I'll take him...and not for just a fling...Kyle is prime-grade marriage material...and they keep this up...a little Kyle Jr. might not be too far behind...

Rene is such a pathetic hobilly...but at least she got a little sense no to try to step to Suzette...I LMAO of her falling in the middle of the bar trying to entice Kyle...who probably didn't notice she was in the room...

I'm loving this story girl...I wish the updates would come sooner...but I understand you have so many going...and I appreciate it all...just take my impatience as a sign that you are keeping this reader well entertained...

More, more, more!!!!



Author's Response: lol Glad you like it, will do my best to keep it up.

Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/06/09 01:49 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Lol, Suzette and Kyle ain't nothin but freaks.



Author's Response: lol you know it! :P

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/06/09 12:12 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Thanks for the update. This is a really sweet story.



Author's Response: No problem, Im glad you think so. Its been a pleasure to write.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/06/09 08:33 pm

Title: Chapter 5

That was sweet.  Bring on the rest.

Author's Response: lol Glad you like it!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 10:20 pm

Title: Chapter 4

More, More, More!  I'm loving it.

Author's Response: Glad you like it, lol We shall see about that update.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 10:10 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter.  Kyle is so sexy.

Author's Response:

Thank you glad you like it, I think so too! Thank you for the review~

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 10:05 pm

Title: Chapter 2

They're cute together.  Rene and her mother will have to get over it. 

Author's Response: lol glad you like the pairing. They arent done with our couple yet.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 09:55 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I'm liking it so far.  I think Toby Keith is cute too.

Author's Response: lol Glad you like it and I agree.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 09:47 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Oh that was beautiful and the love scene was hot and sensual.  Great job as alway.  Can't wait for the next update and I hope that Suzette is on the pill cause I did not read a condom the first in that episode but it's all good...Kyle would be on top of the world =0) if there was a lil Kyle or lil Suzette in the works.  LOL!!!

Author's Response: lol like Kyle said he wanted NOTHING between them =D

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 08:31 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Somebody may be preggers soon. I didn't hear anything about a condom.

I know that woman and her daughter is about to become a pain in Kyle and Suzetta butt. But, more so to Suzetta.

TY for the hot love scene and the update.



Author's Response: lol the Drama will commence soon.~Glad you like it.

Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 08:13 pm

Title: Chapter 5

That was HOT, I think that Kyle and Suzette are my favorites so far, love how they are so somfortable with eachother, and their chemestry is just SMOKIN'

But I hope that Suzette see that this is not a fling and that Kyle wants her heart b/c she already has his, that man is a goner, and IMHO Kyle is just the kinda guy that Suzette needs.



Author's Response: I agree with you but you know what they say you dont know what you have till it gone.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 07:05 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Nice! Thanks for updating!



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing~

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 05:59 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I like that Kyle is a mans man. Comfortable with himself in that role and comfortable with Suzette being a strong personality herself. Man enough to let her be the woman she is. Thats hot!

Author's Response: Im glad you like my chatacters! thank you for the review~

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 05:40 pm

Title: Chapter 5

This chapter was perfect...in length and depth...

The sexiest thing wasn't the actual lovemaking--though it was both hot and tender at the same time...it was the build-up and foreplay...I absolutely hearted the early morning cuddling on the couch...then horse-back ride was so sweet and sexy, too...then the way Kyle controlled himself and slowly yet reverently worshipped her body with those sexy little kisses to make their first time so special for the both of them...he not only made love to her body...but I think he might have succeeded in making love to her heart and soul, too...

Kyle's taking Suzette by storm...he's getting her out of her comfort zone...and slowly sapping her will to leave him...can't wait to read what happens next after the loving (though I wouldn't be adverse to more, winky, wink, lol)...

Great update...definitely a 10 star chappy...Kyle and Suzette are quickly becoming one of favorite couples ever!!!



Author's Response:

Oh thankies, Im glad you saw that I tried to make it about the build up, it was hard.  Thank you for the great Reviews~

Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 04:17 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Kyle sure rung Suzette's doorbell. If she thinks this gonna be a casual fling, she's in trouble. Kyle is determine to win his lady.

I can barely wait for the next update. This story is so HOT.



Author's Response: lol Thank you for the review, Glad you liked this chapter~

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 03:30 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Hot update. Those to are sizzling together. Look forward to reading more of this story.

Author's Response:

woot, thank you for the review~

Reviewer: paw00 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 03:27 pm

Title: Chapter 5

That was a very hawt update.  They seem to be real good together.  The horse ride read very sexy as hell...wow.  Thanks



Author's Response: lol it was a very easy chapter to write. Thank you for the review~

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 11:50 am

Title: Chapter 5

KYLE IS SUCH A CARING MAN WOW IT WAS AN LOVELY CHAPTER, I CANT WAIT FOR MORE. FOREVER A FAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Glad you like it. thank you for the review~

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 09:46 am

Title: Chapter 4

Dang those two together are hot. I hope we get to meet Suzette's and kyle's families. I would like to see there reaction to love between them. keep it coming.

Author's Response: I think that is possible I would like to see how their families come together.

Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 04:34 am

Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response: thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/06/09 12:42 pm

Title: Chapter 4

"He gave her his full undivided attention, laughing as she told him about the time she was caught passing notes in church and her mother made her read it out loud to the congregation." 

I think NOT!!!! The whole church?!? I would have been mortified!



Author's Response: lol Yeah same here but I did have a similar experiance in high school o.O

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/06/09 04:15 am

Title: Chapter 4

Great update Sade(one of my favorite singers BTW) but it was too short, Kyle and Suzette's chemestry is way off the charts, its like fate put them together for a reason. I can feel the heat between the two of them, that kiss was HOT so I know those two are only going to get HOTTER and I can't wait.... btw I'm glad you used Mo'Nique as Suzette, its nice to see Full Figured woman as sexy leads.



Author's Response:

Im glad you like my character choice, I was worried people wouldnt like it.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/06/09 12:36 am

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