Hi-hi! I'm enjoying this story so far. Leah and her bad habit of stealing, I get it. Owen's reaction, I don't get that so much. He's quick as a switch, that one. I wonder how Leah came to be homeless, how both of her parents came to be dead, and why no one took her in. But I don't doubt that I'll get my answers soon-ish enough. And now I shall continue on.
Oh, wait, I had a question! "When he spotted the older Henderson, Owen sighed in relief." Should that have been Greenburg? I don't know, that just popped out at me. Anyway, I am off to the Next chapter. See ya there.
Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed
[Report This]Date: 11/08/10 07:30 am
Really nice start! Owen sure does have a temper and I'm sure we will be seeing more of this, should his dad let Leah go.
Reviewer: Kassie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/05/09 08:33 pm
Great first chapter. Owen sure does have a temper. Keep it coming.
Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed [Report This]Date: 31/05/09 07:08 pm
Nice start!!
I take it we'll see more of Owen's quick temper in the next chapter as somehow he isn't going to agree with his father letting Leah go, as I guess he's inclined to do. Poor girl.
Update soon.
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 31/05/09 07:05 pm
I like the beginning. Dad is going to help her out. Owen isn't going to be happy.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/05/09 05:39 pm
Great start to the story. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 31/05/09 12:40 pm