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Title: A Spark to Pierce the Dark

Wow, this was fantastic! You captured the voices of the different characters so well. I haven’t seen Dr Who for a while, this was so cool to read. One of the first Dr who fics that I really enjoyed. Great one shot piece, really enjoyable!

P.S Is it wrong that I found the master’s part kinda sexy? That’s shameful, I know, and I’m not a sadist (really, I’m not!) but I enjoyed that piece. Has the potential to developed into something, I reckon.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! And it's not wrong at all to find the Master sexy, I think I ship him with Martha harder than anyone. :)

Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/09 10:02 am

Title: A Spark to Pierce the Dark

Token this was beyond awesome! Your prose flowed like poetry.  The first episode Martha and Ten met is one of my favorites and I quite liked how you wrote his reaction and thoughts to the kiss.  So definitive of The Doctor's character.  This was just altogether lovely and I hope you write more Martha fics! Great Job! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much idjunkie! I loved Smith and Jones too, I smile everytime I watch that episode. :)

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Date: 14/06/09 07:46 pm

Title: A Spark to Pierce the Dark

I like this. I have never seen the show, only in a clip or two off YouTube.

Here's why I like...I am a lyrical whore. The beats flow like an opera...build, build, build, build, and then a crash. It's like a well crafted preview that introduces these characters to some presents to others.

I can hear music playing while the images appear. Goodness! Pure goodness!

Like an...orgasm?

Author's Response: Thank you for reading Spark! I'm glad you enjoyed this, especially the form of the story. I love playing around with how I write fics sometimes. :)

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Date: 07/06/09 07:47 pm

Title: A Spark to Pierce the Dark

Martha, a woman with options.. LOL - you gotta love option option. I really enjoyed this story.. but I have to tell you.. My heart belongs with Martha and Jack.. (more Jack and Martha please) but in the end, I think she will always belong to only one.. Great Job.

Author's Response: :D Thank you so much Zeta! I think I can find a way to write more Jack and Martha. I kind of love them too. ;)

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Date: 05/06/09 08:59 pm

Title: A Spark to Pierce the Dark

Very interesting...I have to say this Master guy is very intriguing.  Thanks

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Date: 04/06/09 02:30 pm

Title: A Spark to Pierce the Dark

A lovely story that leaves me...wondering. Martha is definitely an amazing heroine! I could go on and on about her story-arc but that's for another place.

Your interest in the Master and Martha is quite fascinating. Not sure what I think on it...or maybe I'm afraid to think about it? Hm.

Martha and the Doctor--it is what it is. (I personally think he isn't good enough for her).

It seems you're not convinced in the strength of a Martha-Tom relationship either. Who then is her true equal and mate?



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading islandlass! To be honest, I'm not sure I truly ship any of these guys with her over the other, though I love them all in their own ways. But I always felt that Martha's true love was time traveling and finding new worlds. Or maybe that's my wishful thinking, I'm not sure. :) It's cheesy I know.

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Date: 04/06/09 11:09 am

Title: A Spark to Pierce the Dark

That was beautiful and bittersweet.  Kind of like Martha's story with The Doctor.  I'm a big fan of Dr. Jones too, so I had to commend you for this fic!  Love it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love Martha too. I'm so happy you enjoyed this!

Reviewer: dustdaughter Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/06/09 06:26 am

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