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Title: Chapter 10

I LOVE this story. I think it is the best of the series.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing Minerva. I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/03/11 02:48 am

Title: Chapter 10

Thank you for a wonderful story. I loved that they got married in the same place that they met all those years before!!

Author's Response: Oh could there be any other place? They found something really profound in each other-- Pat got the validation her self-esteem needed, that she was indeed desirable for her athleticism and intelligence. And John realized he needed to step out of Tony's shadow and become his own man...Pat influenced. Love these two!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/08/09 07:16 am

Title: Chapter 10

That was a great story, I loved how John and Pats love lasted all of these yrs, even when forces drove them apart.

I hope to see more of the Santi Clan.



Author's Response: They are indeed the couple who have stood the test of time! All the changes that have occurred in their lives notwithstanding the losses--they had the real deal love. Santi's have grown immensely...many of the names that were introduced here and in Baby of Mine will take faces...I have set the stage and added a few more chairs. As the newer stories come, many of them will be fully introduced. Jonathan-Peyton-Greg-Heyden will take their turn at bat. I have chosen not develop Joel, so he will make an appearance here and there to stir the pot a tinsey bit...but he's basically shelved. I have the prototypes to at least three spins. When my plate clears over the next few weeks I'm going to throw them in the fire and let you guys test them! Thanks again for reading. I've enjoyed reading the comments and the suggestions. ;-)

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/07/09 11:15 pm

Title: Chapter 10

That was beautiful. I love these two and I'm happy that they're back together. Even time couldn't destroy their love for each other!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. John and Pat are love!!! So happy you love them! ;-) I guess time was held in a bottle for these two!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/07/09 08:21 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Thanks for the read.  It was great to see their story.  See the kids hit it off and take their rightful places with their father.

True love last a long time.

 Nice!



Author's Response: Thanks! Yes indeed they deserved. John snatched her up quick! :) And of course Brian and Nicole doing their thing! I cannot believe how this family has grown so much on me.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/07/09 08:06 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Thank for the beautiful ending to this great story.

Author's Response: You are most welcomed! I'm glad you enjoyed. ;)

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/07/09 05:23 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Finally they are getting divorced. I did feel bad for Beth because she was caught up in that witch's schemes...now almost 30 years later the truth is finally out. Vanessa had a lot of nerve fro blaming Marla for her down fall and that of her co conspirator in this farce that she created. What will John say when he finds out how she lied about having sex with him and why didn't he ever realized that she lied? He can't sit on the side lines and blame it all on Vanessa because he has been acting like his head has been in the clouds since his friend died in the Vietnam war.

Glad that Marla kicked the ish out of Vanessa.

Vanessa is down now but she ain't out yet, I am sure that conniving heifer has something up her sleeve...what will she come up with some terminal disease to keep John with her?

I am not feeling Peyton and Jonathan although I know that is the way that this story will play out.

Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response: Jonathan and Peyton--I'm going to toss them into a huge plot eventually and test them. I still haven't decided who is going where with whom. Now that I've added some chairs to this party...I have been thinking...thinking...and thinking. But I'll keep all of you guys posted here and on TST! Thanks for all of your support with the stories!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/07/09 04:44 am

Title: Chapter 9

Thank goodness he's leaving that crazy skank! He is a very caring man. I say that becuase he's giving her alimony because he wants to. She would be broke if I had anything to do with it.

Author's Response: She is after all the mother of two of children. And she's not poor by any stretch. Wait til she finds out Marla/Rudy are FWBs...she'll naturally go for the juggler of that possibility. Not here though--in the next stories of the Series! Hang tough!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/07/09 03:50 am

Title: Chapter 9

I'm so glad John is getting rid of Vanessa.  Hope Brett gets rid of Elizabeth.  That's mean huh?  Oh well!  I love this story.

Author's Response: Me too! She doesn't deserve him...never did. I'm glad you've enjoyed it thus far. I didn't want to clutter up J/P lovestory with all with Brett/Beth's firestorm. Truth--a revisitation of this arc is on the way! It's an excellent place to spin! Hang tight!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/07/09 12:24 am

Title: Chapter 8

This is a great chapter.  Vanessa and Elizabeth has some splainin' to do.  Can't wait to see how they worm their way out of this one.

Author's Response: Yes they do. And poor Brett will finally get the eye opener John has been wanting for his old friend.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/07/09 11:02 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter.... not only did Vanessa and Elizabeth eat Crow, but Vanessa got yet another BeatDown, Marla is a Riot..... Elizabeth has some serious begging to do, but I have a feeling that her marriage maybe OVER.

If Peyton wants to be with Johnathan then she needs to let go of "the past" sign the divorce papers and move on, b/c I have a feeling that Joel already has.

OK its now time for John and Pat to get back what they had b4 Vanessa Stole it from them.



Author's Response: Marla's a sheroe! Elizabeth has some work to do. This one may not convey the sreious trouble she has put her marriage into, but the details are coming...not here, but it'll be in a spin-off. Let's just say that Brett is going to be taking some serious time to revisit some decisions he's made in the last 25 years. He's been a faithful man... Peyton is tossed now. She assumed the best decision she ever made was snaring Joel. He'll be in the next story for a visit. But for future reference, I'll have to agree. Jonathan cares for her and may not wait for her to finish thinking, rethinking, and then thinking some more! Chapter 10 is all J/P!

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/07/09 10:01 pm

Title: Chapter 8

I just thought about something, is Brian really John's son. Vanessa did sleep with another guy. This is going to be good. I hope Elizabeth gets it too. She is not innocent at all in this. To Lizabeth, becoming a part of "high society" on campus was worth destroying a loving couple.

Author's Response:

Hmm...

Vanessa did sleep with the other guy...indeed!  So what you trying to insinuate Sweet Pea??? HUH? HUH? That my boy Brian is a lovechild to Rudy??? 

Elizabeth's best punishment is being on extension from her husband.  He truly worshipped her.   She took the worse way out IMO to getting to the 'in crowd'--losing her soul.  Dumbass!  Now all of these years...it'd serve her right if Brett bounced.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/07/09 05:05 am

Title: The MUSIC

How could u leave us hanging like that. Just when Vanessa & Elizabeth have 2 out themselves.

Author's Response: LOL! I'm sorry. I didn't mean to. I hope you enjoyed the conclusion.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/07/09 01:31 am

Title: Chapter 8

Oh this is so great the way thatit is coming out about the way that Vanessa and her henchmen did to keep Pat and John from each other.  Oh I am waiting for Brett's wife to swallow her tongue.  What will Brett's reation be to his wife role in this mess?  Thanks



Author's Response:

Hi Divisionred...

It's time to pay the piper.  The conclusion... 

 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/07/09 01:09 am

Title: Chapter 8

Marla is going to out both of them at the dinner table. Poor Brett he has no idea!! I like Marla!!

Author's Response: Yes...don't you love Marla...and new John is awesome!  Brett has been so clueless.  He's going to be in shock when he hears it. 

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/09 10:28 pm

Title: Chapter 8

You are funny and so is Marla.

Caught, Vanessa is a ......... words aren't nice to say about her.

Great update.



Author's Response:

LOL...thanks Moni-love.   Yes Vanessa is buttered, the skillet is hot... 

Glad you enjoyed...stick around for the continuation...it's a doozy!

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/09 09:34 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Oh that was not right at all, leaving us hanging like that.... I like Marla, she doesn't hold her tounge for no one, and she knew that Vanessa didn't love John not one bit.

I so can't wait for Vanessa and Elizabeth to eat crow.



Author's Response: Oh Lady Liberty!!! It's an OCD thingy you know that...Marla is a cool gal.  She's flows with everybody.  And she's in your face when she needs to be.   She's a friend you can depend on.  Crow will be served up in Chapter 9...enjoy!  :-)

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/09 07:33 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Ok, thanks for this chapter.  I was having a little bit of a problem reconciling Jonathon's behavior between reading this and Baby of Mine.  I'm glad to know the source of his anger and bad boy ways and the turn around in the other story that never quite made sense to me.

Author's Response:

Thank you dear heart!  Love you qualidee3.   This is why I went for the time line in this one--I wanted everyone to see the time of the story.  I didn't do that so much with Baby of Mine because I simply had a tiny group of readers that carried over from the first and they already knew it commence with the last month of Nicole's pregnancy--picking up from the Epilogue of It's All about of You.   I'm sorry about any confusion.   You're good though...glad all of that was cleared up!

Reviewer: qualidee3 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/07/09 02:23 am

Title: Chapter 7

Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response: You are most welcomed...I'm glad you enjoyed.  I'm going to try to get this one finished before the 1st of August.  We'll see how that goes!   :-)

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/07/09 04:12 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Good update, and thanks for the explanation. It's nice to know that Jonathon wasn't being a random butthole. And I can't wait for Vanessa to get hers.

Author's Response: Hi Ketaj316, haven't seen you in a bit!  How U Doin'?  Thanks for reading.   No Benny wasn't being a random wizway.  Judgement cometh...

Reviewer: Ketaj1316 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/07/09 06:34 am

Title: Chapter 7

Wonderful update.  Glad the siblings are getting along.

Jonathan should have known better to listen to crazy Vanessa.



Author's Response:

He couldn't help it...he's still so much like that little boy he once was...and Vanessa holds a lot of cards...and this dad/sibling thing is still new.  John hadn't introduced them yet so there's merit to his mad moment.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/07/09 05:22 am

Title: Chapter 7

People hated Jonathan?!? I thought he was a jerk, but I could understand where he was coming from. His situation is actually a hard one to deal with, and turns some people cold.

Author's Response:

Yes...can you believe that Sweet Pea...LOL.  He was full of jerk...lmao!

It was definitely expected and I know everyone favored the couple...pulling for them and the babies and all...and I knew folks would want to carve him like a melon.  But it was hard...thanks for that SP, you feel me.  He needed a source to lay his pain and grief.  He's been without his father and only has to look at the woman who caused that absence and tell him that he was a mistake...ew!  

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/07/09 03:25 am

Title: Chapter 7

I'm happy that Jonathan is going to work towards a realationship with his brother and sister. Love how his parents visit went and the sweet kiss they shared. Vanessa is an awful human being, hasn't she caused enough pain for them.

Author's Response:

Hi there bayoumomma!

I am too...really I am.  I never wanted a delay with the reunion, but I wanted to keep it real.  There was some precipitating events and of course a little trepidation on Jonathan's part and Pat's fear of revised old edition...but I want this.  The three people who he shares DNA with need to be lathered in love with each other...I'm pulling for that...definitely!

Vanessa is just so stank...it's fun writing that hoe...but she'll take a break and do some thinking about herself.  You'll see!  And that heifer cares only for herself and Brian, really.  She loves Heyden...but she'd eat her if she had to choose Brian or Heyden. 

 

 

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/07/09 01:30 am

Title: Chapter 7

Great update.  I haven't read Baby of Mine but I will now.

Author's Response: Thanks Jujubee50 for reading...glad you liked. Baby of Mine is done now and it's a doozy!  Kind of long though...don't be afraid to tell me what you think! Enjoy!  :-)

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/07/09 09:51 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Glad Pat gave Vanessa the beat down she so deserved.  It's great John and Jonathan have finally met.  Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Woo yeah!  Long overdo.  Everyone falling for that big hair, big smile, big dimples, and big ole butt!  LMAO!  It's indeed good for John and Jonathan...and I'm going to make sure they get lots of bonding time together throughout this series too.  I love big family stuff...holiday's etc.  It's a great deal to me!  Stay tuned more to come...on this one and in the very near future.  I hope to put out about three stories by the end of the year! :-)

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/07/09 05:52 am

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