The father/son meeting went better than I thought. Vanessa is fucking crazy!!! She gave up her virginity to try to spite another girl, who didn't show up anyway. This is just craziness!!!
Author's Response: Jonathan has been like romancing this entire reunion. He's not an asshole despite how he's perceived. He's just in a funk slightly...but he realizes where his energies should lay. Yes...is that a bitch move or what? That damn Vanessa...cuckoo! Needs hospitalization...seriously!
[Report This]Date: 22/07/09 05:47 am
Wonderful update.
Author's Response: Thanks Moni...muah!
[Report This]Date: 22/07/09 05:10 am
When Pat visited John in the hospital, did he ever know she was there. I really don't want him back with that crazy Vanessa.
Author's Response: Not initially. He was in a coma. And then the subsequent visits he gradually recognized her. He and Van are over...and it's going to be some blow out...too!
[Report This]Date: 11/07/09 06:39 am
I liked the fact that Pat had the opportunity to mess Vanessa up. Can't believe that she lied to John. How did she pull off not being a virgin when they got married? Thanks
Author's Response: Oh yeah! Couldn't let it slide, though I wanted to keep it real and so like Pat to be remorseful following. She's really not that heifer Van is is. She revenge sex with Rudy...he popped her cherry. LOL! :-)
[Report This]Date: 11/07/09 04:44 am
Enjoyed the updates!! I'm glad Jonathan will finally meet his dad.
Author's Response: Yep...Thanks for reading. :-)
[Report This]Date: 11/07/09 01:42 am
This story is coming along nice.
Author's Response: Thank's yummy954...that was sweet! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 10/07/09 09:16 pm
Vanessa and Elizabeth make me sick.... Liz for not having a SPINE and standing up to Vanessa all those yrs ago, and Vanessa for being the selfish shrew that she is, IMO she never loved John the way she claimed, he fit into her "perfect life"
I do kinda wish that Pat and Jessy gave them a beatdown.
Author's Response: They are yuck! Elizabeth has bred a worse bitch than she could ever be. She aimed for what she thought was gold. Van is a complicated woman. She was more infatuated IMO with John than love. She may have grown to love him, but her obsession and mental health trumps any and all respectable desires she may have had for him. Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 05/07/09 03:50 am
I just finished reading your story. I love it! Vanessa needs that ass whooping stat as well as Pat. Looks like their happy homes are about to unravel right in front of their faces when everyone finds out what they did.
Author's Response: Oh...I think you mean Elizabeth right? The beat down will come from a very unlikely source! It's a coming!
[Report This]Date: 04/07/09 04:14 am
"Pat had one wish for her son, that he'd be someone she and his late father would be proud of." To late for that because he is a devil in disguise...sorry Pat, your assessment was correct you all didn't give him what he needed which was not to be an ass. Sorry!!!
Glad that Pat put 2 and 2 together to realize that Vanessa had an accomplice in her scheme. Thank goodness for good friends who are willing beat down your enemies with you.
Thanks for a great update.
Happy 4th of July
Author's Response: LOL...Pat and the gang did spoil baby J. But wait til you see how he responds to them...awesome. The scene is coming too! Pat is a smart gal and she's lived with a lot of regrets bridled in fear and some of that isn't her fault. She was a young girl when she became pregnant. Hope you had a great holiday! :-)
[Report This]Date: 04/07/09 02:51 am
Oh, I am waiting for the beatdown that's waiting for Vanessa and Elizabeth, and I hope it's ghetto style. Hope John makes it to meet his son. Great update!
Author's Response: In Baby of Mine, John has met his son (in speech) but there has been no visible interaction with them yet (to the reader). I pre-empted that because it deserved it owns story and then the story of how they came to be needed it's story (Denied). So all shall be revealed and will wrap up by the end of next month.
[Report This]Date: 04/07/09 12:49 am
Did Vanessa call her a porch monkey?!? I wanted to bitch slap her before, but now I'm like Jessy. Let's beat the hoe down.
I hoping that John pulls through. It's sad that they finally reunite just to say goodbye.
Author's Response: Yes...Vanessa indeed is a core racist. She is the depiction of the Catholic bred racist elite. In Baby of Mine and before Denied wraps you'll see John shine! He's a great guy with a huge heart. You will see where Brian gets all of that from. They love hard, but their ability to commit to something is unwavering. Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/07/09 11:53 pm
Great update.
Author's Response: Thanks Moni for reading. I'm so glad you loved it! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 03/07/09 10:34 pm
This chapter put Elizabeth on my shit list with Vanessa. I can't wait to see these two witches get what's coming to them. These worhtless heifers took almost 30 years away from John, Pat, and little John.
Am I correct in assuming that Pat and John were together through their freshman year of college?
Author's Response: Yeah...they were messy. Pat and John were together through the onset of her sophmore year. Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/06/09 05:04 am
Vanessa makes me so ILL..... she is nothing but a User, she is no friend at all, and I don't know WTH Beth went along with that insane plan to begin with.... Vanessa used Beth's insecurites to get her to do what she wanted.
Karma is going to get Beth, and she is not done with Vanessa.
Author's Response:
Yes...Beth is the epitome of the classic indentured servant...reared to be the worst thing to be fall Civil Rights...the poor underpriveledged white establishment. Her position is this story is very important. She has a heart and has the potential to do right by others, but she focused on her own personal ambition and closed her eyes to the destruction. She's a victim of the class struggle.
Karma cometh.
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 26/06/09 03:17 am
yay, an update! i love curtis and tracey with pat and baby john. that was so sweet, i knew vanessa was a no good ,evil skank from her younger years to now. great update!
Author's Response:
Isn't Curtis the most kewl kat?
Love him and the way he moves! Vanessa is raw evil, but she's going to soften a bit. She doesn't want to be absent from the grandbabies and she's politiking to keep hubby from packing it in! :-)
Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed [Report This]Date: 25/06/09 10:41 pm
This may sound mean, but I hope that he missed this dinner because he's in the hospital. That's probably the ONLY excuse that will work for her.
Author's Response: It's not mean! But yes he suffered a heart attack while enroute to Nicole's mom's house for dinner.
[Report This]Date: 19/06/09 07:16 am
I love where are they now. That was great. And I love John and Pat. I can't wait until her reaction when she finds out he was late meeting her because of the accident and I hope she gets to see him soon. Great update.
Author's Response: Thanks KelleyLi for reading and reviewing. John and Pat are cute. They haven't seen the last of each other.
[Report This]Date: 19/06/09 03:21 am
Loved the update. Seems the chemestry between Pat and John is still there even after all of these yrs.
Vanessa makes me so ILL, keeping John from his son all these yrs and having Pat think that John was dead.
Author's Response: Hi Lady Liberty...yes they still have feelings for each other agter all of this time. And having a child has bonded Pat to John in a way only few could understand. Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 15/06/09 07:53 pm
I loved the update. I so want Vanessa to pay for taking john away from pat and his son. those times are precious and he cant ever get them back, while he wsa stuck with her all while in the back of his mind, pat was there as she was in his heart.
Author's Response: It is sad. Such a tragedy that they weren't able to share their love with each other and raise their son together. Vanessa needs to pay for her deed--I AGREE!
[Report This]Date: 13/06/09 09:34 am
I'm confused, why would John go look for Pat after all these years, what made him go look into the P.O.Box after all this time. Why didn't Pat want a explanation as to where he was and why didn't he try to find her? Pat not being angry about John lying to her doesn't sit well with me.
Author's Response: This story is a part of series and in order for these questions to be answered, you have to read the story. It has many chapters. And it all will not be revealed in one chapter.
Thanks for reading.
Date: 13/06/09 05:15 am
This chapter pulled at my heart strings. This poor couple has missed so much time together and it is SO unfair. They will always wonder what could have been.
Author's Response: Hi Sweet Pea, Thanks for reading. Pat and John have lost so much time. It's truly sad under those circumstances.
[Report This]Date: 13/06/09 04:11 am
Sweet! Nice playlist you have here and let me just say that 1, 4, 5 and 12 are my favs. Note: Anything David Ruffin is just the bomb......:P
Author's Response: Awe thanks Vie. I love David too! He was incredible!
[Report This]Date: 11/06/09 04:17 am
Nice beginning
Author's Response: Thanks Jujubee50 for reading. I appreciate your review!
[Report This]Date: 07/06/09 12:57 am
Nice start, Curtis is a mess.
Author's Response: Love Curt. He's raw, bodacius, but such a big heart!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 07/06/09 12:35 am
Thanks for a great update. These boys are so immature there is always one friend that is just crazy. Thanks
Author's Response: LOL. That's why I didn't date in high school...LOL...immature! But what would the memories of school daze be without them...they are the iconic 'crew', the loud festering sore always in the group! Thanks again for the great review!
[Report This]Date: 05/06/09 12:39 pm