this was a very good story it was very intersting to know that the yong girl accpeted that her uncle was really her farther.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, Makya!
Reviewer: makya ross Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 21/03/14 07:33 pm
hi
Author's Response:
Thanks for the greeting!
Reviewer: david Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/02/14 08:28 pm
i loved the plot. unique and captiveting too.good stuff there
Author's Response:
Thanks, Elizabeth. I appreciate that a bunch!
Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/12/13 02:32 pm
This was an awesome story, full of voculary and intent to grap readers attention quickly.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: Reader Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/11/13 02:56 pm
wow. very intersting and invigorating. i thoroughly enjoyed this.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading along, Sarah. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: sarah Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/04/13 12:41 pm
short, sweet and a necessary lesson for some people.
I loved this story having been in a short interacial marriage myself that was broken up when the daddy came and brought his daughter home and put an end to things.
Author's Response:
Thanks for sharing some of your own personal testimony with us, Jim. And thanks for leaving a comment on the story.
Suprina
Reviewer: Jim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/12/12 11:26 am
Author's Response:
Thx for reading along with us!
Suprina
Reviewer: Deborah Lovewine Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/12/12 05:09 am
Good one...
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: Aditi Sharma Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/09/12 08:22 am
sweet and emotional :)
always liked happy endings..
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment, Cinder. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Reviewer: Cinder Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 07/12/11 09:00 am
Mmmmmm.....
Good Story :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: Annoymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/06/11 02:53 pm
That was awesome. It's a good thing that Reeka decided to come clean before Kenny died...I really enjoyed reading it and I totally agree with the moral of the story.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Mizgardenia!
Reviewer: mizgardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 19/05/11 02:50 am
I had my MAC Computer read me this story.
Author's Response:
So cool! Don't cha just LOVE technology? lol
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Shela Geiger Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/04/11 11:57 pm
Wow Suprina, I finished this story with a smile on my face. I enjoyed this immensely and the only lose end that was left was what happened to Kendra. I would have liked to have seen her walk down the aisle on her father's arm, maybe she carried on the family tradition and fell in love with an 'inappropriate' man of her own just like her mother and grandmother.
That was fun.
Author's Response:
Junebug66, I'm glad that you enjoyed this short read so much. It was my pleasure to write it. As for Kendra, maybe I'll revisit her story when I have more free time.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed [Report This]Date: 21/03/11 07:28 am
I love this story it is so interesting.:)Good Job!
Author's Response: Thanks, Chicklee! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the story.
[Report This]Date: 09/02/11 02:30 am
For a short story it is good and narrated inteligently.It could be good material for a complete nvel/
Author's Response: Thanks so much for saying that, Tom! I appreciate your comment!
[Report This]Date: 28/01/11 11:18 am
wowowowow
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Date: 10/01/11 11:51 am
it is a nice story.moreovr written in a simple language.
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment and the comment!
[Report This]Date: 22/12/10 11:04 am
i like this one and the last statement/sentence is very true though the truth hurts it sets u free
Author's Response: So true, Kara! Thanks so much for reading and leaving a comment!
Date: 03/12/10 02:30 am
the story is not something new or unread before...but can go for a quick read..
Author's Response:
Yes, it was definitely meant to be a quick read.
Reviewer: A.M. Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 19/10/10 05:49 pm
mmmmmm
Author's Response: lol. Thanks for the feedback.
Date: 26/08/10 01:00 pm
I READ THIS STORY A WHILE BACK. IS THERE A POSSIBILY OF MAKING THIS STORY A LONGER. i REALLY WANT TO KNOW MORE ABOUT THESE CHARACTERS.
Author's Response:
I would LOVE to extend this tale...just don't have the time right now with my busy schedule. Maybe sometime this fall. Shrugs. We'll see.
Thanks for enjoying this story enough to make such a wonderful request.
Suprina
Reviewer: juno Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/06/10 12:44 am
Wow short and powerful. I loved this.
Author's Response: Thanks, Junebug66! I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much.
[Report This]Date: 24/05/10 10:02 pm
This is really good. It is written well.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Flicker and Sparkle. :)
Date: 31/12/09 01:13 am
good story!
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Author's Response: Thanks for reading along with me. I'll try to get back over here to post during the holidays...bearing no unforeseen circumstances. Reviewer: brookmeade Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/10/09 08:40 am
Great morality story.
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 01/08/09 10:57 pm