This was so cute; I love that little girl she is so cute and precocious LOL. Thanks for sharing
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I totally appreciate it. And... those little girls are based on my nieces. Believe me when I tell you that precocious is only the beginning. :D
Date: 06/06/10 04:38 am
Yeah, I think this is officially one of my favorite stories on the site. It made me laugh out loud and I'm dead tired from work today, I enjoyed it that much :D
I know this will never happen but I'm going to say it anway. I love Leeah and want to see her again. Older and still king of the jungle :D She was fantastic, as was this story.
Just really lovely work.
Author's Response:
Yay! I'm really glad you like it.
Ah yea, I've been thinking about another story for these characters since I put this one up and... nothing. Maybe though... one of these days. ;)
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed
[Report This]Date: 16/12/09 04:38 am
lol that girl is a silly girl lion no wait tiger lol to cute.
Author's Response: hahaha, I'm glad you liked her.
Date: 01/08/09 05:58 am
Okay, first off, thank you so much for sharing this story on the site, your writing is fantastic. And this made me get a little teary, I must admit. I've had similar experiecnes with my sisters growing up. Leeah was just a sweetheart, and made me smile through this entire story. God, she's going to be something when she gets older. :)
Author's Response: I got teary too! Aw thanks, I really appreciate the compliments. I don't have a sister so I love how sweet they can be to each other (if they want).
[Report This]Date: 05/07/09 08:49 am
This seems like an interesting story but I'm abit confused as to what this story is about. Is it a shape shifter story or just the imagination of a child? What is being a lion or tiger referring to? Maybe I'm thinking too much. Hopefully the upcoming chapters will clarify things for me.
Author's Response: sorry that you're confused! there aren't any more chapters, it's was a one-off short story. it's Leeah's imagination, she imagines that she's a lion and a tiger when she plays by herself.
Date: 03/07/09 06:28 am
Oh this story was too cute and sweet. I love that it was about a average child everyday life. Thanks for writing thhis. :)
Author's Response: thanks!
[Report This]Date: 03/07/09 12:19 am
that was wonderful! you are really talented, thank you for sharing with us!!
Author's Response: thanks that's really sweet (blushing)
[Report This]Date: 02/07/09 06:36 am
That was so cute. I think it is a awesome short story for adults and kids to read!!! Sometimes, it's the simple things in life that are the most entertaining and exciting.
Author's Response: good, that was the plan. thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 02/07/09 04:50 am
Thanks for the cute story.
Author's Response: i'm glad you liked it...
[Report This]Date: 02/07/09 04:16 am
that was sweet and cute!
Author's Response: thanks...!
[Report This]Date: 02/07/09 03:17 am
Wow, this was beautiful! Such a sweet story, very nostalgic.
I love Leah. I was probably quite an opposite to her, very quiet but dreamy and into books and playing by myself. But I was very much in my own imagination as well, like Sierra, so I could easily relate to her.
I miss that, at times. Children can imagine and have so much fun, you captured that wonderful innocence of children so well. I love the contrast of adults in this too, and the way they're seen from a child's point of view.
This is a wonderful first story and I hope you write more stories too, this was fantastic!
Author's Response: aw thanks! I was completely not like Leeah. I've always loved kids who are just bursting with life and have a really active imagination. It's so heartwarming. Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/09 03:15 am
Ok I have to admit I don't read enough family fiction ..shame on me!! But I am so glad I read this..it was sweet and ubber cute and reminded so much of my two nieces..one older and more serious ..the ounger very playful and creative...this was so sweet ...I really enjoyed it..I hope you write more!!great job!
Author's Response: thanks so much i really appreciate it! and the story's about my nieces. i love their whole sister dynamic so i just had to write about it.
[Report This]Date: 02/07/09 03:00 am