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Title: Eight

excelent......

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/02/11 03:30 am

Title: Four

Love the story, Abe should be called "Old dry Ball". He is so boring and a wimp.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/02/11 03:13 am

Title: Eight

WOW! Like many, I've never thought of these two together, but with your writing skill the pairing really works! You've made Philip more mature and hot! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/03/10 07:15 pm

Title: Eight

Philip!!!

I watched DOOL back in the day and he was always my favorite character. I've also always dislikes Lexi with Abe so this was completely my dream fic. Hot, Abe's gone, Lexi/Philip and awesome.

Reviewer: LadyofSpring Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 10:54 pm

Title: Eight

Writers of this stupid stupid show, take heed. THIS is how you write. God, I haven’t seen Days of Our Lives since 2004/2005 after Jensen Ackles left. I would love to see this get made into an episode, not the shit they spill out. My grandma used to watch Days since before I was born and even she has stopped watching this mess. To walk away from something that you were a fan of for 20 years says something else.

 

This was really good! I would have never considered these two to be a pair but goddamn it was sexy. Felt bad that her husband died even though I think he’s an old fogey. No doubt in the real show he would come back to life somehow.

 

Anyway, this was fun! EJ made me go eww, but it also made me laugh. I mean yes I think incest sorta happens on that show, what with all the affairs and DNA result swapping the citizens of Salem Falls get upto but he just openly put it out there. Made me LMAO!

 

Again, well done, this was awesome! You gave Days more kudos than it deserves, made it look decent J If someone were to read this and then watch the show, they’d be in for a bit of a shock, I think.



Author's Response: I loved Jensen on Days too. :) I'm not really into the show either, but this fic was kinda fun to write. And the EJ thing just felt like Days to me, and I truly believe those Dimeras inbreed on the regular. They're just soooo strange. :D I'm glad you like the story, I'm kinda working my way to writing another soon. :)

Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/07/09 03:00 am

Title: Eight

A couple I never thought of being together.  And EJ just flipped out there at the end.  I'm glad she got rid of him.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I"m glad you liked the story. Even with EJ's crazy ass. LOLOL

Reviewer: Yh Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/09 07:18 pm

Title: Eight

This is one of my favorite stories from you. I love reading daytime fanfic and you catch it very well.

I would have never thought of putting Lex and Philip together but you made it work perfectly.

I love the EJ twist at the end. He plays badass to the T.:)

Nice job! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Ash! I love daytime fanfic too, I just can't seem to write actual couples for some reason. Maybe I just like to play, I'm not sure. But I'm so glad you enjoyed this, even though it got a bit odd at the end. :) I loved writing crazy E.J.

Thank you so much for the review, it made me smile today.:)

Reviewer: AshAli Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/10/08 12:50 am

Title: Eight

great i loved it

Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: neeneee7 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/10/08 01:28 am

Title: Eight

Great ending.  EJ was so twisted, I loved it. Seriously, this was so Days of Our Lives I think they should hire you.  Sucks that Abe died for the Dimera cause.  That family, that family.  Honestly, Theo doesn't stand a chance.

This was an awesome fic. Take a bow, you did a fantastic job.



Author's Response: Thanks Black. E.J. was crazy which is how I like him. Abe got the shaft, and Theo is destined for....weirdness. He's gonna have a complex for sure. :)

Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/08 07:00 am

Title: Eight

Noooooo, it can't be over!!! Lexie and Phillip are so freaking hot together.  I do hope you plan to write about them again.

Author's Response:

Hey Robin,

Yep, this one's over, but they could show up in another fic. Rolling around some ideas in my head. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing the story. :)

Reviewer: Robin Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/08 06:14 am

Title: Eight

OMG. EJ was into incest! EJ was not well. So Lexie and Phillip decided to keep it casual and embrace her Dimera. Great story and I did nto expect that ending.

Author's Response:

Thanks anouk!

Yep, it's casual and very DiMera like, which is good for Lexie I think. And E.J. was damn gross, but he's swimming with the fishes, so all is well. :)

Thanks so much for reading and the review!

Reviewer: anouk Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/09/08 04:04 am

Title: Eight

Wow what an ending, I never saw that coming, I'm kinda sad that Lexie is keeping her and Phillip a secret, but hey thata a DiMera for ya, and EJ is a total PERV.

Again Token well done.



Author's Response:

Ha, he is such a perv. Writing that last scene was fun as hell, I swear I was smiling the whole time. Lexie and Phil may keep the secret, but they're cool with it ,which is kind of a happy ending for them in a way. And she is full on DiMera now, which is nice. :)

Thanks so much for reading Lady Liberty :)

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/09/08 08:20 pm

Title: Eight

Twisted or not a great read!

More please!



Author's Response: Thanks Hopieland!  I will definately think about writing them again, I'm so glad you enjoyed this little twisted fic of mine. :)

Reviewer: Hopieland Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/09/08 08:18 pm

Title: Eight

That was crazy! No wonder the DiMera's are loony...inbreeding! LOL

TBG, it was awesome as usual and I thoroughly enjoyed myself.



Author's Response:

LOL, yep. They're all nasty and gross. Which of course means I want to write them again. :)

Thanks so much for reading lovembooth, I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. :)

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/09/08 07:51 pm

Title: Eight

This was awesome.  I like the surprise twist, pretty sick and kinky.  What's up with EJ doesn't he know incest went out with the royal family?  I love the way you ended it, though a sequel would be nice.  I really would love to see what happens with Lexie and Phillip, would also like to see Lucas in a story, I really liked the character even though he wasn't in the story that much.  Well done as always TBG I really really liked it. . .despite the fact that the leg never came off.

Author's Response:

Thanks greatodin! Sick and kinky works, EJ was all those things and more really. DiMeras just screem inbreeding, they've all gone nuts at some point on the show. I won't rule out a sequel, though it would probably be with Lucas instead of Philip. So you may get your wish:)

And I promise to take the leg off in the next one. Just for you. :)

Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/09/08 07:28 pm

Title: Eight

OMG, Token!

I cannot believe EJ tried to mack on Lexie.  I can so easily see him doing something like that and trying to justify it.

Philip and Lexie are just hot together and I love the way you ended it and how you had Lexie finally take charge of her life.  Can't wait for the next fic.  LOL! Baby!

~Jeanine~

Reviewer: pru Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/09/08 07:20 pm

Title: Eight

OMG, Token!

I cannot believe EJ tried to mack on Lexie.  I can so easily see him doing something like that and trying to justify it.

Philip and Lexie are just hot together and I love the way you ended it and how you had Lexie finally take charge of her life.  Can't wait for the next fic.  LOL! Baby!

~Jeanine~



Author's Response:

LOL, he was pretty sick there wasn't he? I just always got an odd vibe from that character, he was interesting for a while, but creepy too.

Glad you liked the ending. Phil and Lexie weren't exactly fairy tale material, but they did like sexing each other and I wanted to give them the happy ending they deserved.:) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this story Pru. :)

Reviewer: pru Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/09/08 06:51 pm

Title: Eight

The DiMera Line must be preserved, can’t be muddied by some bloody Brady whore.

Traces of 'house of usher', eh? Oooh, twisted indeed. Those type storylines are weird, but I like them. 

Thank you for this fic; you've almost got me interested in watching Days again, but I'm usually at work so...don't know how that'd work out LOL I thoroughly enjoyed this piece: the drama AND the naughty, oh God, the naughty! Thanks chica!



Author's Response:

Heh, the house of DiMera is one sick assed place.

Thank you for reading this MZ. My feelings are kinda mixed about Days right now, they have a lot of my favorite characters back on, but it doesn't feel like they're doing much with them. But I may take a peek again, if for nothing else, to get more fanfic ideas.:)

Very happy you liked my naughty.:)

Reviewer: madame z Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/09/08 06:29 pm

Title: Eight

I had no idea we were coming up on the end. I liked that Lexie finally came to realize who she was. I also liked that she and Phillip still remain a secret because once the relationship was out in the open there'd be a lot of problems.

I did't see the EJ twist coming, but it's not a stretch to imagine the DiMeras would be obsessed with blood purity. I so want a Flowers in the Attic/V.C. Andrews fic involving the DiMeras now.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I did sort of end this pretty quickly. At first I thought it might be two chapters, but then realized I should just rip the bandaid off, and just go for it. I wanted Lexie to basically becoming the head DiMera in town, that's what I was getting at with that ending anyway. And I didn't really see a reason for Phil and Lex to tell people about them, it wasn't anyone's buisness really, and you know how those Bradys can be. :)

You're so right about the blood purity thing, and the Flowers idea is awesome. God, I loved that book. :)

Reviewer: luckybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/09/08 06:23 pm

Title: Eight

Oh god i hate to see this story go, but It was a great ride.  Thanks for writing this wonderful story Token!!!

Author's Response:

Hey rhonda!

I'll miss this one too, though it actually ended up about three chapters longer than I expected. Who knew smut could get so lengthy? :)

Thanks so much for reading rhonda, I'm really glad you liked this one.

Reviewer: rhondanicole18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/09/08 01:59 pm

Title: Eight

Excellent - Awesome. I so didn't see EJ as the twist coming. I was sole on Phillip. Nice creepy build-up. love the ploy of the "CRUSH"

“It’s a long held tradition in our family.” E.J. said, and her eyes crashed back to his. “It’s what keeps us who we are, what we’re meant to be.”

“And beside...” he said, softly. “I’ve always fancied you Alexandria.” His eyes drifted down to her lips. “One could call it a—little crush, if you will.’

Again, excellent, nothing predictable.. you freaking rock. Be easy on your blue, let your blue stay awhile, you guys can be a great team at times.. Nice, smutty, twisty goodness. This was a pleasure to read, a great escape.

This story had all the elements of true fantasy, with a large dose of good, enjoyable, writing - an excellent combination and recipe for awesome fanfiction. Looking forward to more from you.

jump        notworthy

 



Author's Response:

Thanks zeta!

I'm glad you liked the smut, and the twist at the end. I just wanted to try something different I think, and I always liked the oddness of the DiMeras, they're always so obessive about everything. This was just fun though, I loved writing Days, and think I might come back for another go around sometime in the future.

Thanks for reading and the review!

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/09/08 01:30 pm

Title: Seven

Abe is a jackass, granted I don't know the full history but in this story, he's a jackass.  I love Lexie finally embracing her attraction to Philip instead of fighting it, and he got to live out his little doctor stethoscope fantasy which was DAMN hot by the way.  but I still sense there's something just underneath the surface that isn't so good.  And where is Lucas I miss him.

Author's Response:

Yeah, he's a bit of a jerk isn't he? They pretty much had conversations like this on the show all of the time, bugged the hell out me. Glad you like the doctor smut, that was fun to write. And Lucas will probably pop up one more time before the end, just because I like him too. :)

Thanks so much for reading Greatodin!

Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/09/08 09:19 pm

Title: Seven

Whoo!

 You out did yourself on this chapter and I just love Philip and Lexie together.  I knew when she came to him she was going to seduce his very fione ass.

Now that's what I'm talking about.  I just hate how she cowers whenever Abe is around, always trying to judge her like his shit don't stink.

Can't wait for the next chapter.  LOL! Baby!

~Jeanine~



Author's Response:

Thanks Pru!

Glad you liked this one, thought it was time for Lexie to move into a new direction. And that always good for Phil of course. :)

Thanks so much for reading, there's only a few chapters left, and I hope you enjoy the conclusions as well!

Reviewer: pru Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/09/08 04:44 am

Title: Seven

Well, that definitely was an eye opening chapter.  I'm not an Abe fan by any means but he was dead on with what he said to Lexie.  I'm all for getting yours but what kind of mother doesn't answer her phone when she's got a small kid out there somewhere because she's too busy getting her rocks off?

A Dimera apparently.  (And she killed me with that stuff about Sami and EJ-how obnoxious was that?)

It is good that she finally admitted that's what she is and she's never going to be anything else.  I'd be interested to say how hard she fights Abe for Theo, seeing as how she's pretty much thrown all that out the door.  And Phillip---well we know what he's concerned about. 

Little Phillip---who's very, very happy right now.

Great chapter TBG.  As always you rock.



Author's Response:

Um, a bad one?  Lexie's not the greatest mom in the world at all. She's embracing her selfish nature a bit, which is bad for Theo. But good for Philip. Very good for Little Phil.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/08 11:54 pm

Title: Seven

I'm shocked and speechless! Well, not quite speechless. I wasn't expecting Lexie to embrace her heritage. I thought the guilt would keep her hostage...and Philip did too. Pleasantly surprised that Lexie isn't one of the "good girls".

Hot chapter, TBG!



Author's Response:

Yeah, it was time for her to let the whole good girl thing go. I loved Lexie when she was bad on the show and this is basically her going back to her roots in a lot of ways. E.J. will be proud as well.

Thanks for reading lovembooth!

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/08 10:56 pm

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