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Title: Seven

That was incredible! I'm so happy that she's finally let Abe go, and put a real claim on Philip. 



Author's Response:

Hey Sweet Pea, thanks! Letting Abe go was good for both of them I think. And yes, Phlip is offically her lover of choice. On with the sexing!

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/08 06:49 pm

Title: Seven

Just when I think that Phillip/Lexie can get any Hotter, they take me to the edge, OMG, I think I need a cigarette( and I don't smoke)

Abe gets on my last nerve with his "hollier that thou" attitude, he IMO has always wanted a " Leave it to Beaver" wife, they he needs to marry Hope or Kayla.

Phillip is good for Lexie and she is good for him.



Author's Response:

Hey Lady Liberty!

You're right, I think Abe and Lexie just don't really go together, which she realized in this chapter. He's pretty much stuck in Brady land, and Lexie's not, even though she tried to be. And Philip is what she needs, sex she doesn't have to apologize for, and someone who sees her for what she is. And gives her lots of sex. :)

Thanks for reading and the review!

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/09/08 05:02 pm

Title: Seven

This was great! I'm glad Lexie came to her senses and accepted she was a Dimera. However, I don't like that she thinks that the past affairs happened because she was bad. Abe with his puritannical believes probably wasn't paying attentiont to her sexually or emotionally and that's why the affairs happened, I think. (I haven't been watching Days in a long time).

Being a Dimera isn't being bad to me. It's just accepting that you won't settle for being a nun who stays in her place.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks lucky!

Yep, I thought it was time to end the cycle, she's gone back and forth long enough. And yes, Abe did have blame in the collapse of their marraige, though he really couldn't trust her affter all those affairs. That more than anything can destroy a family I think. If I remember correctly, Lexie cheated on Abe when he was impotent one time, and the others I can't remember, but I think they were along similar lines. Basically she wanted sex.

And I love the DiMeras, though they can get batshit crazy. I can't get enough though.:)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: luckybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/08 04:47 pm

Title: Seven

I love this. Again, you have slain me with the sex. Awesome, awesome, awesome. I loved how she came to the realization of mistakes made in her marriage, Abe will never change but I have, I don't want this anymore, I want that sexy young buck who wants nothing more than to make me feel good 24/7. LOL. Awesomeness all around. The dialogue is excellent and on point. I've viewed some 'Days' in my days ;) and I can hear Lexie, I can hear Abe; Philip's new to me, so I can't gauge his voice...still doesn't matter, your characterizations are always on point, thoughtful and authentic in your delivery of them. Thanks for sharing this. And I'm still jealous of Lexie, getting the good dong on the regular! LOL

Author's Response:

Okay, coming from you, that's a big compliment. So glad you liked my smut, and the Abe stuff felt a long time coming. And yeah, Abe's pretty set in his ways, and Lexie realized she is too. Which is why it would never work between them. I'm glad you liked the convo, and my Philip is an older version of the character, he's a bit nicer now than he was, which sucks. I love him mean and snarky.

Thanks for reading MZ! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: madame z Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/08 04:23 pm

Title: Seven

Thank God she dumped Kayla's ass!  She should ofpunch.gif image by zetavalent

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Author's Response:

Me like the smut. The smut is good. But I thought I should throw a bit of plot in along with it. For apearances and everything.

And yeah, the Bradys can suck it.

Thanks for reading zeta!

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/08 02:22 pm

Title: Seven

Very Hot!!!!! I need a cold shower.

Author's Response: Thanks rhonda! Glad you enjoyed this, hope you like the next chapter as well!

Reviewer: rhondanicole18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/08 01:50 pm

Title: Seven

DAMN THAT WAS WHOOOOOOO!!!!!!

Author's Response: LOL, thanks hershey! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/08 08:42 am

Title: Seven

Well Phillip is a freak! He is also very pushy and demanding. What is the significance of each telling the other that they are theirs? Hmmm? Are they going to develop a real relationship or continue to remain exclusive f*** buddies? Although, I know she just had a session with Philip I hope she answers her phone, it could be her child.

Author's Response:

He is an ass, isn't he?  I always found ass Philip more attractive than god guy Philip, I guess that's why I'm writing him this way. He's really not a nice guy, he just wants Lexie. And she wants him, there's really not much more too it then that right now. Well, maybe they understand each other, and she's pretty understanding of his disabilty, but yes. This is full on humping at the moment.

And you're right, it could be her child. Lexie isn't that great a mom, or that great a person really. And instead of fighting that like she's been doing, she's embracing it instead. Not saying that's the right thing to do at all, but hey...that character never was smart about her life choices. I really wasn't interested in not writing her flaws, honestly that's the part of that character I find most interesting.

Thanks for reading anouk!

Reviewer: anouk Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/09/08 07:18 am

Title: Six

Ok, I see the leg is back again.. LOL

They are on a mission, are they not .p/.b/   Hell I need a smoke smoke2.gif image by zetavalent..Now back to the story.. who is Philip on the phone with...   kinky.gif image by zetavalent

 

Did he cause Abe accident?   Philip please don't try to play hero matrix0.gif image by zetavalent ???? inquiring minds want to know.. Great Update! 

 



Author's Response:

The leg is your friend. Don't hate on the leg. :(

Hmm...you ask interesting questions...one's I cannot answer at this time, but still....very interesting...

 

 

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/08 04:37 am

Title: Five

Ok, first, I have to say.. Love the relationship between Lexie  & EJ.. That is exactly whay Lexie needs...

The dress, the penthouse, the key, the SEX.. all very hot, and well done.. Kudos TBG!  Smut at it BEST

Now, the love affair you have going on w/the leg is freaking killing.. LOL



Author's Response: I always liked E.J. and Lexie bonding on the show, and I wanted to write that here as well. Hell, I just wanted to write E.J. and without Sami, so can't take the two of them together. Glad  you are digging the smutty goodness, and yes, I do love the leg. The leg is awesome, just embrace it.

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/09/08 04:30 am

Title: Four

Poor, Poor Daniel.. Never stood a chance w/Lexie.. LOL  Girlfriend had Philip on the mind, on her ass.. on her.. well you know... its about to be so on... great build up..

and Kayla.. please take your uptight ass somewhere.. EJ is freaking HOT..

 



Author's Response:

Daniel's anice guy, but so is Abe. And Lexie's not really in a place for someone like him at the moment, she won't admit that of course.

And I love writing E.J. seriously, had no idea how much fun that would be. :)

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/08 04:26 am

Title: Three

We Damn.. Philip finally got him a taste.. LOL.. I know once they really get a go at it... they will be doing it like rabbits..  

Actually, I'm liking the fact that Lexie is just going for her's ... I mean she was married to Abe for a long, long, long damn time... I know the only place they ever had sex on in the bedroom. I think Lexie was over due for some car action..



Author's Response: Lexie always struck me as a pretty sexual person on the show, the constant cheating for one thing. Philip is the perfect opportunity to get her groove going again, though the guilt is there too of course. What is Lexie without her guilt?

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/09/08 04:23 am

Title: Six

Great update! I like this story and the couple. Philip and Lexie wow! they are really hot together! Looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response:

Thanks Hopieland, I'm glad you like this. I love playing with pairings and Phil/Lex are becoming a favorite. :) Glad you liked this, I hope you like the next one as well.

Reviewer: Hopieland Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/09/08 05:59 pm

Title: Six

Ooh, dayum!

That was just some utter hotness with a side of kickass.  I just LOVE Philip and Lexie and how he told her it wasn't over....and then how Lexie said it was.   Can't wait to shee how Philip changes her mind.  Plus, she can't stay away from Philip to save her life, so it should be interesting.  LOL! Baby!

~Jeanine~



Author's Response:

Hey Pru!

He'll definately try to change it, which means lots of push, pull, yelling back and forth, etc. Can't wait to write it. :) And your right, she's pretty hooked at his point so....

Thanks for reading and for the reveiw!

Reviewer: pru Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/09/08 05:45 am

Title: Six

I need some water after that. Some water and a fan would do nicely. To be f*cked for HOURS? Oh Lexie, I'm so jealous of you. This was absolutely delicious. Philip is...the dude is just, his stamina! I mean, what else can be said right? And the part of the chapter where he anticipated going 'there' with her? Know what I'm talking about? Nearly DIED after reading that, thinking, hoping that it would happen. Lexie most likely wouldn't be able to walk...FOR A WEEK; maybe two if he'd gone 'there'. *sigh* This is so delicious and so sexy; I love it! Update soon!

Author's Response:

LOL...god, a girl can dream, can't she?  I couldn't resist writing that, they both were a bit horny at this point, lot of pent up tension to work out. And as for going there, I have to save stuff for later chapters, right? :)

Thanks for the review MZ!

Reviewer: madame z Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/09/08 03:58 pm

Title: Six

Yea I missed this one.  That was sweet.  Definitely hot, but also really sweet I love the conversation about the leg.  But I wonder what he was on the phone talking about, cause I'm pretty sure it had something to do with her.  Phillip isn't going to let Lexie go back to square one so I'm interested in seeing how he's going to help her overcome her ongoing guilt issues. 



Author's Response:

Hey greatodin,

Glad you liked the leg convo, I was itching to write that for a while now. And your right, Philip isn't going to let her go, which means even more fun conflict for me to write. :)

Thanks so much for reading and the review!

Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/09/08 03:30 am

Title: Six

I swear this story gets hotter and hotter. I want me a Philip!!!!

That darn Abe, how can he have the power to make her feel like crap and they're not even married any more. So what if she wasn't in her hotel room, it's 2008 and most people call your cell phone first and not the landline. I don't even answer mine, unless it's someone trying to be buzzed into my building. 



Author's Response:

I want a Philip too. Does he even exist?

Abe can make her feel like crap, and since they've been married so long it's easy for him. And he's not a young man either, so while you and I may think cell phone, people like my mom always call landlines first. Drives me crazy.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/09/08 11:44 pm

Title: Character Pics

I'm not familiar with the characters in the soap, but god Lord girl, you are something else! This was intense, sensual, and hot as hell. I have to say  I'm not a fan of Abe. I don't like him. I don't like the fact that one parent would deliberately punish another parent by restricting access to the child. Regardless of the fact that he might disagree with her lifestyle or family members. She is still the mother of his son. So right now Abe is on my sh*t list. 

Other than that, and this story is extremely exciting and fun. I guess it's the whole forbidden fruit thing. Your amazing. Your writing skills should be praised. You are a very gifted  writer. You've obviously proven that your versatile when it comes to the different plots and stories you produce in such a short period of time. I fell in love with Bel Canto on the sweetest taboo, you continue to, and I don't want to sound cheesy when I say this but, you continue to blow me away with each new update.  All I can say is, "Thank you, for sharing your gift of story telling."



Author's Response:

Hey Bella!

I'm so, so happy you like this story, and your review just made me smile big time. And your right about the forbidden fruit aspect, that's really fun to write, and kind of exciting too. I'm happy you liked Bel Canto as well (writing the follow up to that right now actually) though I do think I'm crazy sometimes with the amount of stories I have going right now.

Thank you so much for reviewing, and sharing your thoughts with me. It means much more than you know.

Reviewer: Bella Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/09/08 09:42 pm

Title: Six

Oh, Lexie, when it seems like she's ready to take control of her life something happens to make her rethink that decision. I feel for her, but I'm also upset that she easily falls pack into the victim role, always beating up on herself and denying pleasures. Hopefully, she gets some insight and stays resolute in the upcoming chapters.

Author's Response:

You're right, she is pulled in two directions, where she wants to be and where she feels she should be. She's going to struggle a bit in the next few chapters, between those two worlds she's been straddling.

Thanks for reading luckybrans and for the review!

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Date: 02/09/08 05:56 pm

Title: Six

OMG! Is Phillip a succibus? Woah, it's a wonder she can stand up, get dressed, and run out of there. LOL. Even though her session with Phillip was very hot, her priority is with her son. She absolutely had to go over there and take him over while Abe is recuperating. To do anything else would have been irresponsible.  I wonder what Phillip means by it's not over between them. Although Phillip is great in the sack, right now I don't see how a real relationship between them can develop, but I'm sure you'll write it and convince me. LOL. Great job. 

Author's Response:

LOL, hey anouk!

He was pretty enthusatic wasn't he. Making up for lost time perhaps. And your right, she did do the right thing eventually, though Lexie's always had a hard time with that kind of thing. As for a relationship, well...we'll see, I think you'll find the ending a bit interesting on that front. I hope you do at least.

Thanks so much for reading and for the reviews!

Reviewer: anouk Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/09/08 05:22 pm

Title: Six

No it's not Lexie! Ha!

Okay, very hot chapter.  Phillip is a machine and Lexie better check to see if all her parts are still workin'.  Loved the moment about his leg, her being the only one he showed it to.  Seriously I hate Belle and she does seem like the type to cringe at anything "weird".  Yet I can't argue with Lexie's sudden realization she was falling into the same pattern.  It really is time for her to grow up a little and cool it with twenty-something screwathons. 

But only after the story is over though. 

Nice Chapter Madame.



Author's Response:

That was years of repressed sexual tension driving Philip's performance, he was excited okay? Belle may be one of my least favorite people on the show, and yes I believe the leg thing would have made her very uncomfortable. Plus, she didn't really love him anyway. Lex is falling into her pattern, which will become more of an issue in later chapters.

 Thanks for the review Black!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/09/08 04:23 pm

Title: Six

HOT HOT HOT... love Lexie and Phillip together, seems that Phillip can open up to her.... I know things are not over with them just yet.

Author's Response: Philip can open up to her, especially about his leg. Not only is she a doctor, but she also a lot more mature than his previous girlfriends, and can handle imperfection a lot easier. And you're right, it's not over. That wouldn't be any fun. :)

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/09/08 08:51 am

Title: Six

i love this story i would have never put these two together im glad you did great update

Author's Response: Hey ellen! thanks so much for the review, I'm glad you like this. And I do like throwing odd couples together for soap fics, it's pretty much what I would do if I were running the show. Everybody would just go nuts. :)

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Date: 02/09/08 07:53 am

Title: Six

That Phillip is one determined young man. And I believe he's the one who speaks the truth.

I see Abe was pretty boring. Missionary position only, eh? Got a girlfriend who married a nerdy (but rich) guy and she said she had to shake that ish up. LOL

How old is Theo? I see Lexie has some serious guilt when it comes to him.

Very hot update. Thanks oh so much.



Author's Response:

Philip is determined, and intense. And very focused on Lexie. Abe is straight laced, by the book, which didn't really sit well with Lexie through their marriage. I haven't watched the show in ages, but Theo's pretty young in this story, around six maybe?  There is a guilt for Lexie, she's never been the greatest mom in the world, or a good wife.

Thanks so much for reading lovemboth!

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/09/08 07:31 am

Title: Six

DAMN I LOVE THIS STORY.  PHILLIP IS SO SMOOTH AND MAN OH MAN DOES HE HAVE MOVES.  THIS IS GETTING DEEP... PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP IT COMING!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks Hershey! I love writing Philip, and in this...well, he'd pretty much how I wished they'd write him on the show. Thanks so much for reading and the review!

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Date: 02/09/08 07:23 am

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