I love Fitzwilliam. What is Mary going to do with him, because he isn't going anywhere.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 30/09/09 05:25 am
Their little flirtations are so cute! Even I blush when she blushes.
Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping that their flirtations would be believeable, as well as Mary's responses.
Date: 14/07/09 06:46 am
I can't tell you how upset I was when I got to the end and the next button wasn't there! This story if fabulous please update soon. I too am a huge fan of Jane Austen and Regency literature/fiction! Great Work
Reviewer: storygirl10 Signed [Report This]Date: 12/07/09 09:13 pm
Loved the update. Please keep it coming.
Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/07/09 06:44 pm
The hunt is on. I don't like Elizabeth's comments to Mary, what is really behind that. Although no one has mentioned Mary's skin color, could that be the reasoning for Elizabeth's comments? Fitzwilliam is a charmer and I think his affections are true. Thanks for the update again.
Author's Response: I think Elizabeth was being sincere. Mary's color may have had a bit to do with it. I don't think Elizabeth is against the pair, rather, she knows society and the expectations placed on the Colonel as a second son and a member of the gentry. Just as she knew her and her sisters' marriage prospects were low due to their lack of wealth and that Colonel Fitzwilliam would not consider her as a bride (something he told her outright at Rosings), Elizabeth knows that Mary's color and status (she doesn't know her real father and is probably illigetimate) would also normally take her out of the running. But, this Col Fitzwilliam is a different one from the man we met in Pride and Prejudice. He is older and wiser and some of his priorities in life have shifted due to what he has seen. Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/09 06:32 pm