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Title: The Mess Inside

I really like Kat and Lil..I wish we say more of their relationship on show

Lil really does know Scotty and I like how she has his back

Her hidding in the bathroom reminds me of my job..I work with 4 other women and 215 men..they can work your damn nerves..LOL..the bathroom is sanctuary.



Author's Response:

Thanks!!  Kat and Lilly are an interesting pair to write.  For whatever reason, the two are difficult to put together in a scene, which is probably why the show doesn't do it that much.  I'm really not sure what it is; maybe it's because neither of the two are particularly open.  At any rate, they're hard to write together.  But very, very rewarding.

Lilly and Scotty, by contrast, are easy to write together.  They just flow, probably because they let their guard down around each other at least a little bit!

I'm really glad you're enjoying this story!  More soon!

Reviewer: Pashmina Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/08/09 12:35 am

Title: The Mess Inside

This story is just awesome!  LOL! I could really see this happening on the show because Scotty is kind of a ho!  Anyway, I love what you're doing and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

He really is, isn't he?  I think his heart's in the right place, but his pants aren't always. :)

 Glad you're enjoying this!  Thanks for the review, and I'll be posting more as soon as I can!

Reviewer: MickeyRos Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/09 01:30 am

Title: The Mess Inside

How is Scotty going to take this news?  You got Lil dead on, awkward, unsure what to say, but yet keeping an outwardly cool facade.  Great job!

Author's Response:

It'll be interesting, that's for sure! 

I'm so glad you like my Lilly.  She's the character that's the trickiest to get just right, but I'm really glad it worked!

Thanks so much for the review; more as soon as I can!

Reviewer: YHH Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/07/09 02:14 pm

Title: The Mess Inside

This story and the few chappy updates has gotten you into my favorite Author and Story categories.  Have I told u that I really like this story?  Well, I do!!! Kat and Scotty are so made for each other.  Man, I have read this story over and over again about 4 times and it gets better with each read!!!!  I have tried to catch Cold Case but I always miss it cuz I work at night, guess I will have to record it or get the series. It's sad that I may only watch their scenes when they are together; CURSE you for making me enjoy their relationship or lack there of LMAO!!!!

Thanks for a Wonderful beginning to what I believe will be a Great story!!!!! 

 



Author's Response:

Awww, really?  Thanks!  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story this much. 

Kat and Scotty are made for each other.  I originally shipped Scotty and Lilly (blasphemy, I know), but once I got to know Kat better, I realized she's a much better match for Scotty than Lilly is.

Here's the scene that started it all, in case you're curious...

Thank you so much for your continued enthusiastic support!  More as soon as I can!

Reviewer: Vie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/07/09 05:46 am

Title: The Mess Inside

Still loving it!! Just keep the updates coming.

Author's Response: Thank you!  More as soon as I can!

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/07/09 02:15 am

Title: The Mess Inside

Love the talk between them I can't wait for more

Author's Response: Thank you!  More as soon as I can!

Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/07/09 03:46 pm

Title: The Mess Inside

I really like the "girl talk" between Lilly and Kat. Lilly was straight foward, but not pushy. Kat showed some vulnerability, but still stayed in character.

Author's Response: Thank you!  Lilly is hard to get just right, and Vulnerable!Kat is even worse.  Glad they're both believable!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/07/09 05:46 am

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