Kat and Scotty becoming roommates is something I never even considered. Interesting ... ;)
Author's Response: It should prove an adventure! Thanks for the review!
Date: 29/08/09 01:18 am
The opening scenes had me cracking up! Demonic offspring?! LOL It was hilarious. I could just imagine a toddler holding a police division captive, everyone dancing to her tune. She’s got them wrapped around her little fingers. Even Vera though he’d never admit it.
So, they live together huh? Share the same bed you say. For…almost three years…but nothing’s going on, right? Hmpf! They’re so gone for each other it’s pathetic (in a good way)
That must’ve been one helluva sit-down to have with her 10-year old daughter who’s never had to share her mother with anyone, explaining all of the life changes in their family. (I’m glad Kat said Veronica would have to be okay with their living arrangements.) I’m thinking Veronica liked Valens but how did she react to their announcement and proposal? What type of relationship does Valens have with Veronica now?
Loved the update, still chuckling at Nicky putting on latex gloves and going after his demolished donut. Too funny.Author's Response:
That little girl is a handful, and, you're right, she's got Vera wrapped around her finger.
For detectives, these two aren't very bright. Hopefully they'll figure things out soon!
We'll explore a little bit of Veronica's reaction in the next chapter; she's met Scotty, but I think that's about it.
Glad you liked Vera and the gloves, and glad you liked the whole chapter! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed
[Report This]Date: 28/08/09 04:05 am
I love it really when kat said he was sleeping on the couch. The whold update was great
Author's Response:
These two are awesome. The more I write them, the more I love them! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed [Report This]Date: 27/08/09 05:16 pm
Roommates, huh? I love this story. You have captured the characters so well.
Will we get to see how Valens interacts with V and V's whole take on her new family?
Author's Response:
Yep! Roommates. That should prove interesting.
Glad you think I've captured the characters! I really love all of them.
Veronica will have a brief appearance in the next chapter, so we'll see what she has to say.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: YHH Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/09 04:06 pm
its sweet to watch scotty trying to be there but not cross boundaries so playing off her as to what he should do. its vulnerable and adorable.
i cant believe they've been sharing a bed this long though and no hanky panky's been going on. if i had that beautiful cuban in my bed every night my fingers would've gotten away from me once or twice. ;)
can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'm not sure I'd have been quite as virtuous as Kat seems to have been. At this point, though, I don't think she sees him as a beautiful Cuban so much as that annoying guy she works with who's the father of her child. Who, though annoying, is also very sweet, so perhaps she'll see that sometime soon!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: jacobella41 Signed [Report This]Date: 27/08/09 03:36 pm
Gosh I love this story!! You are doing a really great job with the development of their relationship.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! More to come soon!
[Report This]Date: 27/08/09 02:13 am
I like this chapter alot. Good Job.
Author's Response: Thank you! More soon!
[Report This]Date: 26/08/09 08:14 pm
Great update, I am loving this story
Author's Response: Thank you! More soon!
[Report This]Date: 26/08/09 10:16 am
They've been sleeping in the same bed for three years and nothing happend? I find that hard to believe!!!
Author's Response: I've learned that detectives are remarkably clueless. We'll see what happens. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 26/08/09 05:51 am