I love Cold Case, I missed most of the shows lat year, but I plan to get back into the new season. Wouldn't it be nice if they put them together.
Author's Response: It would, wouldn't it? I doubt we'll ever see it, but you never know! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 03/09/09 04:11 am
I absolutely love this story! Kat and Scotty are perfect for each other!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad! And yeah, they so are. More to come soon; thanks for the review!
Date: 02/09/09 09:10 am
I am sooo loving this story, please keep writing anf update really soon. i hate cliff hangers.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm so glad! I hate cliff hangers as a reader/viewer...but as a writer, they're kinda fun, in an evil sort of way. Don't worry, though, I won't make you wait too long. Thanks for the review!
Date: 02/09/09 06:43 am
Kat and Scotty becoming roommates is something I never even considered. Interesting ... ;)
Author's Response: It should prove an adventure! Thanks for the review!
Date: 29/08/09 01:18 am
The opening scenes had me cracking up! Demonic offspring?! LOL It was hilarious. I could just imagine a toddler holding a police division captive, everyone dancing to her tune. She’s got them wrapped around her little fingers. Even Vera though he’d never admit it.
So, they live together huh? Share the same bed you say. For…almost three years…but nothing’s going on, right? Hmpf! They’re so gone for each other it’s pathetic (in a good way)
That must’ve been one helluva sit-down to have with her 10-year old daughter who’s never had to share her mother with anyone, explaining all of the life changes in their family. (I’m glad Kat said Veronica would have to be okay with their living arrangements.) I’m thinking Veronica liked Valens but how did she react to their announcement and proposal? What type of relationship does Valens have with Veronica now?
Loved the update, still chuckling at Nicky putting on latex gloves and going after his demolished donut. Too funny.Author's Response:
That little girl is a handful, and, you're right, she's got Vera wrapped around her finger.
For detectives, these two aren't very bright. Hopefully they'll figure things out soon!
We'll explore a little bit of Veronica's reaction in the next chapter; she's met Scotty, but I think that's about it.
Glad you liked Vera and the gloves, and glad you liked the whole chapter! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/09 04:05 am
I love it really when kat said he was sleeping on the couch. The whold update was great
Author's Response:
These two are awesome. The more I write them, the more I love them! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed [Report This]Date: 27/08/09 05:16 pm
Roommates, huh? I love this story. You have captured the characters so well.
Will we get to see how Valens interacts with V and V's whole take on her new family?
Author's Response:
Yep! Roommates. That should prove interesting.
Glad you think I've captured the characters! I really love all of them.
Veronica will have a brief appearance in the next chapter, so we'll see what she has to say.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: YHH Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/09 04:06 pm
its sweet to watch scotty trying to be there but not cross boundaries so playing off her as to what he should do. its vulnerable and adorable.
i cant believe they've been sharing a bed this long though and no hanky panky's been going on. if i had that beautiful cuban in my bed every night my fingers would've gotten away from me once or twice. ;)
can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'm not sure I'd have been quite as virtuous as Kat seems to have been. At this point, though, I don't think she sees him as a beautiful Cuban so much as that annoying guy she works with who's the father of her child. Who, though annoying, is also very sweet, so perhaps she'll see that sometime soon!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: jacobella41 Signed [Report This]Date: 27/08/09 03:36 pm
Gosh I love this story!! You are doing a really great job with the development of their relationship.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! More to come soon!
[Report This]Date: 27/08/09 02:13 am
I like this chapter alot. Good Job.
Author's Response: Thank you! More soon!
[Report This]Date: 26/08/09 08:14 pm
Great update, I am loving this story
Author's Response: Thank you! More soon!
[Report This]Date: 26/08/09 10:16 am
They've been sleeping in the same bed for three years and nothing happend? I find that hard to believe!!!
Author's Response: I've learned that detectives are remarkably clueless. We'll see what happens. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 26/08/09 05:51 am
A little late with this review but then I always have been a big procastinator. I absolutely love Scotty and Kat's daughter. She just sounds adorable. :) I think Kat handled the Scotty situation perfectly and I look forward to seeing how they interact with each other now that they are expecting a child together.
Author's Response:
Nothing wrong with procrastinating!
I'm a big fan of the little one myself. She'll appear more in later chapters.
Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: MickeyRos Signed [Report This]Date: 26/08/09 04:07 am
Aww I loved it!! Scotty ranaway was not what was expected but it was quite expected for Kat to go where he was. I like how he really wants to do this right and be there every step of the way with Kat and this unborn child. I just know that him being there is going make their relationship grow into something more stronger and possibly a relationship.
I have to thank you for this story because you introduced me to the Cold Case show and I love it. I just watched the eppy where Will got shot. I think all of the charactes have a strong bond and friendship but there was one that stood out to me and that was Lil and Will. Was Will initially Lilly's partner because those scenes where she kind of hesitated about going to the hospital to see him spoke volumes. Then when she did go, she was just sitting there looking at him. (I really liked that part). I have a question...was Lilly crying because of her father being there and if so why? Or, was she cryijng because sje almost lost Will?
I Know, I'm deep into the show now. :)
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Scotty's being there will definitely earn brownie points with Kat.
Oooh, yay, you're watching the show! I'm glad you're liking it! To answer your question, Lilly and Jeffries were never partners. Her hesitation in going to the hospital and her subsequent breakdown stem from her own shooting a couple of seasons ago, which she never truly dealt with.
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: Vie Signed [Report This]Date: 19/08/09 09:51 pm
awww.. my fav chapter so far. Love the real adult conversation between these two.
Author's Response: Thank you!! They're growing up already!
[Report This]Date: 17/08/09 12:54 am
WOW..great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! This is one of my favorite chapters, too!
Date: 17/08/09 12:41 am
I really like Kat and Lil..I wish we say more of their relationship on show
Lil really does know Scotty and I like how she has his back
Her hidding in the bathroom reminds me of my job..I work with 4 other women and 215 men..they can work your damn nerves..LOL..the bathroom is sanctuary.
Author's Response:
Thanks!! Kat and Lilly are an interesting pair to write. For whatever reason, the two are difficult to put together in a scene, which is probably why the show doesn't do it that much. I'm really not sure what it is; maybe it's because neither of the two are particularly open. At any rate, they're hard to write together. But very, very rewarding.
Lilly and Scotty, by contrast, are easy to write together. They just flow, probably because they let their guard down around each other at least a little bit!
I'm really glad you're enjoying this story! More soon!
Reviewer: Pashmina Signed [Report This]Date: 17/08/09 12:35 am
Funny how they were both trying to take credit for what happened. Cant wait to see when Kat finds out she is pregnant.
Author's Response:
Yeah, that's those two; always taking the blame. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: Pashmina Signed [Report This]Date: 17/08/09 12:26 am
Loving where this is headed. Nothing like a little liquor to bring out some truths.
Love how close Lil and Scotty are even after him sleeping with her sister thing.
Author's Response:
Yeah, that whole Christina debacle seems to be water under the bridge, which is good. There were some awkward times for them.
Glad you're enjoying the story!
Reviewer: Pashmina Signed [Report This]Date: 16/08/09 08:17 pm
I am liking this. Love an insight into Kat that we don't get to see on the show...and it goes with out saying that I love Scotty.
Author's Response:
I love him, too, and the more I write Kat, the more I love her. The show has created this fabulous character and then does nothing with her, which is infuriating, but that means there's more for me to discover when I dig around in her head!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Pashmina Signed
[Report This]Date: 16/08/09 08:07 pm
I love the little girl great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! She's a handful, isn't she?
Date: 15/08/09 09:50 pm
that was a cute update. I read in your author's note that while the lines are blurred concerning the relationship between Scotty and Lilly in the series that's not the case in this story. But so far the only real perspective of Scotty that we get comes from Lily. and while it gives a good look into who he is, there seems to be more going on then just partners. I may be reading the situation wrong. I realize that partners spend a lot of time together on the job and have to depend on on another and this spills over into their personal lives. However I would like to see more interaction from between the main characters, and how they see each other. I really like this story and am looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Stay tuned. There's a lot more Scotty/Kat-ness to come.
[Report This]Date: 15/08/09 07:59 pm
i've only seen one episode of this show and would hardly consider myself apart of the fandom. but i'm quite taken with your story. i love the flashbacks and the present day scenario in equal meausre and i can't wait until the two synch and see where you will go with the story after that because hopefully you will continue. i'm enjoying it so much! :)
Author's Response: Oh, wow, thanks! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!! And don't worry, there's lots more to come. Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 11/08/09 02:57 am
I'm not surprise that Scott walked away the way that he did, and neither should Kay be. I liked how you took him to the bridge and think about Elisa, but come to the inevitable conclusion that Kat was having his baby and that is where is focus needs to be.
Author's Response:
No, I don't think anyone's surprised, except possibly Scotty, having gotten such a huge shock. Elisa was a huge part of his life, but you're right, his focus needs to be on the present. I think he'll get there!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 11/08/09 12:05 am
Dang Valens, you just walked away?! I know this is sexist but…MEN! They can’t handle the truth! Urgh. That’s all I have to say about that. LOL How clueless was Scotty? What does he do for a living? Lol I’m not gonna rag on him too bad, he’s a very sweet guy with a heart of gold. If I had to get pregnant from a one-night stand, he’d be the only man I’d want to be my baby’s daddy. Actually, I’d want him as my lifetime partner. Miller…don’t let that man slip away.
How’d they work together during her pregnancy? When did the crew find out about their ‘little secret’? More importantly, are they undercover lovers? (Undercover…get it? Police officers…undercover…lovers…? Uh, never mind. Lol)
Please give us more Valens and Miller. I’m ready to meet their adorable pain-in-the-ass.
Author's Response:
Well, in his defense, it was quite a shock. Scotty's a detective, yeah, but he's amazingly clueless when it comes to real life. You're right, though, he is a sweetheart, and I have a feeling he'll come around.
More pregnancy flashbacks are ahead, and you'll get to meet the adorable pain-in-the-ass next chapter!
Thanks so much for the review! More soon!
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: 10/08/09 04:28 am