Wow, that was so not the response I thought Scotty would have. I mean to just walk away like that. I don't see Kat taking that well.
Gotta say I do love how clueless Scotty was when Kat was telling him she was pregnant. Hee, I would think pregnancy was the most obvious answer given the clues she was dropping. LOL!
I look forward to seeing what happens next.
Author's Response:
Clueless Scotty is so adorable, isn't he? I think this was just so far beyond the realm of possibility in his mind that he a) didn't even consider it, and b) didn't react well. Scotty doesn't seem to be the sort who likes surprises, and this was a big one.
That said, yeah, I don't think Kat's going to like this much. We'll see if they can sort things out in the next chapter.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: MickeyRos Signed [Report This]Date: 09/08/09 11:14 pm
Oh Scotty he could had handle that better love it any way
Author's Response: He could have, but he was handed a major, major shock. We'll see if he redeems himself at all next chapter.
Date: 09/08/09 11:05 pm
Great update! Guess what? I have started watching the show and I guess by fate or accident, I saw the episode where Lily got shot. You stated in a earlier chappy that Lily and Scotty's relationship could be something more if looked at in a certain way (paraphrasing here :p). I think it depends on how each indvidual sees it. In that particular eppy, I got that their relationship is more than friendly or casual but not in the sense of something sensual more like family; does that make sense? I don't know but that was only one eppys of a few that I've watched in it's entirety. I like their relationship but I think as soon as it crosses the line into something else then it may get, blah....may not be any more stories to tell. Also, can I just say that I love when he says if you need me just say "Hey", again paraphrasing...I LOVED that. Even though I like Scotty/Lily, I'm loving Scotty/Kat even more and is rooting for that coupling; I just see so much potential there. I'm rambling, can't wait for the next chappy. :-P
Author's Response:
Oooh, I'm glad you've started watching the show!
Scotty/Lilly is wonderfully ambiguous; it's clearly more than "just friendship," but not exactly romantic, either. Whatever it is, it's definitely less so in s5 and s6, and s6 is when Scotty/Kat kinda takes off.
Oddly, in that episode you watched, there's a scene where Scotty and Kat are at the front doors of PPD and Scotty's wondering where Lilly is (this is right before he goes to her place and finds out about her mother), and that's the scene I had in mind when I wrote this chapter. My beta reader has a wonderful screencap where the expression on Scotty's face could easily be the "did she just say she's pregnant?" face.
Scotty/Kat definitely has lots of potential. Stay tuned...next chapter will be from Kat's perspective.
Reviewer: Vie Signed [Report This]Date: 09/08/09 04:55 am
This story is just awesome! LOL! I could really see this happening on the show because Scotty is kind of a ho! Anyway, I love what you're doing and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
He really is, isn't he? I think his heart's in the right place, but his pants aren't always. :)
Glad you're enjoying this! Thanks for the review, and I'll be posting more as soon as I can!
Reviewer: MickeyRos Signed [Report This]Date: 02/08/09 01:30 am
How is Scotty going to take this news? You got Lil dead on, awkward, unsure what to say, but yet keeping an outwardly cool facade. Great job!
Author's Response:
It'll be interesting, that's for sure!
I'm so glad you like my Lilly. She's the character that's the trickiest to get just right, but I'm really glad it worked!
Thanks so much for the review; more as soon as I can!
Reviewer: YHH Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/07/09 02:14 pm
This story and the few chappy updates has gotten you into my favorite Author and Story categories. Have I told u that I really like this story? Well, I do!!! Kat and Scotty are so made for each other. Man, I have read this story over and over again about 4 times and it gets better with each read!!!! I have tried to catch Cold Case but I always miss it cuz I work at night, guess I will have to record it or get the series. It's sad that I may only watch their scenes when they are together; CURSE you for making me enjoy their relationship or lack there of LMAO!!!!
Thanks for a Wonderful beginning to what I believe will be a Great story!!!!!
Author's Response:
Awww, really? Thanks! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story this much.
Kat and Scotty are made for each other. I originally shipped Scotty and Lilly (blasphemy, I know), but once I got to know Kat better, I realized she's a much better match for Scotty than Lilly is.
Here's the scene that started it all, in case you're curious...
Thank you so much for your continued enthusiastic support! More as soon as I can!
Reviewer: Vie Signed [Report This]Date: 31/07/09 05:46 am
Still loving it!! Just keep the updates coming.
Author's Response: Thank you! More as soon as I can!
Date: 31/07/09 02:15 am
Love the talk between them I can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you! More as soon as I can!
Date: 30/07/09 03:46 pm
I so love this story and the two of them are great together
Author's Response:
Thank you! I didn't know whether or not they'd work until I wrote them together, but I'm a believer now!
Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/07/09 03:37 pm
I really like the "girl talk" between Lilly and Kat. Lilly was straight foward, but not pushy. Kat showed some vulnerability, but still stayed in character.
Author's Response: Thank you! Lilly is hard to get just right, and Vulnerable!Kat is even worse. Glad they're both believable!
Date: 30/07/09 05:46 am
Dang Scotty must think he dodged a bullet there. Can't wait until Kat throwing up becomes a regular thing...waiting to see the fireworks cause you deprived me of them with this chapter.
Author's Response:
That regular thing will make an appearance in the next chapter...
Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/07/09 09:31 pm
I know the real reason for not hand shake at the end, if they would have touched each other again it would have been on. I can just see the kiss in my head!!!
Author's Response:
Oooooh, maybe! I never really thought of that, in all honesty. But, yeah, kablooie.
Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 27/07/09 05:36 am
Loving Kat and Scotty. Can not wait to 'see' this little one.
Author's Response: Awwww, thanks! I'm so glad!!
Date: 27/07/09 03:48 am
This is good, I like it. From narrative to dialogue to cast....everything flowed very nicely. I don't watch Cold Case and with the way you're writing your story, I don't have to. Your plot structure and the persona of the characters, is descriptive enough. I love Scotty and Kat as the non-couple couple as well as the parents of a toddler. Not to mention they're colleagues, law enforcement no less.
Very interesting indeed.
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you so much! Your encouragement means a lot! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: 27/07/09 03:47 am
This is a nice story. I like their wild passionate drunkin night of bliss, LOL!! Scotty is just all kinds of awesome! I have to watch ths show if his sense of humor is like his, I am going t be hooked!!!! PS, is there a pic of their daughter?
Author's Response:
Awww, thanks! I'm glad you like Scotty. He's my favorite character, definitely. He's not this funny on the show, mostly because they don't let him be, but he definitely has his moments. It's worth checking out!
I have a picture of her in my head; I'll have to hunt for one. I'll definitely post it when I find one!
Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: Vie Signed [Report This]Date: 27/07/09 02:16 am
Love it, love it, love it.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm so glad!!
Date: 21/07/09 01:21 am
Scott is so gonna get it when Kat finds out he told everyone about their drunken night together.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I can't imagine her being thrilled about that.
Thanks for the review! I'll post the next chapter as soon as I can!
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/07/09 06:50 am
I really like this story. I have only watched the show a few times and I am pretty sure if they were like you write them, I would be a fanatic.
Author's Response: Awwww, thanks! I love the show, but they really don't give these guys enough to do. I'm glad you're liking the way I write them!
Date: 20/07/09 06:18 am
Awesome update. I like that he's finally starting to realize that he doesn't regret or feel shameful about what happend between him and Kat. They needed eachother at that moment, and they probably still need each other.
Author's Response: Yeah, I think there's a lot more going on in Scotty's brain than perhaps he realizes. It'll be fun to see him figure it out. And yes, they do still need each other. Thanks for the review!
Date: 20/07/09 02:35 am
Keep going
Author's Response: Thanks! Will do! Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/07/09 02:03 am
Can't wait until the next chapter. I love Kat's character. If only they would give her a real romance on the show.
Author's Response:
I know! And that annoying ADA is not, IMO, a real romance. Oh, well. There's always fanfic.
Thanks so much for the review; more soon!
Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed [Report This]Date: 13/07/09 06:59 am
Kat and Scotty have a little girl together, but they're not together. That sucks, big time!
Author's Response: Well, stay tuned. :) Thanks so much for the review; more soon!
Date: 13/07/09 04:52 am
Thanks for the story. I haven't watched this show before. Sounds very interesting.
Author's Response:
Thank you! It's a great show, but unfortunately, Kat hardly ever gets story lines. It's worth checking out, though; the six detectives really play off each other well. That's what I try to capture when I write them. And Scotty's delicious. (Go check out Danny Pino's IMDB page if you want to know what he looks like).
Thanks for the review! More soon!
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 13/07/09 04:28 am
I love Scotty & Kat together they make a great couple, they play off each other...
What do you have planned next for them? Looking forward to it.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I have a blast writing them together.
Lots of adventures are ahead for them, I'll tell you that much! Thanks for the review; more soon!
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/07/09 08:41 pm
Great start . I love cold case I always thought that they( scotty and kat) would make a wonderul couple.More please.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Scotty and Kat would make a fabulous couple; maybe the show will eventually figure it out.
Thanks for the review; more soon!
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/07/09 06:35 pm