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Title: Chapter 17

Awsome update.

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 02:17 am

Title: Chapter 17

Yes!  She's going to take him back!  They are wonderful together.  Mr. Smart Country and Ms. Snart Accomplished.  Any many willing to go on National TV and put his heart and his big mistake in front of millions to get a woman back....deserves to get her back!

Thanks for the Update...looking forward to the next. 

Nyeesha



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 01:44 am

Title: Chapter 17

Yes! Yes! Yes! I'm so happy that they have a reunited. Love them!

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 12:55 am

Title: Chapter 17

make him suffer and work double hard taylor! great update

Author's Response: thanks....

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 12:43 am

Title: Chapter 17

Ahhh!!! She is going to give him a second chance...hey it wouldn't be the name of the story if she didn't right.  LOL!

I was crying and laughing my bee hive off @ this update. :D

I am glad she socked his butt in the jaw and she is right he better be glad it was just her jaw that she hit.

I love the support from both sides of the family.

Brad is a straight up fool and funny as hell.

Donovan baby you girl is coming I hope. Nah, you could compete with that one a man that is whipped and missing his girl and willing to do almost, partically anything to get his woman's forgiven and love back.

Great update please continue.  Thanks



Author's Response: Thanks for your honest review and I hope you keep reading.  There's a little bit more left to be said.  Not much, but there is some...

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 12:35 am

Title: Chapter 17

still not matt's biggest fan but whatever. I guess there really is no right way to make up for what he did. At least she can hold it over his head for whenever he gets on her nerves.

Author's Response: I'm sorry that you're not a fan.  I thank you for reading it though.

Reviewer: g Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 12:19 am

Title: Chapter 17

I'm glad she is giving him a second chance, but making him work for it. I thought her parents were going to give her a hard time about it was surprised when dad said they had talked to his parents and they should try and work it out. Great update!

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/08/09 11:39 pm

Title: Characters

Chica!!!!

I have been checking this site like a dang CRACK FIEND, all weekend long...

For this being your FIRST TIME publicly posting a story you are definitely bringing it!!!

This chapter made me laugh... Taylor's dad is a hoot! All the text messages Matt kept getting from his friends, brother and Donovan had me giggling like a loon at my desk... I have a funny feeling the conversation with David is not going to go so well... You never know how people really feel until they are confronted with the stuff they don't like too close to home...

Glad she is giving him a 2nd chance and I agree he definitely has a lot of time to make up for, that punch to the jaw (HA HA HA!!!! - Sorry Matt but you act stupid sometimes it has to be knocked right back into you!)...

Ok so now I need another fix... You completely spoiled us last week with all the frequent updates... I am back on CRACK HEAD mode... I need my "CH 18 FIX"!!!!

GREAT UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response: Thank you ma'am.  Working on Chapter 18 right now!

Reviewer: spanishfly69 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/08/09 10:55 pm

Title: Chapter 17

well she going to give that ass a second chances lol but her dad and mom right to try it out and if it doenst work unleast she know she gave her all into it. but hope she chose Donovan sexy self. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Donovan just isn't the man for my Taylor....

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/08/09 10:04 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Oops. You snuck a chapter by me.

O-kay. Matthew has put it all out there... nationwide, no less. Personally? I'd strangle his ass. The public explanation, apology, and regret were okay, but now everyone and her mommy will be weighing in with their unsolicited opinions and advise... in a huge way. It shouldn't be about them, just Taylor and Matt.

You can't let Taylor suffer alone. Matt needs to share the grief. Can't a little old lady call him a jerk and hit him with her purse or something?? Just kidding. I'm conflicted, as I imagine Taylor is too.

What if it's a slow news week and the Internet and other networks pick up the story, raising the issue for public discussion?

Let's see what Taylor does next... how long it takes her to call back her mother. ;) 



Author's Response: I appreciate your suggestions and your review... I hopw my new chapter answers some of this...

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/08/09 10:26 am

Title: Chapter 16

I think the Cowboy just solidified himself in Taylor's heart, how can she not give him another chance after that. Then again, her mom did call him "that boy."

Author's Response: I hopw you like the new update.  Her mom is a softie too... LOL

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/08/09 03:49 am

Title: Chapter 16

What’s nagging me about Donovan? I can’t put my finger on it. He’s handsome, a gentleman, intelligent; he’s perfect. So what’s the problem?  The problem is he’s just not the man that gives her butterflies whenever he’s near.  Only Matt has that effort on her heart. You can’t help who you love.

People make mistakes. It happens.  Matt’s right, he can’t change the past nor can he erase it.  The only thing he can do is apologize. Taylor knows her man, she knows he’s sincere.  The question is will she remain angry and continue to exist or forgive his stupid ass and live again, with him?

Very cute story. 

Author's Response: Thanks for reading.  You will see one of your lines from this review in the next chapter.  thanks for reading!

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/08/09 03:34 am

Title: Characters

Matt, came hard like a real man should..I don't think it was smart to put Taylor on front street like that..Meaning he should have not named the woman or where she worked...I'm sure he wasn't thinking about her being harrassed by the Media, family and friends after he but all their business out there like that...

If I remember correctly I do think I read that the CEO was grooming Taylor to take over the busines and he thought of her as a daughter...I'm sure he will be shocked to find out that Taylor was the reason Matt wanted the job. How will he feel about Matt after he hears why he really broke the engagement to Taylor?

Looking forward to the next chapter...



Author's Response: The CEO will address them in Chapter 18... Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/08/09 08:45 pm

Title: Chapter 16

It was cool that Matt brought up the issue of race and marry to expose the issue of what is at stake in the players' career, however, when he threw out Taylor's name and putting their business out on national tv, it was 'UNCOOL" to me.  I would have been just as embarrassed as Taylor.  It puts her in an awkward position. UGH!  One thing is for sure ... now she is forced to deal with this situation again!  Matt played his hand alright. I guess he didn't have a choice. LOL

Great story!!



Author's Response: You know I didnt think it through and she is livid about

Reviewer: alphaangel Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/08/09 11:12 am

Title: Chapter 16

I guess Matt ain't playing...lol...dude went at that raw...without the vaseline!!!

He's lain his cards and his heart on the table...hung all out to sundry...and in the most public way possible...Taylor's weakening...I know how maddening that can be...but the big doofus has her heart...now he's got her whole family and her friends calling...demanding...now what is she going to do...

Even Donovan knows the deal...how much longer...and how much faster can Taylor keep running before she has to face her heart...and Matt...

Love this story...already in need of another 'fix'...um, I mean update...great story!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking with me... Your fix has been delivered... LOL

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/08/09 06:41 am

Title: Characters

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Not only did he go there but he went HARD!!!!

And you mentioned that work clause...

OMG!!!! (sorry I keep typing that but that update was GREAT!) What does that mean for Matt and Taylor??? What is David the main boss going to do??? Are Dani and Donovan destined to meet since Taylor talked about an office opening in South Florida???

Donovan knows not only did the "cowboy" take out his gun and shoot... "Its game over!!!!"

Wondering whats going to happen now?

Ok I am a crack head fiend like another poster... Hope you update again...

WOO HOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response: David is going to address it.  Dani and Donovan... hmmm that's a thought....

Reviewer: spanishfly69 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/08/09 06:20 am

Title: Characters

Still not feeling Matt one bit. He can be sorry all he wants. Will never justify what he did.

Author's Response:

I'm so sorry.  I don't know what else to tell you to sway you over to his side.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/08/09 05:28 am

Title: Chapter 16

Text from Donovan: It seems like the Cowboy has drawn his pistol out...



Well donovan said it best... great update.

Author's Response: I'm glad you guys liked that line....

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/08/09 05:17 am

Title: Characters

Wow! Can't wait to see what the consequences for Matt's public declaration will be. I'm still tossing up whether it was a very smart & courageous move or thoughtless & stupid move on his part. But kudos for putting himself out there like that, all vulnerable & shit, on national TV no less!! Hope it all works out for him... eventually, cos the bitch in me still wants him to do the belly-crawl over hot coals (hehe)

Poor Taylor. Hope she doesn't go all postal. Girl, take a couple of Prozac & call me in the morning

Great update, as always :D



Author's Response: She's not going Postal... LOL... I think its time to take them to another level...

Reviewer: Miele Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/08/09 04:32 am

Title: Characters

Just read the latest update.    Loved the text from Donovan:  "Looks like Cowboy got his pistol out." 

This is really turning out to be a great story.

 Thanks for keeping with it.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: willow Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/08/09 03:24 am

Title: Chapter 16

Well alrighty then...growm man came to play..leave the kids at home!! I liked that Mr. Matt..very much!! That was on point and Mat brought it home..he earned a lot of points with me ..I hope it helped him out some with Taylor!!Fingers crossed!!

Loving this sweetie...you are on a roll!!!



Author's Response:

thanks...more tomorrow

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/08/09 02:47 am

Title: Chapter 15

Oh please forgive him Taylor..make him beg and plead and maybe even bleed but forgive him!

Matt loves the real Taylor , he is a grown amn in love with a grown woman.not child with a lust crush like Donovan!!

Yeah her heart says yes,,,so her mouth needs to say yes to..of course after he suffers more..rotfl!!



Author's Response: shes getting there i think

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/08/09 02:37 am

Title: Chapter 16

Do we get pictures of Dani & Chad and Keith?

Well Well Well...Matt has drawn out all the guns in his arsonal :D I am speechless don't know what to say on that one I was about like Tay if I had some beverage I would have choked it out too.

I loved the Text from Tay's Sister "DAYUM, girl...You still got it like that?  Call me!" That was the funniest.

I wonder what Kerrington is going to have to say about this huge confession.

Great update....I'm greedy more please.



Author's Response: I'll put some pics up soon... It's getting ready to be interesting

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/08/09 02:34 am

Title: Chapter 16

I have to day that I like Matt's move there...go Matt just put it all out there.  LOL Thanks for a great read but they have to get through that clause about no fraternizing between coworkers. 

Author's Response: something tells me they will work through it

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/08/09 01:35 am

Title: Chapter 16

Well, he went big. He manned up and owned up. In front of the world no less. The trust issues are still there, he's not getting past those, but its definite progress. 

Author's Response: The trust issues are not gone that easily....

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/08/09 01:18 am

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